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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Nice...
SO swasan and Bozo and Maddy discussing about the girl..
great..

Destiny will surely play its game again..
continue soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
beautiful & lovely update...,poor maddy but love the whole family of theirs
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
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Sorry Nimmi, my comment is not posting. Will try again tomorrow.

Sree.

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Finally Swasan and Maddy are back together 🥳. I never thought you will bring them in so this was a pleasant treat for me and I'm .

I loved the talk between the trio. Swara doesn't mind whether its a girl, boy or even i its an alien. as long as her friend is happy. Sanskar wanted a sister but is fine with whomever his brother choses.

Loved Sanskar's warning to Maddy about Swara's ammunitions. Afterall he is her victim, he should know better. Poor guy who was no 1 assasin had no defense against his kitten's ammunitions😉

Bozo is still afraid of Sanskar, huh??!! Well he first hand saw what the guy is capable of. He is bound to be afraid. But the funny thing is that he is best friends with the mini version of Sanskar. And Maddy does have that charm to attract people and he did leave an impression on Bozo during their first meeting unlike Sanskar. And he helps them out on freelancing. Nice

Swara is as usual understanding and crazy. She was actually mourning with the guy for his wrong love story.

Maddy's outburst was awesome. And he is right to blame these two love birds for sickening him with their love sickness, crazy, infectious love.😆 His love story is so wrong as he looks like and angel infront of his lady love where as he wanted to be the bad guy.

Sanskar - love this dialogue "Why don't you talk about on going rates of hashish, heroin, ganja, cocaine? I've got good quality beer in the cabinet. Take it to her as a gift. And.." He seems to be the only guy who has some sense left and is trying to help him in real sense.

The girl misses him too... Good. Next chapter will they confront. Please make this girl talk nicely to my Maddy.😳

Love

Sree

P.S. Forgot to ask. Does Dida, Ady and Pari know about Sanskar's real profession? I meant the one before he took up landscape photography as a profession.
Edited by Sree8410 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Chapter 3

Nimmi🤗

Oh no I am late. Really sorry for that Nimmi😳.

This chapter was so funny and hilarious😃. I was constantly grinning and laughing throughout the chapter.

And look who do we have here - our Angel and Kitten😃. I was missing them a lot😳. And also my fav trio together❤️.

Have to say this Swara is quite blunt😆. She came straight to the point. Maddy did gave a good cover up but of course not good enough for Swara and Sanskaar.

Girl, Guy, Alien - These two are crazy🤣.

Maddy have you ever heard of the term "The lady doth protest too much"😉😆. But poor Maddy😊. Being totally grilled by Swara and Sanskaar.

Sanskaar is so well about his kitten's sneaky ways😉. So warning Maddy about it. I cracked up that whole thing😆. Even so called top assassins are scared by Swara's ammunition😎😆

Ha.. I knew Sanskaar will be happy by the situation😈. I loved how he was teasing Maddy😆. Nimmi, I feel so happy while reading about Swara , Sanskaar and Maddy talking, enjoying and solving all problems together as a family😃. Look at them, they are so happy😃.

Poor Maddy is so confused and dejected. Just talk to the girl already, Maddy😳. Swara and Sanskaar reactions upon knowing about our dark fairy were spot on😆. Swara, the ever positive one and Sanskaar, the practical one

Swara and Sanskaar so amazing😳. I know this one is Maddy's lovestory😊. But all your fault Nimmi for giving is small beautiful moments between Swara and Sanskaar.😃

Awww... Nimmi, you also included Bozo in this lovely reunion😃. Thank you for that😳. Now I am super happy😃. Glad to see that Bozo is also part of the family.😊 And everything is right between him and Sanskaar ( LOL car part🤣...poor guy). And yay Maddy and Bozo are best buddies now. I loved to read about their bromance😊.

And what did I just read; our Angel as a freelance travel photographer. So Sanskaar fulfilled Swara's cooked story😃. Just wow. And our girl, a freelance journalist. Glad that she is away from dragon and that creepy office guy.

I loved the conversation between these four⭐️. Really Sanskaar, what was with that advice😲.

So here it seems like the girl is gonna take the first move😃. Really excited to see their first official meeting.

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Nimmi I liked Shivani's monolouges⭐️. The girl is so intriguing😃. Seems like she is missing Maddy and is waiting to see him again.😳

Thanks for the update Nimmi😃. It had so many funny and hilarious bits. It was such an uplifting delight to read this chapter😳😃.

Looking forward to the next chapter Nimmi.
😃
Take care
Lots and lots of love🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Machi... 🤗 ... Hilarious update im happy to see my fav four together again...

Soo Maddy get caught by his family... Who are now connecting him... 😆

"First Kitten will be smiling brightly at you. Then she will make those big doe puppy eyes at you. Then she will try to talk sweetly. And by then if you don't crack; she will be channelling her inner blackmailer and mind you this little Kitten is a born blackmailer. She will emotionally blackmail you, bully you, threaten you and make you feel like you are being a heartless cruel man to deny a sweet little thing like her. Trust me mate! It would hurt less if you give up now. Because when my Kitten wants something; she gets it. By hook or crook."
Maddy looked aghast. He knows Sanskaar is speaking the truth. If there is one girl whose middle name is tenacious that is Swara Bose... Theses lines even fit for me... I.mean most of the girls... 🤣 ...

Soo Sanskaar is pohogarpher.. Swara is free lance journals... Nice...

It's soo sweet that Maddy and Bozo are mate... 😆 .. Nice partners in crime... Soo swasan love bites Maddy too...

Waiting for progress...

Love you soo much...

Lol..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96

Girls..
🤗.

Love you Bas..❤️

Thank you SO so much you beautiful souls for reading and loving Hound ka tale too.
and your wonderful comments.

I really can't love you any more..
bless you.

gonna be a little late in update next update. please forgive me.
hopefully I would be able to make it upto you with the further story.

love you again.
Jhappis.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Nimmi baby...😊
It was the most hilarious chapter🤣ever...
Even though maddy was sad n dejected felt bad for him but ...still i laughed sooo much while reading...😆

Sansku swara n maddy trio bonding is out of the world😊👏..swasan inquiry about either he love someone whether its girl or boy .😆😆.they would accept him was sooo funny... maddy was in full denial mide n then sansku advice him regarding swara's weapons n ammunition.😆😉..bestest scene i have ever read...bravo..👏.loved it...🤣

N then the soldier surrender...his revelation of loving a druggie...OMG...fantabulous then bozo came...it becomes more interesting with each single line...brilliant... 👏🤣

Soo the girl shivani misses her stalker too...hmmm waiting for their path to cross again...😳😃

Update soon dearie...😉👍🏼

Lots of love ❤️
talia...
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
So good to see swasan once again.could u give Maddy and new entry's pic together?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Nimmie..
Wow Maddy on the way!! Sounds really really interesting! Mm an addict,cmon it will be more fun mav! I alwais wonder to read such stories it always will have a hidden spot in it. Waiting eagerly! hey you didnt mentioned her name? Mayb anything mystery around . lol my thoughts are wavering. I had imagined several plots for Mav story BUt this one is out of box! I never thot you could change in this way. As usual Nim I loved it. You are awesome..
Aww Thank you thank you so much re for including our Anjel(Oh god I miss them:-() and bozo. Wow bozo amd Mav in such terms. Wow (lol). Enjoied trio convo xpecially the one she said misunderstood Mav dating A guy, OMG OMG😆
Hugges. Love your works dear. It seems like an addict. Awesome chapter..TAKE CARE.
Will wait dear. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG this is so hilarious can't control my laughter 🤣
Starting a conversation talking about hasish ganja cocain hahah this is awesome!
Thanks nimmie for such a fantastic update and thank you so sooo sooo much for the pm
Lots of love and hugs

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