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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Awesome concept.
I really loved it from by bottom of my heart.
Sometimes destiny play the game and we just be a part of it.
The engagement sequence was really nice and first meeting too.
But swara is missing sanskar. What happened between them.
The way of story telling is amazing.
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm

Hey thank you Sakkiyah dear.

I'm glad to know you loved it
. That's really sweet of you to say you like way of story telling.

Yeah we just sometime become puppets of our fate and destiny.

I'll soon update next part so that you can get your answers:-)

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty
Fabulous update
Thanks for pm

Hey..
Thank you dear. Glad you liked it.

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Annu

@ANNU30

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Awesome!!!!

Loved every line. U portray sanskar in ur FF beautifully. Eagerly waiting for next update😊

Do update soon and PM me

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Mukku oh u r back...i am ur fan since I'm With You Swasan ss... u really wrote out the emotions well...
come to ur current story...well u already hv created a great suspense by "she is missing him"
I am wondering if anything happened to him or some jhagra was going on there...i do hope everythng is allright.
well comes to swara and sanskar oh dear its cho cute.
sanky seems to be so mature responsible and caring...
swara is slowly fallen for him...
i love the convo in cafe...
nc stry do update soon.
waiting.

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: ANNU30
Awesome!!!!

Loved every line. U portray sanskar in ur FF beautifully. Eagerly waiting for next update😊

Do update soon and PM me

Hey Annu thank you dear.

I am glad you liked this update to every bit of it.

Ahh..Thank you so very much that you liked Sanskar's portrayal.

Yeah will update soon and for sure pm u.

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Awsome update dear
loved it
intersting or different concept
update asap

thnks for pm

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ANNU30
Awesome!!!!

Loved every line. U portray sanskar in ur FF beautifully. Eagerly waiting for next update😊

Do update soon and PM me

Thanks a lot Annu 😊
Glad to know u liked my way of potraying Sanskar.
Will update soon.
And will pm u 😊

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: soumi93
Mukku oh u r back...i am ur fan since I'm With You Swasan ss... u really wrote out the emotions well...
come to ur current story...well u already hv created a great suspense by "she is missing him"
I am wondering if anything happened to him or some jhagra was going on there...i do hope everythng is allright.
well comes to swara and sanskar oh dear its cho cute.
sanky seems to be so mature responsible and caring...
swara is slowly fallen for him...
i love the convo in cafe...
nc stry do update soon.
waiting.

Oh my god Soumi 😳
I m touched by ur appreciation 😊
Glad to know u liked my this work too.
Will update soon .
And thanks a lot again for ur support 😊
Means a lot !!!

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srividhya87

@srividhya87

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Wow its amazing..

But y swara is missing sanskar..

Wtng for next part..

Tanks for the PM

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Hansika.....

@Hansika.....

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Hai Muktai sorry we both does'nt know each other and even i does'nt know anything abt ur other stories after 5days i came on IF and was going through old topics wen my attention caught ur story.
Back to ur story it's an interesting update and u have portrayed sanskar's character very nicely.I loved d way how he had given her space to think abt the decision of marriage inspite of dadu's last wish i really liked d understanding he have for her of her unsaid words.Loved jealousy swara and her outburst abt spying her acc to her pov.Loved sanskar's first gift to swara and even his reply of not taking back d gift.overall it's an interesting update filled with perfect emotions&understanding.Waiting for the suspense to unfold wat happened b/w them Good work Muktai keep it up.

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