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Posted: 9 years ago

#521

Hi Sapna..😃
I'm in love with this story..🤗
The update was wonderful..
It was hilarious😆 & I was laughing like anything while reading it.. And the proposal..very cute..👏 SwaSan..
This shekar was very funny..
Finally everything get cleared..
Plz dont end it.. If possible plz add 2-3 more parts..
We really miss this story..

Lots of Love..
Aroha..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: Shaheenq
Such an Amazing Part this was. SwaSan and RagLak finally united. Shekhar's expressions my God on each and every sentence of Sanskar were just ROFL 😆 That Proposal was so sweet and so Loving. 😳

thanks so much shaheen. yes both the couples are finally together. hahaha yes shekhar has been protective of his daughters and too close to them. so now he feels threatened and the new son-in-law is one who can give it back to him and torture him a way that hits the right buttons.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#523

Originally posted by: Rumadiv
Do continue excellent writing... din expect such a twist n turn...

thanks so much Ruma...glad i surprised you...hopefully pleasantly. thanks for liking my writing ...appreciate you saying that. 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Sapna...
Again it was a wonderful one...
More than swasan marriage I loved their convo and sanskaars proposal. ..
Proposal was so nice ...Especially shekars and lakshs dialogues...
Sad that this is going to end ..
But hope u come up with another piece of writing soon
All d best ..May God bless u dear

thanks so much arathy...glad you found it wonderful. it was a departure from my usual style.

haha...glad you liked the convo and the proposal. it was funny and unique and he had a lot of help from the cousins that he had pissed off and his hyper FIL

yes sad it is ending...but it was always meant to only be this long. they have their happy ending...

god bless u too!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Awesome update.
The surprise was really nice.
The proposing sequence of swasan was really nice.
And shekhar was also good in this update.
Thanks for the pm

thanks so much sakkiyah. glad you liked the update and the surprise.

hahah yes it was a unique proposal alright. shekhar is a possessive and protective father...sanskar was pushing his right buttons 😆 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: Saumya2102
Hey Sapna!!😊
Ohh Godd.. did I tell you how much I liked Shekhar here.. And the fun bond between Father-in-law son-in-law duo was just so awesome!!😃

I could imagine Shekhar's face everytime Sanskar threw back on him!!🤣 I was giggling and my friends are now thinking to shift me into a special ward in a mental hospital!! Still can't help it!😆😆

This part was rather a light hearted one!! To be honest.. I never expected such a part from you but I loved it!! I had this doubt ki Swara would put the garland around Sanskar's neck but I can't risk to guess when the writer is you!!

The proposal was a sweet one!!😳 Poor Sanskar.. everytime someone or the other was interrupting him!!

"I promise I will love you more each day. I will shower you with kisses, day and night" earning a blush from Swara "I promise I will take you out for honeymoon every year. I promise we will make lots of babies together" ☺️
These lines made me blush so much!! Sanskar is so naughty and yet the most adorable person!

How can you end it without giving us warning 2-3 parts before.. That's really bad of you! Looking forward to the epilogue.

I am gonna miss you!! Come back soon with a big Fan Fiction and not a Short Story!

Love
Saumya😊

sorry saumya...i couldnt have give a heads of the SS ending with this one otherwise the entire story would have become predictable.

shekhar is a protective father...and sanskar knows how to push his right buttons. the effect was quite funny because of that 😆 i am glad you liked it though. hahaha...you are the normal one tell your friends. shekhar and sanskar lost it for a while there 😆 shekhar might need the hospital if sanskar keeps at it.

glad i surprised you by giving you a light hearted one. this entire SS was supposed to be light hearted...a change from the heavy CI i had written previously.

sanskar was being naughty true...but he was getting back at shekhar more. normally he is a sensible and nice guy. today everyone was out to get him though

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Posted: 9 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: Goldie93
Awsum. .lovely loved swasan scenes n Sasnkaar n Shekhar Scns hehehhe..

thanks goldie...glad you liked the update and the swasan and shekhar-sanskar scenes. thanks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86
Res.bahut kuch bolna hai . Par yeh chap mera fav wala hai .love you sawara. Un res aapke end tho acha tha.par acha hua swara ne yeh kadam uthaya .sachi fiesty hai who.and proposal bahut hi sweet ,funny, cute tha .auur jaise sab ne apne part ke dialogues bole who out of world tha.sirf aap hi soch sakti ho.aur ab raglak aapne kitni achi tarah sabko yeh samjhne diya ki adar aur ragini hai and last mein raglak.ek aur writer ki khubi.aur beechara laksh zindagi bhar in sasur aur damad yane sanskaar aur shekhar ke bich phas gaya.and seriously mujhe yaham shekhar pasand aaya. Par bichaare ko uska match mil gaya sanskaar ke roop mein.ab updaye ho gaya.main aapko kuch aur batana chahungi jaise hum serial ke baare mein sochte hai k yeh nahin aisa hona chaiye waise main soch rahi thi ki swasan kaise ek honge.aap samjh sakti hai mujhe yeh kitni pasand aayi.maine aapki works padi hai.eye of the storm,cloaked intentions kabhi socha nahin tha aap entangled hearts jaise story likh payengi but seriously aapne har ek ko amaze kar diya .mujhe aapke pehle wale works bhi pasand aaye esp.cloaked intentions. Ab bahut ho gayi meri bak bak aap jaldi se epulogie likhye aur ek nayi kahani ki shuruwat kijiye.aapki kahani ka hamesha inteezaar rahega.

thanks dear...glad you liked it. and that this was your fav chapter. swara had to be the one who had to take the step because she was the only one not obligated or fearful of hurting someone she loved. sanskar didnt want to hurt laksh, laksh didnt want to break ragini's promise and ragini didnt want to hurt swara. the proposal was where everyone wanted to get back at sanskar because of the stunt that he had pulled with each of them...i am really glad it hit the mark and was funny. i am glad you liked this shekhar. he is really a caring funny but possessive and protective father here. yes and he did meet his match in sanskar. even i wasnt sure i could pull this off. this story as you said is so different from the previous ones i had written...but since they were to heavy, i wanted to get away from it and write something light hearted and that is why maine yeh likhi. i am glad ki yeh koshish thik rahi. i wasnt sure it would work. thanks so much for your wonderful wonderful comments. sorry i am replying in english but spell check ke wajah se hindi mein likhna bohot mushkil ho jata hai.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Sapna dear...😊
Brilliant chapter...but why it is the last chapter...???
Nooo i dont want it to end...😭😭
Its was very interesting story...😃
One request in epilogue give us a scene of swasan in sea...😳😳

Keep entertaining us with more ss...👏

Love talia😉

thanks so much Talia...glad you liked it and thought that it was brilliant...thank u thank u

last chapter because we have our happy ending now...any thing more will just be dragging it. this ss was always meant to end here...sorry re.

glad you liked it ...and swasan by the sea...hmmm...i have already written it...just cleaning it up now...when you read it and tell me if i delivered 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#530

Originally posted by: jess_27
Finally.. All the mess seems to clear out now... Swara finally got the courage to accept her feelings for sanskar and she put the garland on his neck...

I was expecting havoc and fighting between the brothers but this twist was really unexpected.. Though i did think that lakdh was upto something, but him being in love with ragini was something that i dint expect...

Adarsh came out clean with all the mess that had been building up... I love you for not spoiling the SanLak bond.. You know how much i lobed them in your story...

And finally both the brothers got their love... The proposal was really sweet, with continuous intervention from shekhar... Shekhar is gonna have a tough time having a son-in-law like sanskar...

The story is almost to its end.. But i still cant get enough of it...

Waiting for next part...

Love
Jessica

thanks jess

actually swara was in a way completely zoned out. she wasnt in her sense but thank god she got it right even with the addled mind because sanskar couldnt have hurt laksh, laksh couldnt have broken his promise to ragini and ragini couldnt have hurt swara.

i am glad i surprised you there with laksh and ragini. the poor guys were going through a mess of their own even when they knew how they felt about each other. poor adarsh was just a victim of misunderstanding. he was not in this mess at all 😆 but with two buffoons for brothers what could be expect 😆 😆 i couldnt have spoiled the sanlak bond in this one. it was too precious. i know you loved it a lot too!

yes shekhar is a protective father when it comes to his daughters and sanskar was pressing the right buttons for him helped by his brothers. 😆

thanks for your wonderful comments Jessica