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Kavya ------ Laksh 🤢 ..the worst couple(I don't want to call them couple either) on the world television. ..n I think some ppl have problem with RagLak. ..that's why just two weeks earlier they wanted kavita n Laksh...n now kavya n n n n ...Laksh...
Okay let's not talk about them...
So here is the prologue of my OS...if u like then I'll continue. .
Prologue
Ragini is heartbroken... she never thought that Laksh.. LAKSH!!! Will do that to her...he used her..n now married that kavya. .
So this is the time when Ragini is hanging on the fan and shekhar is trying to put her down...Swara n shomi are crying badly. ..shekhar puts her on the bed crying...
Swara cups her face crying : Ragini utho...Ragini plz..
Shomi is also jerking her to wake up...dadi maa arrives...
dadi maa: laado...
She goes to her n hugs her: laado uth laado...
Shekhar without wasting a single second picks her in his arms n starts going..
Shomi: shekhar tum kahaan le jaa rahe ho meri ragu ko?
Shekhar: mishthi hospital. .
Swara is crying, dadi maa is also crying.. but they goes along with them..
Swara on the way calls Sanskar...but he doesn't pick up...
Swara crying: Sanskar plz uthao..plz..
Shekhar: Swara koi zarurat nhi hai wahaan ..
But he is interrupted by dadi: chup kar shekhar...chup kar..meri laado..
But the argument goes on..
Here Sanskar picks swara's phone..
Sanskar: hello
Swara: hello...hello Sanskar..tum..
Her voice is trembling..
Sanskar: Swara tum theek ho na..kya hua tum itni tensed kyon ho..
Swara explains him the whole scene..
Sanskar: kya!! Main abhi hospital pohonchta hoon..
"Hospital? Kaun jaa raha hai hospital n kyon?" A voice comes... Sanskar turns to see kavya🤢...
Sanskar: tumse koi matlab nhi hona chahiye ..tum jaao aur apne patidev ke saath aaram farmaao..
Kavya: how dare u talk..
She is interrupted by Laksh who is coming from upstairs..
Laksh: kya hua Sanskar?
Kavya: dekho na baby.. tumhare bhai ko baat karne ki zara bhi tameez nhi hai..
Sanskar: tumhe hai na? Ghar mein ek tameez wala bohot hai..
Laksh: bhai tu meri patni..
Dp arrives..
DP: kya chal rha hai yahaan? Sanskar Laksh..
Kavya: oh dad...ur Sanskar has no sanskaars...
Ignoring her dp looks at Sanskar...n he explains him everything..
DP: kya hum abhi chalte hain..
Kavya starts laughing leaving everyone shocked. .
Kavya: baby I think this is the third or fourth time she is attemting suicide. .
Laksh: yes..she is always keep on doing this melodrama..
Sanskar looks at Laksh in disgust but decides to ignore him..
He with whole family leaves for hospital... meanwhile kavya n Laksh..
Kavya: baby I think we should go ..
Laksh looks at her confused. ..
Kavya: to celebrate her heartbreak...
Laksh feels uncomfortable but bitterly smiles...she comes closer to him .bringing her lips closer to his...but he turns around..
Laksh: chalo..
They also go to hospital...
Both MF n GF are there...shekhar goes near Laksh ..
Laksh: namastey pa..i mean uncle.
Kavya: namastey uncle..ragini zinda hai kya? I think, unfortunately yes..
Shekhar: tumhari yahaan aane ki himmat bhi kaise hui...just get lost...
Shomi comes to shekhar n holds his arm signalling him to calm down...
Doctor comes..
Swara: doctor Ragini kaisi hai...woh theek toh hai na?
Doctor: ji hum kuchh nhi kar sakte...pata nhi kab tak unki saansein chalegi...
Swara: no..this isn't possible..
Everyone is shocked...laksh also looks at doctor...his eyes have tension for her in them...
Only one person is smiling... KAVYA!!!
Kavya: may she rests in peace...
Laksh looks at her angrily..
Kavya: what?
He just in disgust move from there...
Everyone except Laksh n kavya goes inside...
Laksh stands near the door n kavya comes to him...
Kavya: chalo baby canteen chalte hain..mujhe bhook lagi hai..
Laksh looking at Ragini: tum jaao kavya...
Kavya: no baby tumhare bina..no..come on let's go..
Laksh: kavya try n understand. .u go...
Kavya: kya baby...tum yahan kyon ruk rahe ho? Marne do na ise... she is just a waste..
Laksh shouts: don't u understand at once...go n eat...don't bother me...
She stamps her foot n goes..
In the room...
Ragini has gain consciousness... she signals shekhar by slowly moving her finger...
She points at Swara than Sanskar...n then shekhar...
Everyone understands what is she saying...even Laksh standing outside does...he thinks that is she really so caring?
Here ragini's eyes fall at Laksh... n Laksh is also looking at Ragini...
At the same second a tear drops from both their right eye..laksh touches it n gets confused...
They share a distant eye lock when Ragini starts breathing heavily ...
Laksh comes to his senses with a jerk...
Swara shouts: doctor... doctor.
Laksh also comes inside.
He comes n checks Ragini...but suddenly Ragini stops sighing like that...n a beep comes in their ears...
Doctor: sorry...we did our best to save her but she is no more..:
Everyone starts crying loudly..
Swara: doctor u r joking..
Doctor: Sorry mrs Maheshwari but I ain't..
Laksh controls his balance listening it..but manages to remain stand..
She goes to Ragini..
Swara: Ragini...hey Ragini..utho..look Ragini...humein dar lag rha hai..I know tum humein daraana chahti ho n sach mein hum darr gaye..so come on get up..
No response... she looks at Laksh n goes to him...she brings him to Ragini...
Swara: dekho Ragini... kaun aaya hai...Laksh...woh tumse milne aaya hai utho na..
She breaks down in tears.. n hugs her
Swara: Ragini plz get...tumhare bina Swara adhoori hai...SwaRagini adhoori hain...plz get up..
Everyone is silent of shock. .
Suddenly Ragini breaths like if she is given a shock...
(SwaRagini SwaRagini SwaRagini SwaRagini)
Everyone looks at her...they smile ..
In no time..Laksh shouts
Laksh: doctor... dekhiye Ragini...
Doctor comes..he checks Ragini..
Dr: this is a.miracle... I've never seen this in my 22 years carrier..she is out of danger..
Everyone smiles including Laksh..
But suddenly Laksh stops smiling thinking why he called the doctor..what happened to him..
Here Ragini regains consciousness..
Ragini: Swara...Swara...
Swara: haan Ragini main yahin hoon...
She opens her eyes n saw Swara..n then Sanskar n then again shekhar..he understood what she meant to say...he slowly nods in yes..
Swara Sanskar smile... n they hug each other...
Here Ragini sees Laksh n immediately turns her head leaving no one in shock..it has to be her natural reaction this time..
Now 2 Weeks have passed ...
SwaSan are together.. they r thinking hard about this quake kavya...
Ragini is almost recovered...
N Laksh has to bear his mistake kavya...he is always trying to get rid of her but she is such a chipku..
So it is a Sunday morning..
In MM...
Everyone is home..on the dining table having breakfast..
Suddenly a voice comes ...
"Swara"...
Everyone turns to the door..smiling to see ragini..except the two purest souls..
Swara goes to her...
Swara: Ragini...
N they hug..
Here kavya comes to her...
Kavya: hey Ragini...babe tum akeli aayi ho?
Ragini: nahi mrs laksh Maheshwari.. I've come with my bags...
Kavya: bags..means u r living here?
Ragini: of course yes ..
Kavya: but u can't live here..
Ragini: oh really? Why?
Laksh standing up from his chair: bcuz u hv no rights..u r not my wife anymore..
Ragini: just stop talking about rights mr Maheshwari... I know my rights very well ...n by the way kavya...hum yahaan aapke pati ke ghar nhi aaye hain...apni behen ke sasural aayein hain..aur jahaan tak hum jaante hain..they don't hv any problem.. Swara Sanskar?
SwaSan: not at all Ragini ...
Ragini: mr Laksh Maheshwari..aapko?
He goes from there without replying...
So friends.. how was it...just wrote it cuz m fed up of this kavya crap ...
Should I write the first part?
Okay let's not talk about them...
So here is the prologue of my OS...if u like then I'll continue. .
Prologue
Ragini is heartbroken... she never thought that Laksh.. LAKSH!!! Will do that to her...he used her..n now married that kavya. .
So this is the time when Ragini is hanging on the fan and shekhar is trying to put her down...Swara n shomi are crying badly. ..shekhar puts her on the bed crying...
Swara cups her face crying : Ragini utho...Ragini plz..
Shomi is also jerking her to wake up...dadi maa arrives...
dadi maa: laado...
She goes to her n hugs her: laado uth laado...
Shekhar without wasting a single second picks her in his arms n starts going..
Shomi: shekhar tum kahaan le jaa rahe ho meri ragu ko?
Shekhar: mishthi hospital. .
Swara is crying, dadi maa is also crying.. but they goes along with them..
Swara on the way calls Sanskar...but he doesn't pick up...
Swara crying: Sanskar plz uthao..plz..
Shekhar: Swara koi zarurat nhi hai wahaan ..
But he is interrupted by dadi: chup kar shekhar...chup kar..meri laado..
But the argument goes on..
Here Sanskar picks swara's phone..
Sanskar: hello
Swara: hello...hello Sanskar..tum..
Her voice is trembling..
Sanskar: Swara tum theek ho na..kya hua tum itni tensed kyon ho..
Swara explains him the whole scene..
Sanskar: kya!! Main abhi hospital pohonchta hoon..
"Hospital? Kaun jaa raha hai hospital n kyon?" A voice comes... Sanskar turns to see kavya🤢...
Sanskar: tumse koi matlab nhi hona chahiye ..tum jaao aur apne patidev ke saath aaram farmaao..
Kavya: how dare u talk..
She is interrupted by Laksh who is coming from upstairs..
Laksh: kya hua Sanskar?
Kavya: dekho na baby.. tumhare bhai ko baat karne ki zara bhi tameez nhi hai..
Sanskar: tumhe hai na? Ghar mein ek tameez wala bohot hai..
Laksh: bhai tu meri patni..
Dp arrives..
DP: kya chal rha hai yahaan? Sanskar Laksh..
Kavya: oh dad...ur Sanskar has no sanskaars...
Ignoring her dp looks at Sanskar...n he explains him everything..
DP: kya hum abhi chalte hain..
Kavya starts laughing leaving everyone shocked. .
Kavya: baby I think this is the third or fourth time she is attemting suicide. .
Laksh: yes..she is always keep on doing this melodrama..
Sanskar looks at Laksh in disgust but decides to ignore him..
He with whole family leaves for hospital... meanwhile kavya n Laksh..
Kavya: baby I think we should go ..
Laksh looks at her confused. ..
Kavya: to celebrate her heartbreak...
Laksh feels uncomfortable but bitterly smiles...she comes closer to him .bringing her lips closer to his...but he turns around..
Laksh: chalo..
They also go to hospital...
Both MF n GF are there...shekhar goes near Laksh ..
Laksh: namastey pa..i mean uncle.
Kavya: namastey uncle..ragini zinda hai kya? I think, unfortunately yes..
Shekhar: tumhari yahaan aane ki himmat bhi kaise hui...just get lost...
Shomi comes to shekhar n holds his arm signalling him to calm down...
Doctor comes..
Swara: doctor Ragini kaisi hai...woh theek toh hai na?
Doctor: ji hum kuchh nhi kar sakte...pata nhi kab tak unki saansein chalegi...
Swara: no..this isn't possible..
Everyone is shocked...laksh also looks at doctor...his eyes have tension for her in them...
Only one person is smiling... KAVYA!!!
Kavya: may she rests in peace...
Laksh looks at her angrily..
Kavya: what?
He just in disgust move from there...
Everyone except Laksh n kavya goes inside...
Laksh stands near the door n kavya comes to him...
Kavya: chalo baby canteen chalte hain..mujhe bhook lagi hai..
Laksh looking at Ragini: tum jaao kavya...
Kavya: no baby tumhare bina..no..come on let's go..
Laksh: kavya try n understand. .u go...
Kavya: kya baby...tum yahan kyon ruk rahe ho? Marne do na ise... she is just a waste..
Laksh shouts: don't u understand at once...go n eat...don't bother me...
She stamps her foot n goes..
In the room...
Ragini has gain consciousness... she signals shekhar by slowly moving her finger...
She points at Swara than Sanskar...n then shekhar...
Everyone understands what is she saying...even Laksh standing outside does...he thinks that is she really so caring?
Here ragini's eyes fall at Laksh... n Laksh is also looking at Ragini...
At the same second a tear drops from both their right eye..laksh touches it n gets confused...
They share a distant eye lock when Ragini starts breathing heavily ...
Laksh comes to his senses with a jerk...
Swara shouts: doctor... doctor.
Laksh also comes inside.
He comes n checks Ragini...but suddenly Ragini stops sighing like that...n a beep comes in their ears...
Doctor: sorry...we did our best to save her but she is no more..:
Everyone starts crying loudly..
Swara: doctor u r joking..
Doctor: Sorry mrs Maheshwari but I ain't..
Laksh controls his balance listening it..but manages to remain stand..
She goes to Ragini..
Swara: Ragini...hey Ragini..utho..look Ragini...humein dar lag rha hai..I know tum humein daraana chahti ho n sach mein hum darr gaye..so come on get up..
No response... she looks at Laksh n goes to him...she brings him to Ragini...
Swara: dekho Ragini... kaun aaya hai...Laksh...woh tumse milne aaya hai utho na..
She breaks down in tears.. n hugs her
Swara: Ragini plz get...tumhare bina Swara adhoori hai...SwaRagini adhoori hain...plz get up..
Everyone is silent of shock. .
Suddenly Ragini breaths like if she is given a shock...
(SwaRagini SwaRagini SwaRagini SwaRagini)
Everyone looks at her...they smile ..
In no time..Laksh shouts
Laksh: doctor... dekhiye Ragini...
Doctor comes..he checks Ragini..
Dr: this is a.miracle... I've never seen this in my 22 years carrier..she is out of danger..
Everyone smiles including Laksh..
But suddenly Laksh stops smiling thinking why he called the doctor..what happened to him..
Here Ragini regains consciousness..
Ragini: Swara...Swara...
Swara: haan Ragini main yahin hoon...
She opens her eyes n saw Swara..n then Sanskar n then again shekhar..he understood what she meant to say...he slowly nods in yes..
Swara Sanskar smile... n they hug each other...
Here Ragini sees Laksh n immediately turns her head leaving no one in shock..it has to be her natural reaction this time..
Now 2 Weeks have passed ...
SwaSan are together.. they r thinking hard about this quake kavya...
Ragini is almost recovered...
N Laksh has to bear his mistake kavya...he is always trying to get rid of her but she is such a chipku..
So it is a Sunday morning..
In MM...
Everyone is home..on the dining table having breakfast..
Suddenly a voice comes ...
"Swara"...
Everyone turns to the door..smiling to see ragini..except the two purest souls..
Swara goes to her...
Swara: Ragini...
N they hug..
Here kavya comes to her...
Kavya: hey Ragini...babe tum akeli aayi ho?
Ragini: nahi mrs laksh Maheshwari.. I've come with my bags...
Kavya: bags..means u r living here?
Ragini: of course yes ..
Kavya: but u can't live here..
Ragini: oh really? Why?
Laksh standing up from his chair: bcuz u hv no rights..u r not my wife anymore..
Ragini: just stop talking about rights mr Maheshwari... I know my rights very well ...n by the way kavya...hum yahaan aapke pati ke ghar nhi aaye hain...apni behen ke sasural aayein hain..aur jahaan tak hum jaante hain..they don't hv any problem.. Swara Sanskar?
SwaSan: not at all Ragini ...
Ragini: mr Laksh Maheshwari..aapko?
He goes from there without replying...
So friends.. how was it...just wrote it cuz m fed up of this kavya crap ...
Should I write the first part?
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