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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ishanita

hey sapnu
whats up?
kya???
haan haan m bhi bhadiya and laughing very much ..
can easily imagine anupam kher or satish shah as yur shekhar as they hv performed such roles in their films also like satish in hum saath saath hn
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seriously i never expected stpry wud take such a turn
it ended????
omg
cudnt u tell me before
next time come with a longer
but i guess quality is far much better than quantity or posting regularly but illogical stuff...so m happy in a way that this is another feather in yur hat...yur works are superb esp cloaked and entangles-the mad angles...hehe sorry while reading i was eatimg bingo so named it...i am a big bhukkad
enough of bakwas
bye
bw u didnt answer my earlier comment...gussa ho????
chalo is baar dher saara likha h.
..khush ho jao and cheers...bye bye


hahaha...glad you could imagine satish shah and anuran kher there...they would have made this one so so funny really. very happy that you were laughing a lot reading this one. mission accomplished.

sorry re...i couldnt have told anyone before hand that this was the last part...it would have made the story predictable in a way. but i am glad you were surprised by how the story ended...i mean the turn it took. thanks so much for saying such sweet things. i am glad i can take his as a feather and it lived up to its mark. this one does have so many mad angles na...that could also have been an apt title for this one 😆 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kiara.25

👏👏👏

Mindblowing update...the tittle is apt..ENTANGLED HEARTS..
..till 7th episode they where in fringging f**king mess...
N a single step by swara they were out of it...
Guts hai boss bandi me..
Shekher reactions were awesome.. i was🤣🤣..
Poor sanskar have to wsit till marriage to give a reply to his father in law...
😳😳sanskar n swara were being naughty before marriage..
Waiting for epilouge...👍🏼


thanks so much kiara. glad you liked the update...and the title is so apt na...all four are entangled together in the mess.

hahah...actually swara poor girl was a bit zoned out herself. her mind had gone blank and heart was in full panic mode. it was lucky that she did what she did in that situation because she was the only one who could have cleared the mess. the other three were bound by their intent not to hurt someone that they loved
shekhar is a protective dad and sanskar and his brothers pressed his right buttons driving the poor guy crazy. ...actually sanskar is usually sensible...today just got to him. 😆 😆
haha yeah they were being a bit naughty...actually it was more sanskar riling her father 😆 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sree8410

Res

Sapna I love you man..🤗oops woman😳

Unres

Sapna 🤗Can I hug to death?😉

I'm actually struggling with finding the actual words to convey what is in my heart after reading this update. Amazing, wonderful, beautiful... all the adjectives you can add please include to this one.

To begin with the way Sanskar felt around his neck and looked up at Swara, wow. He must have felt like a mountain being lifted from him. And what a mind-blowing awesome confession. Both right at their own perspective. Loved the way he said "our kiss" didn't mean anything to you and they way Shekar responded to it. God I still can't help but laugh at this.

The proposal. Could there be any other perfect way to do it. I doubt it seriously. I want to take you to honeymoon every year and have a lot of babies with you😆. This one was for his fil right asking him to stop😆. I like her response as well.

Oh my God Laksh. What a way to tell his brother he was in love with his would-be's sister. 🤣 I loved the way both sasur and damad was pulling him in a fight which they had for each other. Finally him coming up with the solution to elope rather than staying there.

You know I thought Ragini must have kissed Adarsh thinking that he was Laksh and then said all those words and ran away. But again I was wrong he was kissed by his wife.

Oh I love, love the sibling bond here so very much. Especially the way they kept on pulling Sanskar's leg reminding him how he described her to them. And yes she did show them all that she is feisty.

I'm sad though. This is the last part and now just epilogue😭. It was a fast paced SS and I loved every bit of it. Love you more for this one.🤗


Love

Sree


hahaha...you are welcome to hug me...just don't kill me 😆 😆 😆
thanks so much for your wonderful marvellous adjectives...they are making me smile as i am reading it and responding to your comments. 🤗

sanskar didnt realise his audience...and blurted it out...got to poor shekhar who is very protective of his daughters 😆 😆 very fatherly no 😉

i don't think he really want to propose that way...but right then the desire to rile shekhar was stronger. 😆 😆 she wasnt sure what to make of it...and thought best to cover all bases ..🤣..considering that he can be something else altogether...he has been surprising her always

laksh what can i say about him...the guy is usually enthusiastic but when he was drunk he went off track completely. and you are so right...he was completely stuck between his brother and FIL. poor guy cannot even elope to get away from them 😆

hahaha...adarsh was not part of his brothers mess. they were enough to create it. what can you expect from sanlak duo in this. they have been creating interesting situations from the beginning

thanks so much Sree...i love you too! and love your comments for this one a lot.

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Posted: 9 years ago

thanks so much dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Wow!! Simply awesome!! Ek hi jhatke mein dil khush rooh bagh bagh ho gayi😆 The shekhar-sanskar-laksh convo was hilarious🤣 This shekhar i like😃 Getting a damaad just like him... Sansku is such a wise-ass, smart-ass and bad-ass too 😉 (no offence) Also how everybody was chipping in the proposal, super cute Finally SwaSan n RagLak are bound together in holy matrimony😛 Waiting eagerly for the prologue...

Love,
Akshata😊



thanks akshata...glad you thought it was awesome ...and glad your dil and rooh is happy reading this one. yes the trio is hilarious aren't they...and laksh is stuck between rock and hard place because of the other two. sanku is usually sober but his FIL was getting a bit too much to him ...and he had been through a lot that day. he felt the need to take a shot. 😆 and the brothers were just getting back at sanky for the confusion he unleashed on them earlier 😆 😆 yes they are finally with the person they love
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shikha022

wow what an update sapna !!
i loved sanskar n shekher more now !!
they can make a lovely couple 😉
n ending seriously 😭
m soo gonna miss this ff !!
try to come back soon with a brand new SS !!
will be waiting for it !!
n btw swara and sanskar fight a liitle fight was also very interesting then all that confusion drama.. i was just rolling !!
what an act u created there !! *commendable* 👏
n then poor laksh !! holding her hand then leaving her hand !! 🤣

once agaqin completely love ur update !!
n i edit my earlier comment "this update/part is my fav!!"

tc


thanks shikha

glad you like both of them more now...glad this one had you rolling...i wanted to make it a really light hearted one...good that it hit the mark. poor laksh yes...he is stuck between shekhar and sanskar...rock and a hard place...😆 😆 😆

thanks again so much for liking all the parts and for your wonderful comments.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Soundless_mirth

OhMyGod shekhar and sanskaar! Hah if only shekhar was like this in the show. Swasan are just so cute! I hope they have loads of babies XD The proposal scene with everyone chipping in was epic. It felt like the ending of a romcom. This was a really sweet story absolutely positively endearing! I cant wait for the epilogue and just to let you know you made my sunday!


hahah glad you liked it. yes which shekhar was like this in the show...hope the SS made up for the pain in the show though. yes all the brothers were keen to return the favour to sanskar for the confusion that he created for them...typical sibling thing. that was sweet of you to say...glad it was like romcom ending. i was hoping for it. thanks so much for your wonderful comments and for saying that this was endearing. sorry i don't know your name. i am sapna. glad i could be of service in making your sunday
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey sapna🤗
sorry for being late ..Unres for last two updates on pg 47


Lucky
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Adorably cute and Hilarious Finale Sapna...I didn't know u were capable of this also
The hilarity came entirely courtesy of Shekhar Gadodia..lol...how funny he is ... I was laughing throughout the entire exchange!!

Hahahaha so Laksh loved Ragini and felt compelled to marry Swara and swara Sanskaar but the same kind of compulsion...heavens ... Whatever would hv happened if Swara hadn't overhead tht fateful conversation the earlier night...such a big disaster!!

But as Shakespeare said it.. All's well that ends well...finally there is a double wedding...and feeling pretty relieved tht adarsh wasn't having tht affair with Ragini...

Looking fwd to the babylicious epilogue tht I'm sure u hv planned...since Sanskaar wants loads of babies

Lotsa love
Tas


thank u thank u thank u Tas
so glad u found it cute and hilarious...job well done then 😃 i didnt think i could pull this either...considering this isn't my usual genre...but looks like it world...thanks god.

shekhar was funny na...he is the typical over possessive over protective dad who loves his daughters a lot but had a funny bone in him too.

it was really a mess with these four na...they were all really entangled in the mess. swara in a addled and dazzled state garlanded sanskar and helped all of them because the other three couldnt have done it...they were all in this because they didnt want to hurt someone. swara was the only one free of that feeling.

you are so right...all ended well! with the double wedding!

hahah adarsh was never part of the mess. it was his two "buffoon" of brothers 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

😉 I knew it! Swara, Sanskaar's feisty Swara took the matter in her hand & put the garland around his neck!!!

I was right about RagLak as well.
Wow...How ISSMART I'm!!!
What a HILARIOUSLY HILARIOUS proposal! I'm laughing like hell.
Shekhar you got a perfect Damaad in Sanskaar!!!
Plz let me laugh some more & control myself!
PS: Btw Sanskaar was talking about lots of babies. I want to know more about this ;)
And he was thinking that there is eons of time to trouble his father-in-law in future!
I'm seriously looking forward to see this as well ;)


hahaha actually a dazzled and addled swara took matters in own hand...but fortunately for us fate played its card again and hit the target. 😆 you are smart. you guessed about the garland and about raglan 👏

so happy that it was hilarious for you...i was hoping that would happen with the proposal. i wanted something very light heated. please go on and laugh...the more you laugh the happier i will be 😃

hahah...sanskar was just trying to rile shekhar. he is very sensible otherwise. i don't think he himself can handle "lots" of babies. and think he would prefer having only swara to himself for sometime...but yes he wouldnt mind riling shekhar from time to time...not too often though 😉 😆

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