DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF-T3-DELETED- AN-PG 1 - Page 30

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Chapter 20:

Finally SwaSan wake up in that magical hour just before dawn & the magic that they find in each others arms lingers as each is reluctant to leave the comfort of their shared paradise. Though Swara did have nightmares, which even the opiate couldnt keep at bay having Sanskaar next to her helped begin the healing process. Oh that moment when they woke up together all I could think of was banging their heads & saying NOW KISS😆 What she "needed" then was not more sleep Prince Chivalrous No wonder her face fell🤔

Poor Pawan 🤣 Now Sanskaar wants him to go ask ladies for extra clothes 🤣

Ye Sanskaar ko baat baat pe itna gussa kyun ata hai? Arey yaar YOU are in love with Swara, not everyone else😆 So if serving her annoys them...they aren't exactly wrong🤪

Pawan is so sweet! A thorough gentleman, thinking about Swara's comfort & then going on to play cupid between his best friend & the Princess. And so modest to admit he is no Lord but is honoured to be Sanskaar's friend XXX And like every good friend 😈 he is proud of the person who can shut up his best friend😈😆 After all har ek friend kamina hota hai😆

Awww Varun❤️ One more horsie XXX And he is Pawan's☺️ Now both these cutie pies are competing for Swara's attention😆 😆 So basically Pawan means that Veer is khadoos just like Sanskaar😆 and Varun is friendly like Pawan😳 I wish I could have seen Laksh's face when Pawan got Varun 🤣 And dont worry Pawan, the Princess has long abandoned her plans to run with the horse😆

Swara in spite of being so young & inexperienced was so good with Sushena. She was guided here by her pure heart which made her say all those things & hence it had such a big impact on Sushena & the men. Is it any surprise that the men came to thank her later😳 She won their leader's heart long back but today she has won their hearts as well😳 and that is no mean feat😳 The old man's words must have brought so much joy to Swara ...she who was always looked down upon due to her mixed blood must have been felt honoured to be called a brave Rajput Princess😳

How cute were those references to the wonderful moments they had spent in the Haveli. Prince Demanding😆 😆 😆 pelting stones so that the Princess would come out 😆 Prince Charming sure knows how to get a smile out of her😳

Fun fair in the next chapter then?? 🥳

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

My friend Shruti,

The update was awesome. I really enjoyed the reading while reading the update.

The beginning of update was about swasan.

Nightmares were haunting swara, but in dreams too sanskar saved her life from devil Devendra. That incident was haunting her. But the presence of sanskar was her courage to fight with the situation.

She was in safe hands of sanskar.

Sanskar always want the happiness of swara. For that he was ready to do anything for her.

He always think about her reputation and he always aware about that.

Pawn understood his friend very well. From sanskar's words he realized that sanskar is in love with swara. But he was not ready to accept the fact.

Sanskar arranged a messenger to Durgaprasad. He will handover the Nagabhata map.

And wanted to send swara to the palace. He was worried for her safety.

But this decision was painful for sanskar. To go away from swara was not acceptable for him. But for swara's sake he was ready to do it.

I was laughing while reading the conversation between sanskar and pawn. Sanskar asked some new clothes for swara and pawn was open mouthed. That sequence was really nice.

Swara was unhappy about the decision of sanskar to send her to the palace.

The conversation between swara and pawn was really nice.

Swara was angry to sanskar and she refused to eat. But pawn understood both of them. He said that sanskar not eat the food.

Hearing about sanskar's condition swara forgot her angry.

She applied ointment in his wounds and ate the food together. They remembered the time spent in the haveli.

When she saw veer she was happy. Then she noticed the other horse varun and she became friendly to it

The conversation between swara and pawn was interesting.

After hearing Sushena's condition she met him and her words were heart touching.

It was a painful sequence. But for a soldier his life is always filled with danger. In each second of their life they face death.

While reading that sequence I remembered the poem 'Greater love 'by Wilfred oven.

Heart, you were not hot,

Nor large, nor full like hearts made great with shot

And though your hand be pale

Paler are all which trail

Your cross through flame and hail :

Weep,you may weep, for you may touch them not

Sushena was a courageous man. He lived his life for his country. He was facing his death. But swara's words have a magical power. It can heal the wounds.

Then the beautiful moments between swasan, it was also nice. Sanskar want his old swara. They remembered the beautiful moments they spend in the haveli.

And the last scene were the soldiers wanted to salute swara for her brave. That moment was one of the most precious moment in this update.

In my view this update was completed like a story. Love, pain, happiness, and sorrow all the emotions were included in this update.

After swasan, I really loved the characters of pawn and Sushena. They are amazing.

Eagerly waiting for your next update.

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: NitaReid

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Hi Shruti🤗 , Sorry for the late Unres. Had a busy sunday. I loved Chapter 20 .I got happy reading the title itself to know it will be filled with so many memorable moments and i wasnt wrong.😃

Swara had nightmares and even in her Nightmare it is Sanskar wielding a sword of flame came to her rescue against Devendra. Poor Girl must have been so traumatized😭 . I loved the whole scene so much. That i read it more than thrice before going further.😆

Sanskar really has iron will indeed but that also makes me love him more, he will bear any pain for Swara . But will never impose his feeling on her .I loved the moment they shared when they woke up . So Sanskar is planning to send away Swara ,cant blame him ,it was his intial plan even before the event.

I am liking Pawan more and more . Him suggesting Sanskar too take Swara to the fair, and his cupid moments with his over acting about Sanskar not eaten anything, His conversation with Swara during the time she spent with Varun and Veer. He is really an likable guy.😎

Swara entering Sanskar tent and the her anger when she found out he was sending her away only to double back at Pawan info was so like Swara. I get why Swara would say no to the fair and i am glad she accepted it in the end though.

I was literally proud of Swara too when she went to see Sushena and that scene was so amazing ,it shown the side of Swara that is an Princess worthy of being an Queen❤️. Her apology for calling him an traitor was so spot on👍🏼 . So Sushena wont survive i get that now.😭

Swara immediately downplaying her trauma after witnessing Sushena was just like her, but glad to have Sanskar who will fight till he get the old Swara back and I loved how he slightly changed the events from haveli to suit the current situation. 😉

Sanskar men are so loyal and i am proud of them, what they did for Swara was so heart touching⭐️ . Yes while Swara will always remember that day as an nightmare ,she will also remember this day too.

Fun fair is next . Excited for it. Awesome Chapter Shruti and i really loved it . I wish it never ended .

Love,

Nita

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nita my dear 🤗

Thank you so much for this especially after having a busy time! You put me to shame as you know I have yet to comment on 2 of your chapters . Glad you loved 20 and the title too!! Come on Shruti, i already told you a few times and i say it again since you seem to feel bad about it when there is no need. It can wait. I know you are really busy and i totally understand 😊

Swara- the trauma was so terrible, I always thought she would have trouble sleeping. Years ago, my mum was kidnapped (yes! true story!) but 2 men trying to carjack and she got away within a very short time (it was like a film) but I remember the doctor giving her sedatives and she still couldn't sleep- had nightmares for days! ...I am relieved to know your mom got away soon, it is a given she would have nightmares . Hope she is fine now . When such incidents happen in real time , the world seems like a scary place indeed.

Sanskaar- yes his guilt is now lashing him and he is so in love but so wants to do the right thing, my heart bleeds for him 😭. As you say, he was already planning to send her away as he wants her safe and now he feels he HAS to asap! ... I totally understand him,Poor Guy. 😭

😆😆 Pawan- he so reminded me of a more a restrained version of a naughty Veeru from Sholay 😆 with his "nautanki" but it so worked with Swara no?! 😎..Will you be shocked if i said i never watched Sholay 😆and have no clue about the who is veeru

I wanted a little of the "old" Swara to make an appearance hence that scene in the tent. Some of her spirt back but of course it's like a seesaw for her and the suggestion to go to a fair conflicted her until she changed perspective again. I had decided before that Sushena would die a brave death and wanted Swara to show her mettle and her queenly attributes. In each thing, Swara is equal to Sanskaar in that sense and a leader like him deserves someone special like her so I wanted the men to see that too. No

Sushena doesn't make it but I hope I gave him an end a warrior would be proud of 😭. I get Swara Seesaw moment😭. Sushena died an warrior death and i am so Proud of him😊

Sanskaar after all is master strategist so when the tide turned he did too 😉😎. They both keep going up and down which I thought would be the natural reaction here. Absolutely right about Swara now having a good memory too to counterbalance what happened to her- I put those lines in about a memory she could recall in dark times 😊.

Yes, I need to get working on the fair and other scenes. Just need to make time amidst work . I would love reading the next chapter like right now but i dont want you to stress yourself out . We can wait .Dont overwork yourself 🤗 Love,Nita.

Thanks again Nita and catch you soon!

Love,

Shru xoxo

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

Shru, what an amazing chapter this is! Just like the title indicated Your solace, my salvation...loved it by the way! ❤️

That moment when Sanskaar and Swara were lying together, pretending to sleep bcoz none of them wanting to wake up and get out of the little sanctuary they had created Such a perfect moment!

Sanskaar's desire at this point and how he's so quick to leave as soon as they cannot pretend anymore 😆 And our innocent Swara, unknown to his desire, still snuggles into his side of the bed for comfort 😭 Hate to see Swara like this!

But you gave us the glimpses of old Swara in this chapter too. Loved those! That heated moment when Swara was outraged at Sanskaar sending her away and later at him not having eaten or treated his back, that cute moment with the horses and easy conversation with Pawan ❤️

Also loved that Swara and Sanskaar both were missing their times at Haveli...So cute 😭

Pawan playing cupid for Swara and Sanskaar and Sanskaar's outrage at him was just too much 🤣 I was laughing so hard at that 🤣 He understands Sanskaar's emotions so well!

That little slip up about Lakshya infront of Swara was hilarious too 😆

The moment Swara had with Sushena and other men was so touching. Swara was truly an angel here with the way she thanked Sushena for saving them, apologized for having called him a traitor and granted him a peaceful death 😭

And Sanskaar's pride when his men were praising Swara for her bravery was adorable ❤️

Can't wait for Swara and Sanskaar to go to that fair! Their banter in the end was just like the old times ❤️

Btw the thought of Sanskaar sending Swara away to her father and Durga Prasad makes me sick. These rough soldiers are way more noble than the royal family especially that Shekhar 😡 But I realize why it needs to be done 😭

God the coming chapter are going to be painful, but can't wait! Continue soon, Shru! Lots of love 🤗

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Simply Amazing and Mindblowing chapter 20 Shruti dear!!

Will comment more later!! But for now I JUST LOVED IT!!

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Yeh bahut bada hone wala hai.mujhe aap par dayai hai.pehle se sorry.main apni excitement mein imp bhul jau aur kuch bhi bolu tho sorry.swaras dream darwna tha .sanskaar hai but yeh drmz swara ko kitne satayenge pata nahin.swasan ka ek dusre ke saath sona bhale samaj ki nazar mein thik na ho.par undono ke liye jaruri hai.aur shayad bhale who ek dusre ko na bataye par apne aap se jante hai k iss saath ke liye who dono kuch bhi karsakte hai.aur ab sanky aur uske men ke comva sanky par kya beeti hogi jab usne swara ko bhejne ki baat ki.shayad pawan sanky ke dil ki halat samjh gaya hai.funfair suggestiin shayad sahi ho.swasan aur pawan ka convo jaise unka who chota sa banter sunke aur swara ka uss dhang se baat karna sanly ke saath dekhkar who dang rehgaya.par kyun who pehle se jaanta hai swara ki himmat ko.pawan ka marhaam patti ka kya tymng hai boss.vaatavaran saanth ho gaya.aur who bck medicine apply mujhe laga swara royegi aur sanky use hug karega par who bohut typicaal hota yeh acha tha.ab padhare veer.swara aur veer kitne ache dost ban chuke hai na.ab veer ka competitor who bhi varun .mujhe dono pasand hai.par veer winner .no discussion further.aap samjh gayi na.swara and pawan convo acha tha.aur swara ne sushena ke liye jho kiya paani pilana khilana tho thik.par uski bravery ko praise karna.phir maafi mangna jaise sushena ka jeena aur marna sarthak ho gaya ho.aur issee swara ap aur jaanki k saath khadi rehna ka pehla kadam.true queen in making and best ever lyf partner for dk.funfair chalke jaana .jitna swara veer ko ride karna chahti hai.utna hi joint ride k liye hum excited hai.and prince demanding.haa haa.phir sanky k soldiers ka swara ko sammman dena.shayad mein itni gadgad ho chuki hoon ke kuch bol nahin paaungi.waiae mujhe pawan pehle se pasand tha par an aur jyada pasand aane laga hai.tho use disloyal mat banaiyega.chalo21 k baad milte hai.kuch jyada bada ho gaya na.sorru yaar.

Originally posted by: Sree8410

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Shruti I spend almost whole night trying to stay awake and when you updated I fell asleep.😡 anyways thank you🤗

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Shruti, so sorry for the delayed Unres. Like I told you I am in love with your titles, especially this one - Your solace my salvation.

I loved the first paragraph. Poor girl is still fighting with that horrible incident even in her dream. Biut the highlight was she still sees her knight in shining armour as Sanskar, though he won't agree with this. And the reference to Haveli was too good. During the similar situation they faced in Haveli where Swara was taking care of Sanskar, even he, in his subconscious state, listened to her heed and tried to follow her instruction similarly here whenever she feels scared he soothes her with his words and hug. Could this get any more perfect?

"What he wouldn't give to wake with her in his embrace like this each morning, he ruminated. But unfortunately, it could never be, he reminded himself. He had already taken liberties with her that he must not repeat, but again, if she needed him, he knew he would make a thousand such mistakes all over again, and take whatever consequences as flowed upon himself.." Ofcourse he would. When it comes to her, everything else is unimportant.

"He wanted so much more than to hold her now, and no matter how wrong the timing was, neither that, nor the realisation that she would be frightened to death if she had any inkling of his desire for her especially after the trauma she had undergone, kept him from wanting to kiss and caress away all the hurts inflicted on her precious form." Loved his fight to override his emotion so as to not scare her more after her ordeal. It really did take an iron will here 😆. At this point (only here) I wished you had placed this story on the 21st century. I would not mind a small kiss even if it's in 18th C.😳

Coming to Pawan, my now favourite character in this story. His request to his friend to not ask him to go hunting for woman's clothes were really funny. Also how amused he was to see the two love birds trying to remember his presence from time to time. He was also enjoying their arguments, so was I. His "Oh my Prince!" made me laugh really hard. He knew exactly how to handle these two babies. He stepped in when to avoid a conflict for no reason and gave them privacy when needed. I really like this guy, I did say this before, didn't I? Please don't give me a maybe he is negative or positive reply. Keep him positive. I loved the bond between Swara and Pawan.

Our Veer is just like his master in all sense. Possessive, protective. He couldn't bear Swara's attention being divivded between himself and Varun. And seriously Varun?

Sushena is dying? I thought he would be fine and will live on. Swara's caring nature once again gave comfort to the dying man. And went one step further by downplaying her trauma. This girl is truly an angel. No wonder why Sanskar keeps falling deeply in love with her.

I love the cross reference you keep giving with their days in Haveli now and there. And here the reference of throwing the stones at her window till she opens her door was beautiful. What he dosen't get is that she has already opened the door to her heart. He is standing in the middle of the room, but here he is asking her to come out of hiding as it hurts him to see her like this.

Final scene where the soldiers aknowledging her as the true Rajput queen.. For all the humiliation she has undergone throughout her life this must feel great. She did win all their hearts with her nature. I'm so happy to see her getting some respect which she so rightly deserve.

Next what? Fun fair or messenger will come back to spoil our peace? No matter what Sanskar says the moment she is separated from him he is going to start worrying about her well being and not concentrate on his mission, but then again he can't keep her with him, which will bring me back to the question I asked you once. I guess I'll just have to wait and watch.

Love

Sree

Originally posted by: Vini224

Hey Shruti

Really sorry for such a late unres.Loved the update as usual.

Poor Swara inspite of taking opiates had to suffer from nightmares.But thankfully Sanskar's comforting presence and care calmed her down.Loved how both of them were thinking about the haveli and the enchanting time spent there.

Sanskar doesn't even want to let go of holding Swara and is relishing his moments with her.

Then how will he ever be able to relinquish her to her family when the time comes.It must be tearing him apart but he still sent the message to his uncle assuming that is what is best for Swara.

Loved how Swara got angry the minute she came to know about Sanskar's plan.

Really loving Pawan .He is an amazing character loved how his theatrics helped to end the spat between SwaSan.If not for him, Swasan would have stayed upset and angry at each other.

How brave was Swara when she openly acknowlged to Sushena in front of the men that she had thought of Sanskar and Sushena as traitors and then asking for forgiveness for the same.Loved the way she soothed the dying man.But why does Sushena have to die? Really feeling terrible about it.

The way Sanskar's soldiers paid salute to Swara was beautiful as was Sanskar's pride and joy in seeing Swara so respected by his men.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.