SwaSan SS: Entangled Hearts - DELETED

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chemgirl

@chemgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#581

Read the last chapter and epilogue in one go...loved it...actually it was very funny in a way...Swara running to Sanskaar and their nokjhok...then laksh speaking up abt himself and Ragini...Sanskaar blurting out about Adarsh and Ragini...so much lighthearted drama loved it...its good Swara spoke up..else many lives would have been ruined

Epilpgue was beautiful...sad the story ended so soon...but it was beautiful

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#582

😭😭Dear Sapna,😭😭

I did not unres for Chapter 7 and res for the rest (office kept me so busy😡😡 and bosses really do not understand😭 that we need time for SwaSan😉)

Chapter 7 - lovely point of view of Swara, so she also has fallen for Sanskaar and she is so delirious to learn that he loves her too. I guessed that she would 'garland' Sanskaar - which is what happened in Chapter 8.

Your portrayal of Shekhar was such a relief - such a lovely one - of what a father should be👏👏

The epilogue - such a dream moment for both - they truly never had much of a chance to really talk out their feelings.

And yes - carrying her over the threshold - golden ending for our magical couple.

I simply loved it and a little sad that it is over.(the story) but then I can read it all over again😆

love,

Nyna