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sam.

@sammy1956

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Loved it shona ! Loved sanskar's protective love for swara and swara inspite of being so scared took the leap to wanting to live again without any fear cause of sanskar's love :)

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Awesome os

After so many negative thoughts your os gave me a ray of new hope.

The court scene was really nice. The way ragini and sanskar succeeded in saving swara. It was a tough task for them. But they did it.

Ragini played a great role in plan. Because she convinced Kavita that she hates swara. And Kavita confessed her crimes. The judgement of court was also nice.

And you beautifully portrayed the bond of swara and sharmista, the pain of a mother was well seen in sharmista 's words. And also she was happy that her daughter released from the jail, and she proved her innocence.

Sharmista's trust for sanskar increased by this incident. He fulfilled his promise.

Swara was shattered after the incident. The days in the jail was horrible. She was not able to forget that incidents. She was trying to hide her feelings. But sanskar realized that.

Swara is really lucky that she got a life partner like sanskar. He knew how to change her sad to happiness.

And swara is blessed with a family who always support her.

Swara's memories in the jail was really painful.

But sanskar's love and care gave a relief to that wounds.

Really loved the os.

Thank you so much for giving such a beautiful os.

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

sorry for late commenting..i jst went different world.whn it end i didnt realize..

well,let me tell u my th8s or u cn say dream matched with urs.

after fake molestation case i dnt wnt sangini,bt whn cvs intro ths track i jst knw only sangini can bit kavita.i so want ragini realize kavita tht she is still same ragini who hates swara & trap kavita.2ndly i said in a cmnt cvs shw evrythng strt with sangini trying to stop swara's wedding & whtevr hapnd with kavita thts d reason of it,tht chng sanskar.same way ths track will end same bt here sangini will play thr game to sv swara & it will end with kavita's closure also 4m which was a cause.

so i love ths strt.

coming to swasan i jst jst jst love it.

how swara went thru all ths,her state of mind & sanskar's consolation,his support jst wonderful.sersly how cn sanskar love swara so much??

the ending is very touchy & beautiful.

love love love it.

keep writing more.

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Res

UnRes

Dear Shonali,

That was an amazing OS - overwhelming actually. 👏👏👏👏👏

It was agonising to see that Swara had been completely broken by the time she spent in jail (truly a hellish place) and is so scared that she does not believe in herself anymore. But even then, we still see a glimpse of the old Swara who did not give up completely on life. She does not have faith in herself and her destiny but she does trust Sanskaar - and that in the end was enough to pull her through.

And then there is Sanskaar - He is simply amazing - he knows her so well, he knew that she was broken and he knew how to set things right again. Simply loved the way he starts off with his memories - how dark and lost he was till Swara managed to crack those walls. He knew that the only way he could truly reach the 'old' Swara was by letting her know what she meant to him and he did manage to pull her out.

Her waking up in Sanskaar's arms in the morning - she is healed (the scars would be there but they do not matter anymore) for she realises that fate really could not do anything wrong by her anymore. 'One of their best nights', indeed.

Thank you for this OS - do keep writing more

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Thank you everyone for leaving your beautiful comments. I am glad you all have liked it. I will reply to each one of them individually soon!!

Thank you once again!!!

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1025621

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Lovely os
thanks for the pm
keep writing

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Really nice and emotional I was teary eyed when I read this os

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Tapathi

@Tapathi

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

hai...shonali...😊1stly iam sorry i got ur pm very long back but i was bit busy soo iam replying very lately...it was simply superb...fantastic...👏i want this jail wala track end as soon as possible in this u gave one month and u knw serials ki duniya may one month means how many days...i cant even see kavitha i cant even bear her presence...lite...u presented it is very neatly...very very nice...😊

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nida

@mystery75

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

awesome

it was so realistic

so logical everyone is unlike in SR

it shows that swara is an actual human who is not just mahhan but can be vulnerable can had enough of having a brave face can be frightened

ans sanskaar should be the one to tend her to support her to nurture her back to her old self

i cuold just feel the emotions of swara and sanskar throughout the OS

and ohh i just love shomi here too❤️

lovely portrayal of swasan's emotions although we all would crave to see something close to this happening in the serial but alas our luck and the cv's of SR😆

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Kamala

@Kamala05

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

I read this yesterday night . Oh it was intense . What I liked most is Swara and almost every character behaves like normal human being .It is realistic. Great work Writer Ji 😃

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