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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: princess_tara
Awesome

Thank you Tara😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: soumi93
Shona thank u so much sweetheart for pm me about this
even me too is nt happy wd the ongoing track and splly the equation b/w swasan...
I just love the way sanskar hold her during her confession and let her out all her pains and agonies
The last one to one convo is so cool and touchy...
Yes swara indeed a lucky person to have a man like sanskar in her life..
u peened down it so well...
I wish cvs could be a lil bit sensible and shw us smthng like this...
they actually deserves the happiness that too wdout any struggle.

Soumi😃

I think with the current track, no one is happy. Its just TRP aunties I guess who are enjoying it.

I am just gonna imagine something of that sort happened in the show rather than the crap that happened. Need a reason to restore my sanity I guess!!

Sanskaar is always our hero.. Isn't he? He loves his Swara to that depth and intensity that no one can imagine!! He is definitely her soulmate and Swara is very lucky to have him.

SwaSan deserve all the happiness now!! They really do!!

Thank you for reading and commenting love

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: luvakanksha
Lovely os
Swara's feelings, trauma and mental stress was superbly depicted
Sanskar's understanding swara easily was so overwhelming
The last scene was where swara confesses her mental state with Sanskar and sanskar fantastically brings her out of it was simply beautiful

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!

I just wanted to show some realistic feelings that Swara would have gone through and suffered and the impact on her. Sadly, indian TV serials will still TV heroine very strong and not at all affected by it.

Sanskaar is our hero.. How can he let his love suffer without any mistake of hers?

I am so glad you liked it.

Thank you once again😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: hasinig89
Shonali...this is just amazing...
U described very well.. All the emotions of everyone.. So clear & prefect...
While reading swara's convo with sanskaar , her troubles what she faced in jail gave goosebumps to me..felt very bad for her...
I'm in love with sanskaar after reading this..so much of caring & love for his Princess...Now, enough of it...they both deserve happiness.. .

Thanks a lot for writing this dear...the ongoing track is really getting on my nerves...your OS...relaxing & refreshing one...Of all A Very Beautiful one...

Keep Writing...
Suhasini

Hey Suhasini😃

If the emotional scene had that effect on you, it just made me even more happy.

Sanskaar will always be that loving and caring Sanskaar for his Swara no matter how much he is angry or upset with her. Swara is Sanskaar's reason to live. He would never let her suffer.

Not only you girl!! It has been getting on everyone's nerves. Thats why I just came out with my version of this so that I can just imagine that this is what has happened and not the crap that they are showing!!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

love,

Shonali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice os..

Thank you so much for reading and commenting😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: deccan.ruler
Hey shonali its an awesome and emotional os you have penned down swara's trauma and emotional fears beautifully i had tears in my eyes while reading her condition and actually i was imagining her state it had shooked me to d core i liked d way you had shown sanskar understood her condition even before she confessed her state sanskar's confession right from where he was blinded only by revenge and swara who came like an angel in his life and changed him into d old sanskar i liked each every emotion of swasan where they were able to share their fears and promising to stand wid each other in case one falls.In your complete os one para which stopped my breath for secs was d lady who had physically harmed swara and thrown her as a toy jail is really a very khatarnak place where even strong person will be broken completely.Thank you so much for dis emotional os shona

Hi😃

Swara and Sanskaar's journey started as the dard-ka-rishta. Both lost their loves because of their fate. One went in revenge mode. Sanskaar was able to get out of it when Swara cracked those walls. She was angel for him then. And since then he has been knight in shining armor for her trying to make sure she is ok all the time. And they are true soulmates. That time Swara healed Sanskaar and now it was Sanskaar's turn to heal her

thank you so much for reading and commenting

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: rashidhingra
I so wish we get to see something like this in show! (However that's not possible , CV's -.-)
It's so touching!
Sanksaar at his best as usual.
It has so much of warmth and care.

Thank you so much Rashi for reading and commenting.

I am just gonna assume that this is what has happened in the show unlike the crap they are showing in the show

Sanskaar is the best.. Isnt he?

I am glad you liked it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: piccola1
This was absolutely fantastic! Res for now

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!

Waiting for the unres😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Anusha62
superb sonali..i loved it so much..i literally want samethng happn in show too..aww da way u showed da pain of swara dat was amazing..sanskar was so supporting even he felt da pain wht swara was going through..loved somi here..awsme os..thnx for pm r else i culd hv miss such a beautiful heart touching os!!!!!!

hi Anusha!!

I am so glad you liked it. I really want this to happen in the show as well!! Atleast I am gonna behave as if this is what has happened in the show. Cant take the crap happening right now.

Jail life does that to everyone. I just wanted to show something realistic rather than the indian shows which will only show that leads are still strong after that life too

Thank you so much for reading and commenting