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Posted: 9 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
OMG Sapna!! Last chapter.
Well it was amazing. So Swara puts the garland in Sanskaar's neck. Great<3 She is so daring!! Who would have the guts to do that, and Sanskaar's shock at that. And then she hugged him! So beautiful, I went all- Oh Jeez, how amazingly beautiful is that-And then SwaSan convo<3 Of course, they would put forth each others insecurities and doubts and defenses. And when Sanskaar mentioned about that kiss and Shekhar interrupted, I knew this guy is gonna go nuts
I somehow felt that Lakshya would love Ragini and how right had I been! I somehow felt that he wanted to tell Sanskaar that he doesn't love Swara and loves Ragini instead but the idiot was drunk!
Shekhar and Sanskaar convo was too good:P That proposal, he'll shower her day and night with kisses and they'll make a lot of babies! OMG that totally cracked me up😆 🤣And Shekhar's reaction😆 Too good<3
Swara's conditions-😆 that babies one was hilarious. In all a beautiful end to a beautiful story and I loved it.

thanks so much Sakshi...glad you found it amazing. hahah swara was a bit zoned but thankfully for us, seeing sanskar right in front of her helped a lot... otherwise they would have made a mess of things jointly. the other three because they didnt want to hurt someone they loved and swara because she hadnt realised her own feelings until too late.

yes you are so right...swasan just got lost in themselves and spoke their insecurities out...forgetting the audience and riling the protective father in shekhar 😆 😆

yes laksh and ragini...swara and laksh in a way had their checklist of the rigjht person and then fell for someone who didnt match all of it but was even better (for them) and touched their heart...the only thing that matters in the end. he had been enthusiastic usually but when he needed to speak he passed out 😆

haha glad you liked the proposal..sanskar was a bit pissed of with shekhar and decided to hit all his panic buttons at the same time 😆 😆 😆

thanks so much for liking the story

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Posted: 9 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: geetkumar
Oye kudiye!!! Dil khush karditta.!!! Mindblowing!!!!!!!!!
I was so so so anticipating this but was afraid to voice it out. What if I was wrong? But now I can do a happy dance. Sanskaar's proposal , OMG!!! that was so Hilarious!!!!!!
Sasur and Damad what a perfect combo. A perfect tadka. They are gonna keep each other on their toes. A small request , I absolutely loved this naughty Sanskaar. Could you please write some more on him? ❤️
Geet.

aapne vi mera dil khush kita with your comments. thanks geet

glad you found it mind-blowing ...glad i could match what you anticipated. hope it turned out okay for you in that case 😃 glad you found the proposal hilarious...i was hoping for that seriously. they are a combo alright...and throw in laksh and you have a interesting mixture there...imagine their family get togethers 😆 😆...naughty sanskar...let me see...i cannot guarantee anything...i am usually into suspense stories...it was a miracle that i got this one right 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: Zephyr8
Superb ending for a wonderful story. Loved everything about this update. The confessions, proposal and of course, the sanskar shekhar banter. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

thanks so much sagarika. glad you liked the ended 😃 and even happier that everything about this one was good. 😃 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: Vini224
Wow!
Brilliant update.

Here I was thinking the story is going to get all sad and serious ,but you gave such an awesome twist.
This was so cute and funny.
Sanskar and Shekar seriously rock.

Waiting for the prologue.

thanks so much vini. glad you liked the updated and though tit was good.

i always like to end with happy ending...i couldnt have ended this one on serious note...this one i wanted to be light hearted after heavy stories like CI

glad you liked the twist and shekhar-sanskar relationship. 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan
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OMG OMG OMG ... THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL I LOVED IT ...
I SERIOUSLY LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS WHEN EVER I READ YOUR WORK IT MAKES ME FEEL SO HAPPY ...😛
YOUR SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER
👏 👏 👏

WHEN I WAS READING I WAS ACTING LIKE A LITTLE CHILD LIKE
" I KNEW IT ... I KNEW IT ... I KNEW IT " YEAH MY GUT FEELING WAS RIGHT 😆😆😆

I HAD A FEELING THAT SWARA WAS GOING TOO DO THAT 😃
HEHEHEHEHEH😆

I CANT EVEN EXPLAIN HOW HAPPY I WAS READING THIS ...
( I KNOW I HAVE A PROBLEM I AM ONE OF THOSE GIRLS WHO FAN GIRLS OVER WRITINGS)

THE PART WHEN SWASAN HUGGED WAS MAGICAL

HAIII MARHI DALA MUJKO

AND THAT WAS JUST THE BEGINNING SO ... I CAME BACK TO LIFE JUST TO FINISH READING 😆

YOU ARE SERIOUSLY KILLING ME ...
THE BANTERING BETWEEN SHEKAR AND SANSKAR WAS ON POINT ... AT THIS POINT I WAS ON MY PHONE LAUGHING SO HARD
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣
NO SERIOUSLY MY GRANDPA CAME IN MY ROOM JUST TO ASK IF I WAS ALRIGHT OR I WAS GOING CRAZY

LOVED SHEKAR IN THIS ... HAHAHA PAYBACK ... LOVED SUMI ALSO

OMG SANSKARS PROPOSAL HAD ME ALL

🤪🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪

HOW MANY KIDS DO YOU WANT YAAR 😆

KASH EK DIN HUMKO ETHI ACHI HUBBY MILINGA
ALL WE CAN DO IS HOPE ... ☺️ ☺️☺️

HAIII THIS STORY HAD MY GO THROUGH A ROLLER COASTER OF EMOTIONS YAAR

AGAIN THANK YOU FOR SUCH AN AMAZING STORY ...
JUST A LITTLE UPSET THIS IS THE LAST CHAPTER
BUT EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE EPILOGUE

❤️
ZAINAB

thanks so much zainab

glad you loved it. i am even more happier to read that i make you happier when you read my stories...what more can a writer ask for. thanks for saying such wonderful things 🤗

you did predict some of this na 👏...glad it went the way you hoped it would. hahahah glad shekhar and sanskar made you laugh.. they along with laksh are a riot in this one. i am happy you were laughing it off while reading this one. ...really your grand father came to check on you 😆 😆

you know you make my day with your comments...thanks for such amazing comments 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: sneharay
Its Amazing... I am so happy 😃
This ending is totally unexpected..loved it 👏

thanks so much sneha.. glad i could surprise you. 😃 😃 thanks for liking it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: paridhipari
this is ultimately cute and sweet sis

thanks so much paridhi. glad you liked it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: Anglaise
Sapna.🤗
Why such a hurry dear? why winding up so earlierly? Stretch it if you could possible. Love to read your works.😳.
Omg shekhar you are hilarious😆.Thank you sapna for giving such a father to swara inspite of the show, wer the man had digged his head on pot!. Aww here how much I loved shekhar and Sanskar bonding! They made up with each other. I could imagine dem thoroughly, cuteness overloaded🤗. Laksh laksh why cant you open up easily?ya me an understand!! Loved the turn of plot. Even Adarsh,cmon manh such a cute character,loved his declartion and give back. So everything cleared up. Nice Update dear. swara and sanzkar encounter was too good. loved the way they shot back without realising the sorrounding. Me loved everything dear!🤗

hey amie 🤗

the story was always meant to be only this long and end with the marriage. if i write more it will destroy the story and stretch it too much. but i am hoping the epilogue will help. i have written a much longer one vs usual this time. swasan centric.

glad you liked shekhar here...the shekhar-laksh-sanskar combo here is pretty crazy!! oh my characters are always a bit different from the show na 😃 this one is very protective of both his daughters. laksh so wanted to open up to sanskar but he never got alone moment with sanskar...what with sanskar also trying to be away from everyone. the moment when he had alone some one would bother them...and then the poor guy was scared and drunk 😆 😆 glad you liked adarsh and the entire plot here. swara and sanskr had so much going that in the beginning they forgot for a moment that they weren't alone...they hit a bad panic button on shekhar before they woke up 😆

glad you loved everything in this one though dear

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Posted: 9 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: aroha17
Hi Sapna..😃
I'm in love with this story..🤗
The update was wonderful..
It was hilarious😆 & I was laughing like anything while reading it.. And the proposal..very cute..👏 SwaSan..
This shekar was very funny..
Finally everything get cleared..
Plz dont end it.. If possible plz add 2-3 more parts..
We really miss this story..

Lots of Love..
Aroha..

thanks so much aroha. glad to read that you love this story...makes me very happy.

and i am even more happier that i had you laughing while reading this one. thanks for liking the proposal and the sanskar shekhar moments in this one

thanks again dear