*Zehenaseeb* A SwaSan OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Res, i read it and it was awesome . WIll unres once i reach home from my laptop

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That was so Good Shona👏, i really loved it . See even you plan makes more sense then whatever the Cvs might come up with, So finally used her evilness in the past to get Kavitha confession. So the trail lasted a month and not just a day like the Show. Good to know .😆

Loved Swara initial reaction and way you penned up how much the jail life affected her. So Sanskar finally found out what her princess way hiding. After all they are soul mates . Swara almost gave up one week ago and her asking for Sanskar to stop . Wow that would make such an intense scene on the show, if it ever happened instead we will get Swaragini swaragini😡. And the way he finally convinces her to trust him more than her destiny 😳 ⭐️.

I love Shomi , the best mother in law not like Annapurnaji . She trusts her son-in - law would be able to bring back her old Swara😃. Swara finally opens up to him and poor girl that must be one hell of a torutre she endured back then 😭, but ofcourse Sanskar always has the right thing to say, the way he brought her to the place that made him go on an cruel revenge, and how she finally brought back the old Sanskar . Anyone would me moved by it .

Swara finally smiles, and he knows it will a long process to finally get back to her old self. But she is already making progress in the right direction. Loved the star gazing scene, can we get one like this in the show. That would make my day.

Lovely OS Shona, i really loved it . Do write a lot more 😃

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

hey shonali this is jst mindblwoing amazingly written swara's pain pinned my heart u mde m cry how loving n caring sanskaar is d way he mde her come out of trauma how well he understand her silence its simply amazingly written n u r outstanding writer yar hats off p.s. i want a hubby like sanskar for m n yeh aise ache ache stories cvs ko forward kro SR ke kuch to acha emotional milega dekhne

Originally posted by: sam.

Loved it shona ! Loved sanskar's protective love for swara and swara inspite of being so scared took the leap to wanting to live again without any fear cause of sanskar's love :)

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

That was awesome os

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome os

After so many negative thoughts your os gave me a ray of new hope.

The court scene was really nice. The way ragini and sanskar succeeded in saving swara. It was a tough task for them. But they did it.

Ragini played a great role in plan. Because she convinced Kavita that she hates swara. And Kavita confessed her crimes. The judgement of court was also nice.

And you beautifully portrayed the bond of swara and sharmista, the pain of a mother was well seen in sharmista 's words. And also she was happy that her daughter released from the jail, and she proved her innocence.

Sharmista's trust for sanskar increased by this incident. He fulfilled his promise.

Swara was shattered after the incident. The days in the jail was horrible. She was not able to forget that incidents. She was trying to hide her feelings. But sanskar realized that.

Swara is really lucky that she got a life partner like sanskar. He knew how to change her sad to happiness.

And swara is blessed with a family who always support her.

Swara's memories in the jail was really painful.

But sanskar's love and care gave a relief to that wounds.

Really loved the os.

Thank you so much for giving such a beautiful os.

Originally posted by: vaniii

👏👏👏

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

sorry for late commenting..i jst went different world.whn it end i didnt realize..

well,let me tell u my th8s or u cn say dream matched with urs.

after fake molestation case i dnt wnt sangini,bt whn cvs intro ths track i jst knw only sangini can bit kavita.i so want ragini realize kavita tht she is still same ragini who hates swara & trap kavita.2ndly i said in a cmnt cvs shw evrythng strt with sangini trying to stop swara's wedding & whtevr hapnd with kavita thts d reason of it,tht chng sanskar.same way ths track will end same bt here sangini will play thr game to sv swara & it will end with kavita's closure also 4m which was a cause.

so i love ths strt.

coming to swasan i jst jst jst love it.

how swara went thru all ths,her state of mind & sanskar's consolation,his support jst wonderful.sersly how cn sanskar love swara so much??

the ending is very touchy & beautiful.

love love love it.

keep writing more.

Originally posted by: kavya012

awesome update

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Shonali,

That was an amazing OS - overwhelming actually. 👏

It was agonising to see that Swara had been completely broken by the time she spent in jail (truly a hellish place) and is so scared that she does not believe in herself anymore. But even then, we still see a glimpse of the old Swara who did not give up completely on life. She does not have faith in herself and her destiny but she does trust Sanskaar - and that in the end was enough to pull her through.

And then there is Sanskaar - He is simply amazing - he knows her so well, he knew that she was broken and he knew how to set things right again. Simply loved the way he starts off with his memories - how dark and lost he was till Swara managed to crack those walls. He knew that the only way he could truly reach the 'old' Swara was by letting her know what she meant to him and he did manage to pull her out.

Her waking up in Sanskaar's arms in the morning - she is healed (the scars would be there but they do not matter anymore) for she realises that fate really could not do anything wrong by her anymore. 'One of their best nights', indeed.

Thank you for this OS - do keep writing more

Nyna

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot

Lovely os
thanks for the pm
keep writing