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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfan



U said it right! Both buffoons...but at least my sansku a little lesser...directly or indirectly he did tell someone what he had in his heart but laksh toh would hv gone ahead with the wedding knowing he loves Ragini!! Thank god for Swara putting the garland on Sanskaar!! Three cheers for Swara!!


are what could Laksh also do...Ragini made him swear on her love that he wouldnt back out or hurt his sister. all four of them were characters to be honest. think about it. swara usually talks to ragini but didnt. if she had, ragini would have never forced laksh to make the promise. laksh tells his brother everything ...but didnt tell him until end so that sanskar would have pursued swara. the only two people who could release sanskar and ragini from the fear of hurting their sibling where in their own zone. one because of promise the other because she hadnt realised what she really felt. big big tangle. 😆 😆 😆

and buffoons hai...toh adarsh is also there with them and so is shekhar na 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: foresight


oh the poor guy is going to have to deal with three protective brothers that would make him wish a protective FIL would have been a lot better.


Exactly , this three protective brothers are a force to recon with...Poor Uttara husband😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
what a wonderful end... its like a perfect happily ever after..
sanskar taking swara back to the same place on the beach were they 1st kissed... that sight was beautiful... swara being a demanding wife and wanting to do slow dance on sanskar's offbeat singing.. that would surely be epic...


again.. loving the sanlak bond.. both helping each other to have some peaceful moments with their respective wives...


this story has surely been beyond perfection... and i'll really miss not getting PMs of Entangled Hearts...


hey sapna.. plzzz plzzz plzzz do come up with a new story.. cant wait to read more of your work...


loads of Love
Jessica
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sapna dear 🤗

Firstly, I am seriously annoyed with myself 😡. I so wanted to comment properly after and on each chapter and had made a decent start but madness currently reigns in my life and I had actually totally forgotten that this was a SS and would be over wayyy too soon 😭. So hopefully you'll forgive me and take this overall comment too, without being too annoyed! 😳

I so did not want this to finish so quick!!! It's like a bit of a whammy! I so got the feels you get from a well made Karan Johar type film- and I mean this in the sense of the flow of the romance, the sweet moments, the "stress" when you feel the golden couple might lose out on their happy ever after due to their own silliness, but knowing deep down that wont- ahhh all of it! And it came with all the sweet things of the best weddings- cute moments, nok jhok, dances,- what a package 👏👏

I so so knew the "kissing couple" confusion was about Lakshya- Ragini! Poor Adarsh 😆. Sanskaar jumped to the totally wrong conclusion but I could see our Laxman not being into Bhabhi ji at all!! And I promise I'm not saying this just because I know how it turned out. That and the bit about the "Varmaala"- I knew the correct groom would be garlanded by Swara! 😃😳

I loved Sanskaar's descriptions of his ideal woman- the time to his brothers and then later when he described Swara's perfection to Lakshya too - the gesture that finally won him the girl in the real sense. There was throughout that palpable sense of simmering tension and each of the festivities only underlining to us all and subconsciously to SwaSan too that they were the ones that should be getting married. The haldi scene for example was so nicely done. I also loved how Sanskaar held back, and Swara waited for him to make the move but he thought he already had and she didn't respond so ofc he backed off . It was like- God, lock these two in and throw the key away 😆.

Shekhar was simply lmao hilarious!!! 😆 His stupid cheesy lines and his whole boastful ways and over smart attitude, all countered so perfectly by our Mr Smooth made really good reading. The last chapter especially was sterling for that and for the humour and tenderness mix of the proposal.

Liked positive Ragini and despite me always having had minimum interest in RagYa- I do feel they match in the show and in FFs so it was nice to see them get together in such a nice and uncomplicated way (well except for their near miss too! 😆) but you know what I mean?!

All through the brotherly teasing was fab!! 👏

And SwaSan of course- so sweet and yet meaningful in the important ways. Their growing feelings, the way Swara particularly came to her realisation and then both of them doing the wrong thing in the quest for the right thing but as they say- all's well that ends well and this certainly ended excellently!

Really enjoyed it Sapu. I wasn't sure it wouldn't get all suspenseful but you were true to your word and delivered a delightful romcom, with love, comedy, fun and oodles of romance! Thank you!

Sorry again for the way I've fed back but hope my appreciation comes across nevertheless!

Love always,
Shru xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sapna my dear...u seem to hv found ur niche!!! I don't think I have read a more delightful epilogue in a long long long time!!! Simply superb!!! Each and every word was a pleasure!

Aah...the swasan teasing and the sweet way she coerces him to sing off key for her!!! And It is true love when u want to forget ur career for ur life partner...

Very sweetly written dear!

Love Tas
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sapna dear...🤗

What a beautiful epilogue...😊.
I love the surprise that sanskar had planned..
Sea beach, cancels,their confession... And their song..😳
Both were feeling the pain due to separation.., both were in love with each other...unknowingly..😳

The confession part regarding their first kiss was so perfect...
Slow dance...wow(I would like to see it in the show(well I just can hope)..😊..Uttara ,the saviour ...she is such a sweetheart..
Laksh's impatient behavior... Lol
Finally swasan are one in every sense...😊

You are an awesome writer. You have that ability .that the readers are hooked up with your story and always curious to know,what's next..!!write more dear.😊..

Lots of love,
Simi😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey i am usually a silent reader but i couldn't actually stop myself from commenting. A brilliant story like your previous one too and please continue writing.
Edited by RoshnieW - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First let me apologise from the bottom of my heart for unresing it this late. I'm really sorry. So its finally over isn't it?😭

Sapna🤗 You make me crave for more yaar. I just wish this was the chapter before the epilogue. Would have loved to see him riling Shekar.

What can i say to this absolute amazing epilogue which you have written. I loved everything about it. Loved the way he planned a surprise for her and thank God he didn't sing this time in his off tune😉. I wanted to see a slow dance between them, never mind, I'll get it the next one you will write. Carring his wife inside the room, awe

Raglak took on all the teasing from the family so that Swasan can have some lone time together. How sweet of them? I love the way you have showed the sibling bond in here. I've said this many times by now and will say this again. I love it.

Adarsh's comments seems to be true that none of the new weds are going to sleep that night, especially Laksh 🤣. Poor Shekar what all has he had to listen to in the past few hours😆

Hope to see a new SS from you soon enough. Please, please keep writing your work relaxes me beyond I can explain.

Love

Sree
Edited by Sree8410 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sapna darling...🤗
I dont have words...what a refreshing epilogue...
Im sooo happy ... iwish for a beach scene...n you have already planned it...it was sooo romantic...lived it...loved it...cherished it forever...😳👏😊

Hoping to see u back with new ss...of swasan...😉😊😳

Lots of love n prays
Talia❤️
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb epilogue 👏
I loved it
Swasan are too good 😳
I will miss this story
Please come back.with a new story

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