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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it but must say that I miss angel's action. .can't help it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi you rock girl...
Damn this chapter was so good...all a mixture of adventure, fun, romance and everything... Literally everything...right from the beginning to the end...

Maddy saving shivani was so awesome... And then the adventurous ride...he is definitely not as good and law abiding a citizen as shivani considered him to be... And he was just riding circles so that he could be with her..wow man what a progress...from being a lamp post to this stage...damn that's cool

And then the true Maddy revealed himself in front of shivani... Our fun loving charming Maddy was back again...yay...and shivani loved it...and she is already so obsessed with him and she herself agrees upon it... This is gonna be great...

Then shivani in Maddy's clothes feeling as if she was wearing him... And then Maddy straightforwardly seeking the permission to kiss her...and she agreed...after all it was just like itching...:P:P...and then their first kiss...nothing even close to itching..:P:P...and Maddy teaching her what kissing was actually like...lol

But then she left...but she will return for sure...she will have to...after all she herself admitted that she is obsessed with him...so soon she will...it's just that we'll have to wait for sometime...so waiting eagerly for the next chapter... Till then love ya and take care dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
First i am really sorry for late reply for third chapter dear. Third chapter is funny. I was laughing in whole chapter. Swara thinks that maddy is in love with boy that was epic. Bozo is also funny he thinks that maddy gets affect cause of swasan. Only sanskar thinking practically. Now comes to fourth chapter is so romantic lovely. I also loved bikes so i fel love with maddys bike. First kiss omg. Loved whole chapter. Do continue soon waiting.
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Posted: 9 years ago
OYE HOYE 😳
Main mar jaawa ...
So sweet and cute Update ...
Maddy met his Druggie ...
Loved it ...
Continue Soon ...
Thanks for the PM ... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi u rock man! Ssly!
I jst love my maddy
Poor thing hez sooo lost with all this crazy love!
Cnt wait fr the nxt update!! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi love...😊
What a fantastic chapter...😉

Soo finally dark one meets the darkest.😆..(u can decide yourself who is more darker)😉...ilove them both...even they belong to dark world.😳..stilll...coming to update it was sooo sweet.😳😊..their first meeting...n the way he hid her behind him...to protect her from police...n that speedy bike ride hmmm...👏

Finally he took her to his house...😲maddy is sooo crazy.😕..after making her comfortable n at ease..he asked for the most unexpected thing..😲.KISS...im sooo shocked.. 😕n she agreed.. im sooo dead now🤢🤢...shivani n maddy...(MANI)...kissed...ohhh☺️

Im soo blushy blushy..☺️

Waiting for next update soon babes.🤪

Have a joyful holiday n safe return...muahhh

Love
Talia
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nimmi🤗
It was amazing update yaar😃.

Don't tell me Maddy actually considered Sanskaar's idea😲. According to me Sanskaar's idea was crazy😆. Checking prices of such stuff and all. And of couse Swara was right😃. We Girls are always right 😳😃.

Nimmi Maddy's monologues always makes me laugh😃, even in not so funny situation. He is crazy guy🤪. And you know what I am already waiting for his grand proposal to Shivani😳. Or would Shivani initate the proposal?

Maddy's thoughts on Shivani's eyes was funny😆. But loved how he was admiring her eyes and even her voice😳. He is totally smitten by her. Did he really thought to ask Dammu and Apte about such issue🤣. He is mad😆.

Loved the moments between Maddy and Shivani😃. Right from their eyelock, to Maddy giving her his jacket, both of them smiling at each other. It was romantic but funny too.

I loved Shivani's monolouges too😊. She was so happy and releived to see Maddy back. I am really loving this girl. She wanted to sing and dance when she saw Maddy😆. I like they way they both were silently admiring each others eyes.

Maddy and Shivani had a sweet first interaction😊. Both of them were quite smitten and in awe of each other. Both were behaving like teenagers in love😳. It was both cute and sweet. Our Angel and kitten were quite at loggerheads in their first meeting😆😃.

Maddy is crazy in love😃. In very first meeting, he invited her to his home😲. That whole reading and understanding each others expression part was amazing😊. I mean they just met and they have so much compatibility.

What's with boys and their love for the vehicles😆. Sanskaar was also crazy about his cars. Hope Maddy let Shivani ride his bike later. I loved that bike ride😃. Bike ride lasted for whole 2 hours😲. Maddy is awesome😃.

Maddy's owns a cool house😳. It was totally Maddy's style of home. So Shivani got to know about Maddy's goofy side, and also about his self praising qualities😆.

"I am my favourite" - This sentence totally suits our Maddy😃👍🏼.

I am so happy to know that both Sanskaar-Swara and Maddy have their own room in each others home(that too in their own preferable style). They are the best trio⭐️.

Awww.. Totally loved the way Maddy was admiring Shivani. But woah... that kiss was totally unexpected😲. Maddy is really crazy guy. And What was that "kissing and itching"🤣. These both are crazy and insane😆.

That kiss was hot☺️. And also sweet at the same time😃.

Lets see how destiny moves this crazy love story forward😊. Here, Maddy thinks that this love story is possible and Shivani thinks just opposite.

Thanks for this update Nimmi😃. It was really very good😃.

And Enjoy your vacation Nimmi.
Take care and have a safe journey😳

Lots and lots of love🤗

Edited by navyasingh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update 👏
Waiting for your next update
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Darling Nimmi,
🤗🤗🤗🤗

Just when I thought life could not get better after Angels - you managed to turn that idea on its head and give us 'Hounds' which is all about Maddy (I did dare ask for more after you did not kill him so this is manna from story heaven)

So we have Maddy - an insanely good looking, charming, polished, out and out gentleman (🤣🤣🤣 - he seriously believes himself to be that) falling in love with a tall girl (good for him - does not have to lean to kiss her 🤣) -

So Maddy has a conversion with his inner voice - not that anything good comes out of it. Back to square one - what would he do with his heart falling for a 'maleficient fairy' - coming from him. She notices him and considers him sweet... yukk (Maddy should die, faint at least😉)

Swara' reaction at Maddy's denial of there being a girl - she doesn't mind if it is a guy - what a blow, Maddy, what a blow to his manliness (nothing against anyone, seriously just stating Maddy's point)

Chapter 4 - beautiful , no comments possible (I love destiny too - for making write such lovely stories)

love,
Nyna

Happy journey - will miss you (okay - the updates!)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bahuth acha laga Nimmie iss story padkar... From the beginning itself mujhe Maddy HIMYM ki Barney jaise lagte dhe. Now jab Maddy ko pyaar hua tab bhi mujhe aise hi lagte hei.
So Maddy's love is an addict. Ab kya usse qoh pyaar milenge. Read all chapters in a go,,,,,,,,,Waiting for more updates.😊

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