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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Very nice Mukta. All those lovely moments between Sanskaar and Swara in the flashbacks were awesome. The way he set her mind at rest regarding their arranged match, the way he exuded so much warmth, care and a soothing sense of comfort.

I liked their meeting in the cafe a lot. The engagement too. Gradually, Swara started feeling a sense of possessiveness over Sanskaar, a sense of belonging with him. The best part about his interaction with her, was his calm affection, the time and space he was giving her to come to know him, feel comfortable with him. I loved the way he said that he is entering into this relationship dil se, not out of any sense of obligation.

You have maintained a certain suspense as to Sanskaar's whereabouts now. SwaSan seem to have fallen deeply in love during that period between their engagement and marriage; and the way Swara cherishes the guitar gifted by Sanskaar, is so moving. He used to listen to her songs with such rapt attention and tenderness after their wedding. Wonder where he is now?

Do update soon.

Hey Viji,

Thank you so very much for your amazing and wonderful words. I am so overwhelmed, touched and feeling extremely happy right now.

Flashbacks were necessary to give readers idea of Swasan's relation. To let all know how they were in past. I am glad you liked their little moments. Those moments are basic building blocks of their bond.

Sanskar is way more sensible, mature and understanding person. He has lots of shades to his character. Swara has never been in any sort of relationship with guy and she is very possessive about people related to her. So unknowingly she started being possessive towards him.

Cafe meeting is my favourite too along with their first meeting and mobile convo.

Sanskar as I said has various shades to his character, knows about Swara moreover he didn't want her to accept this out of any kind of pressure as he has his own mindset about relationships which he was not imposing her. As an individual he gave her, her own space and time.

Calmness and unconditional love that's how our sanskar's character is. I am glad to know you liked his way of making things clear and simpler for her.

Swara has fallen or not is yet the question to answer. Why they are not together and where Sanskar is You will soon get to know in next update.

Once again thank you for encouraging me through your words...:-)

Its an awesome read but I felt sad abt swaras longing for sanskaar , can't wait to find out y they separated. Such a gripping story . pls continue soon

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Hey
Thanks a lot dear. 😊 .
Will try to update soon

Thank you so very much everyone for your love And overwhelming response.

I am really touched by all of yours feedbacks. I am trying to catch up with everyone's reply and I have replied to many of you individually.. Still few mores are left. Will do so soon..:-)
Just want to say god bless all of you!
Thank you everyone!

Originally posted by: 7APK

Mind Blowing
Amazing Update
Loved it
Continue Soon
Thanks for the PM

Thank youso much dear...glad you liked it..

Originally posted by: taniks

Its an awesome read but I felt sad abt swaras longing for sanskaar , can't wait to find out y they separated. Such a gripping story . pls continue soon

Thank you so very much dear.

If you felt swara's longing and this story gripping then as a writer my job is done.
will try to update soon..

Originally posted by: simsen23

Muktai...

Very nice storyline..

Swara and sanskar having an arranged Marriage..

But the journey between engagement to marriage is described beautifully.

Each and every meeting with sanskar affecting swara from core and she is falling for him.

Sanskar is matured,funny and understanding at the same time..

But the countinouus flashbacks and currently missing him is symbolising something...

something happened to Sanskar!!!

I know I can't pressurize a writer because as a writer you must have something good in your mind..

But just a request,please do not separate them.in any sense...

Love you..

Simi😊

Hey Simi...

First of all let me thank you for such a wonderful feedback...

You always make my stories special with your words..
I' m glad to know you liked storyline. Yeah they had arrange marriage yet sanskar tried everything to not let her feel unwanted or pressurized.Touched to know you like their journey and small moments.

You are right constant flashbacks and her longing are indicating something, but to know exact you will have to wait. Calm, affectionate caring and unconditional lover that' s what our Sanskar is, isn't he?

Glad to know you like every shade of this story.
Being diehard Swasan fans I know many do not want separation of them.

I don't promise anything as for now but I guess End won't be disappointing to you.


As SRK said, " Agar ending happy na ho to samajh lena picture abhi baki hai mere dost"

Originally posted by: ishanita

mukta my darling
its always great to read ur work
this was such beyond expectation gud..no...best..ya...best part...and i dont think any other work has captivated me this much with only one and the first update.
i started other works gradually but this ts it has mind blowing first impression...ur inspiration...viji ...will also luv this..
i can bet
jus one complain u post updates after much delsy...sometyms i fprget d plot too.
so plz post soon
pm me
luv
isha

Oh my god. Love you Isha for this.

This is the such a big complement for someone like me. I really don't know what to say. I thought to reply this special one at last as I was at Lack of words. Still I am.

To know this one update has captivated so much I felt my writing paid off. Yeah Viji has said she liked it.

I truly apologise for delays dear. But you know na in what mind state I am after my ma'. I write to distract myself and that's why most of my work don't make sense. Along with that there are lots of things going on in my personal and professional life as a masters student. Literature has not been my subject my stream is technical. Still I try to write.

I understand your point. From next time I will keep that in mind and won't make you wait longer.

once again thank you so much isha!

Baby it was fantabulous...loved it...muahhh

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Baby it was fantabulous...loved it...muahhh

Waiting for next

Thank you so much talia..

glad u liked it..