Dangerous Ishq...RagLak OS...(handling kavya) - Page 2

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really nice start
plzzz continue soon next
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ohh..dear...its amazing pls continue...and pm me also...
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Wow GD this is amazing. I love it🤗
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Superb! Laksh deserves all of Rag's hatred... Itni nafrat to maine Ragini se nahi ki thi when she was a bad character jitni aaj Laksh se ho rahi hai...!! He disgusts me!

GO Ragini!!!
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Nice start 👍🏼
Can't wait to read what will happen next
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Please continue..

Can't wait to read ..
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Nice start
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...Continued from the Prologue

Laksh goes from there angrily without saying anything...
He is going and Ragini looks down controlling her tears and then again looks up smiling..

Kavya: Ruko baby...

Laksh looks at kavya: hmm..

Kavya: plz come..

Laksh comes to her and stands with her in front of Ragini n looks at her(kavya 🤢) in confusion. .

Kavya: so ms gadodia..meet my handsome husband (n she entangles her hand in his arm), Laksh Maheshwari...

He looks at Ragini, who is looking sad but suddenly she smiles..

Ragini: I know, he was my hus. .I mean he was a good friend of mine once..

Kavya: oh no no..u took him wrong Ragini..he is not that Laksh, he is someone new..tum ise nhi jaanti.. n u will be pleased to know how we fell in love..

Ragini: yes of course mr and mrs Laksh Maheshwari..I would love to know what made him yours...

Laksh clenches his fists as he didn't expect this answer from her. And his baby made a disgusting face..

Kavya: okay fine, actually he was really unhappy with his family and especially his.wife, sorry, ex wife, Ragini..

Ragini: oh..poor he

Her this answer makes him more angry but he controls

Kavya: but then luckily he met me n married me..he is lucky..vaise m also lucky to have him but I think he never expected such an awesome wife like me when he was trapped with that bi*ch..

Ragini: oh yes mrs Maheshwari u said it correct that girl was totally a, sorry I don't use indecent words as u, who fell in love with this man..I mean who wasn't able to keep him happy. .n he is of course lucky to have you..

This time it is unbearable for Laksh so he frees his hand from kavya with a jerk n goes straight into his room...

Ragini: now can u give me some space, humein andar jaana hai..

She angrily gets aside. .

Ragini goes to the Maheshwaris..she says to AP, who has tears in her eyes to see her Ragini so broken but strong,

Ragini: maa, aap royiye mat..hum hain na..

Kavya: call her aunty, she is not ur mom anymore..

Ragini: I wonder, such a modern girl from 21st century is saying this..so let me tell u madam that she was my mother n will be my mother always. Relations are from heart not dependent on papers n documents. N it's ur misfortune that u r not letting her love u..

She takes blessings from her,DP, sujata, ram..hugs parineeta n uttara..

Uttara: bhabhi you are looking gorgeous in this attire..

Ragini is wearing the same yellow dress as she wore in the show..

Ragini: thank you uttara..but please humein bhabhi nahi Ragini kaho..

Uttara: par maine toh aapko kabhi aapke naam se nhi bulaaya..

Ragini: not a big deal uttara...ab tum humara naam le sakti ho..

Uttara: ji bhabhi...mera matlab Ragini..

They share a laughter.. kavya is looking at them with anger..she picks her phone n calls someone...

Swara: bas bas ragini..thoda aaram karlo.. come to my room...

Ragini: nhi nhi Swara..hum guest room mein reh lenge...

Swara: paagal tum guest thodi ho..

Ragini: aye humein paagal mat kaho..

Swara: achhaaa! Paagal paagal paagal paagal. ..

Ragini: Swara dekho..hum paagal nhi hai..

Swara: tum paagal ho..

Ragini: Swara chup ho jaao varna hum sabko bata denge..

Swara: kya?

Ragini comes to her n whispers in her ear: k Sanskar tumse milne aaya karte the baadi mein..raat ko...n woh kiss..

Swara: ye..ye tumhe kaise ..tum ruko abhi..main batati hoon..chhodungi nahi tumhe..

Ragini: pehle pakad kar toh dikhhaao..

She runs n Swara runs behind. ..both laughs...they go upstairs.. still running.. n Laksh in his room his room hears ragini's laughter..n unable to control himself he comes to the door..

He sees SwaRagini running n playing in the corridor... he smiles to himself seeing Ragini happy..but coming in his senses again he stops smiling n goes again in his room..

(Najaane mere dil ko kya ho gaya..
Abhi toh yahin tha abhi kho gaya)

He goes n sits on his bed closing his eyes when he sees Ragini smiling..he immediately opens his eyes..

He wonders about it ..but shakes head assuring himself that he is just thinking about Ragini for what all happened not bcuz he has fallen in love with her..He lies on bed putting both his hands under his head..n closes his eyes...again seeing her..

(Najaane mere dil ko kya ho gaya
Abhi toh yahin tha abhi kho gaya
Najaane mere dil ko kya ho gaya
Abhi toh yahin tha abhi kho gaya )

He opens his eyes hearing a vioce singing.

(Ho gaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajna
Lakh kar le tu inkar sajna)

He sees at his left..he sees ragini lying with him..she is wearing a beautiful white bridal gown..the one in the pic..

She gets up n sits...n he also sits with her..she looks at him n starts singing again. .

Ragini: Ho gaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajna
Lakh kar le tu inkar sajna
Dildar sajna, hai yeh pyaar sajna

Suddenly a male voice came..

(Ho gaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajna
Lakh kar le tu inkar sajna
Dildar sajna, hai yeh pyaar sajna)

He looks at his right..n sees a man standing besides his bed..he is shocked to see himself.
He is wearing a handsome groom suit..
The one in the pic..
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..he isn't believing that he, himself, is saying himself that he has fallen in love...
He is imagining himself with Ragini. .


Lucky comes to Ragu n offers her his hand.. she puts her hand on his smiling ..n stands up..there is just some centimeters gap between their faces..when ragu starts singing..

Ragu: Dekha na tune mud ke bhi peechhe
Kuchh der to main ruki thi

Lucky: Jab dil ne tujhko rokna chaha
Door tu ja chuki thi

Ragu: Hua kya,

Lucky: na jana

Ragu: Yeh dil kyon

Lucky: deewana

Lucky looks at Laksh n smiles seeing him..n sings..
Lucky: Ho gaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajna
Lakh kar le tu inkar sajna

Ragu: Ho gaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajna
Lakh kar le tu inkar sajna

Ragu n lucky together looking at each other: Dildar sajna, hai yeh pyaar sajna

Suddenly ragu remembers everything n turns to go when lucky holds her hand..both their eyes are teary..

Lucky: Aye waqt ruk ja, tham ja, thehar ja
Wapas zara daud peechhe

Ragu: Main chhod aayi khud ko jahan pe
Woh reh gaya mod peechhe

Lucky: Kahan main,

Ragu: kahan

Lucky: Yeh kaisa,

Ragu: hai jaadu..

He pulls her towards himself. .her head hits his chest..she pushes him n runs towards the door .. she is about to open the door when he reaches to her n stops her..
N he tightly hugs her..she hugs him back..they remain in the hug n looks at Laksh..

Lucky: Arre ho gaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajna
Lakh kar le tu inkar sajna

Ragu: Ho gaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajna
Lakh kar le tu inkar sajna
Together:Dildar sajna, hai yeh pyaar sajna

Now, it is intolerable for Laksh .he can't admit that he loves her..NEVER!!!
So he picks up a cushion n throws towards them in anger..he holds his hair n bends his head ..he is so confused.

N the cushion reaches the door when kavya opens it .n it hits straight on her nose..

Kavya: LAKSH!!! what the hell!!

But Laksh is busy in his own world..

(Na jaane mere dil ko kya ho gaya
Abhi to yahin tha abhi kho gaya
Kho gaya)

Kavya: Laksh m talking to you. .

He doesn't listen..so she jerks him..

Laksh comes to his senses: ka..kavya tum..tum lab aayi?

Kavya: WTH u mean kab aayi..u hit me on my nose n ask tum kab aayi..Are u crazy..

Laksh: m sorry, I didn't know k tum..m really sorry..

Kavya: no no don't say sorry. ..Actually yeh sab us Ragini ki vajah se ho rha hai.. jb se woh aayi hai..tab se hi..everyone is like Ragini Ragini Ragini!!! But I know how to deal with her...

Laksh: what are u up to kavya. .

Kavya: just wait n watch ur awesome wife, baby. .


In SwaSan room..
Swara: Ragini, tumhe kaise pata about that..a...that..

Ragini: kiss?

Swara: badmaash!!!

Ragini: ahaan haan...main sirf bol rhi hoon toh main badmaash n tum krti bhi ho toh..

Swara: bataao na tumhe pata kaise chala..

Ragini: woh actually, maasi humein tumhare khilaaf krna chahti thi...toh unhone tumhari pic bheji kahaa ke wahaan maa ki aatma bhatak rhi hai aur yahaan yeh dono rangraliya manaa rhe hai...

Swara: aur tumhe bohot bura lga hoga na?

Ragini: haan lga tha par is baat ka k tum ye akele mein kr rhe the...sabke saamne krte zyaada cute hota..

Swara: haewww...vaise main bohot khush hu k u r back. ..ab tum Laksh se badlaa le sakti ho..

Ragini: nhi Swara...badlaa, revenge m fed up of it..is hi k kaaran yeh sab kuchh ho rha hai...Sanskar bure bane for revenge, hum bure bane for revenge n Laksh ne bhi ye kiya for revenge...

Swara: toh tum aayi kisliye ho?

"Tumhe kya lgta hai Swara k sirf tum hi saviour ho, "
They both look at the door n see Sanskar..

Sanskar: Ragini bhi humein bachaane aayi hai..Right dost?

Ragini: yes dost..

Sanskar: vaise Ragini..agar main tumse shaadi krta toh zyaada better hota..

Swara: haww Sanskar.. kuchh toh sharam karo..behen hai woh meri..

Sanskar: toh?? Apne dil ki baat keh rha hoon...she is so beautiful, intelligent, caring, sweet, HOT ..

Ragini pats him on his arm..

Ragini: Sanskar, kam boliye..humari behen ko pareshaan mat kijiye..

Sanskar: le...use kya problem hai..main apni saali se flirt kar rha hoon..aur vaise bhi saali aadhi gharwaali hoti hai..

Swara: aur main tumhari poori gharwaali hoon..

Sanskar ignores her intentionly to make her jealous n holds Ragini n starts dancing...

Ragini, seeing Swara, suffocates her laughter..

Ragini: Sanskar use gussa aa rha hai..

N then Sanskar pulls Swara n dance along with both..

Sanskar: kitna mazaa aata hai apni dono wives ke saath dance krne mein..

Swara: tumhari ek hi wife hai Swara Sanskar Maheshwari...Ragini toh Laksh ki..

She stops recalling what she said... the atmosphere turns serious..

Swara: m sorry Ragini..

Ragini: nhi nhi Swara. .don't ask sorry..

But tear falls off Ragini's cheek..

Sanskar wipes ir..

Sanskar: no rona dhona..ab SwaRagini aur Sanskar milke kavya ko thikaane lagaayenge..

SwaRagini smile..

Sanskar: vaise achha hota Ragini main tumse shaadi kr leta...

SwaRagini: PHIR SE!!!



Episode ends..
PreCap Kavya n Ragini music face off..

I know friends it is an OS but due to my exams I can't write in one go..so I'll write in parts..sorry





Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago

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