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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Dear Mutka,

Read all the three parts in one sitting - you have really brought out Sanskaar love and understanding of Swara from her PoV quite nicely.

Their confession in the hospital was so mellow and touching.

Swara really acted in haste out of her prejudices and has now almost lost Sanskaar. (that was a nice twist on the mistrust scene of the serial). I guess since she is that way because of the way her father let her mother down, but then as Sanskaar says all men are not like her father. He was hurt because he feels that she continuing to think in that way is because he failed to show her otherwise. So hurt that simply walks out from everyone's life (but he still loves her as he never told the real reason why she went to Baadi).

Please do write the epilogue - you cannot leave us hanging!!

love,

Nyna

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Mutka,

Read all the three parts in one sitting - you have really brought out Sanskaar love and understanding of Swara from her PoV quite nicely.

Their confession in the hospital was so mellow and touching.

Swara really acted in haste out of her prejudices and has now almost lost Sanskaar. (that was a nice twist on the mistrust scene of the serial). I guess since she is that way because of the way her father let her mother down, but then as Sanskaar says all men are not like her father. He was hurt because he feels that she continuing to think in that way is because he failed to show her otherwise. So hurt that simply walks out from everyone's life (but he still loves her as he never told the real reason why she went to Baadi).

Please do write the epilogue - you cannot leave us hanging!!

love,

Nyna

Hey Nyna dear Love you for THIS.

Thank you so very much.

Glad to know you thought Sanskar's love and understanding was brought well in this story.

Their hospital scene that was something took me very long to pen down as I was debating with myself on how to put it in words.

Swara acted in haste I agree but hadn't she waited. She had given HIM CHANCE to explain.

Yes he do loves her a lot.

Yeah will give a epilogue soon. I won't leave you hanging promise.

Thank you so very much dear😊

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1025621

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

mukta 🤗

great work buddy...it was awesome story👏

i really enjoyed it... 😛

poor swara😭

waiting for the epilogue😃

thanks for the pm😊

keep writing more⭐️

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1
Interesting

Thank youharshita..
glad to know you liked it..

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SIMI

@simsen23

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Muktai...

Nice update.

Swara's one doubt made Sanskar so hurt..

But marriage is not so week..

Trust is important, but husband and wife's relationship is something above any normal relationship

If love was there,it wont break two souls

Swara had a critical past,Sanskar should understand that

Plz give a happy ending to this

Love,

Simi

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Amrtina

@Amrtina

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Awesome update

Just loved it 👏

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1025621

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

waiting for the epilogue 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Res 🤗

Un-Res

Such a moving chapter, Mukta. Sanskaar and Swara were deeply in love with each other; their mutual love confession had also happened. Life was going so wonderfully for them...But sadly, the horrible experience of Swara's past---I guess her father must have betrayed her Mom? Had made her a bit doubtful about love in the back of her mind. I guess she would always have felt scared about trusting a man completely, about letting down all her defenses.

Poor Sanskaar, he had secretly met with a real estate agent to see a new house for Swara, a home which would have been a dream home for both of them. But seeing him going to that location with an unknown lady, especially since he had been secretly taking calls and having meetings the last few days, made Swara feel suspicious that he was carrying on a clandestine affair.

Sanskaar felt so betrayed and hurt by her not having faith in his love. So this is why he left her and went away. But I guess (and hope) that ultimately their love would be strong enough that he would return. After all, this was a misunderstanding, caused by the pain and hurt Swara had suffered in the past. She did love Sanskaar truly, and would never doubt him again.

Waiting for the epilogue, Mukta dear!

Lots of Love,

---Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago