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Sana

@Forum.Maniac

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Shona, brilliantly written OS girl! You have some talent! 👏

Swara and Sanskaar's numb reactions after the verdict were so realistic. Loved how both of them weren't able to believe their fight was over for completely different reasons n how Sanskaar's eyes were only on Swara thrghout this scene and how he figured out the reason for her numbness just by looking at her ❤️

Sanskaar's plan to steal her away with the help of Shomi was so cute And the whole light driving out darkness thing that he showed her was such a cute way to bring her back just like she had once

The things Swara faced in jail made my blood boil and that FB of Swara asking Sanskaar to move on was 😭Their pain was beautifully written!

Loved Swara crying in his arms, their hug n that kiss ☺️ Swara telling Sanskaar they'll get married tmrw itself as she dsnt want anything to come between them anymore and Sanskaar's happinesa at a successful effort in bringing his Swara back ❤️

Rom rom romantic moments!

Their last conversation in the morning was the most adorable thing ever!

Eagerly awaiting your new OS now! Lots of love🤗

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Hey Dear Shonali.😃

I just don't have any words to say. I'm just speechless. The OS was just Awesome, Lovely, Emotional and Heart Touching.😳 Swara's jail scene just broke my heart into pieces.💔 It was so heart wrenching!!!😭 Bt Sanskar was vry vry vry understanding and supportive towards Swara. And Swara trusted him more than herself.😊

Jut Loved it.❤️

- Aheli

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SmartSal

@SmartSal

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Kash CVs esse karte. Mar jaava gud khakhe mere Sanu pe. This was just so touching, Shona!

P.S. I absolutely love such stuff that's sort of like a psychological drama, but without psychopaths. This field of study just gives me the thrills. Thanks for writing this stuff. Write more, pls.

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Arunika Dasgupta

@Varunika1

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

its more than just awesome!!!!

Its just Beyond words...just loved it!!

Giving u a standing ovation...I just don't knw wat 2 say!!!

👏

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac
Shona, brilliantly written OS girl! You have some talent! 👏
Swara and Sanskaar's numb reactions after the verdict were so realistic. Loved how both of them weren't able to believe their fight was over for completely different reasons n how Sanskaar's eyes were only on Swara thrghout this scene and how he figured out the reason for her numbness just by looking at her ❤️

Sanskaar's plan to steal her away with the help of Shomi was so cute And the whole light driving out darkness thing that he showed her was such a cute way to bring her back just like she had once
The things Swara faced in jail made my blood boil and that FB of Swara asking Sanskaar to move on was 😭Their pain was beautifully written!

Loved Swara crying in his arms, their hug n that kiss ☺️ Swara telling Sanskaar they'll get married tmrw itself as she dsnt want anything to come between them anymore and Sanskaar's happinesa at a successful effort in bringing his Swara back ❤️
Rom rom romantic moments!

Their last conversation in the morning was the most adorable thing ever!

Eagerly awaiting your new OS now! Lots of love🤗

Thank you so much for reading and commenting Sana!

I am so glad you liked the numb scene😃 I just felt like it was important to show it that way.

Yes, the treatment that she got in the jail was blood boiling and anyone else would have gone insane. It broke her but it couldnt break her to the level that she couldn't be brought back. And Sanskaar knew that😃

Thank you so much for reading, liking and commenting

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hey Dear Shonali.😃
I just don't have any words to say. I'm just speechless. The OS was just Awesome, Lovely, Emotional and Heart Touching.😳 Swara's jail scene just broke my heart into pieces.💔 It was so heart wrenching!!!😭 Bt Sanskar was vry vry vry understanding and supportive towards Swara. And Swara trusted him more than herself.😊

Jut Loved it.❤️

- Aheli

Hey Aheli,

And you made me speechless by leaving such a beautiful comment for me. I am glad my OS touched you the way it should have.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: SmartSal
Kash CVs esse karte. Mar jaava gud khakhe mere Sanu pe. This was just so touching, Shona!
P.S. I absolutely love such stuff that's sort of like a psychological drama, but without psychopaths. This field of study just gives me the thrills. Thanks for writing this stuff. Write more, pls.

Awww!! That was the cutest comment ever!!! Main vaari java!! And yah, even I wished if CVs would have shown this track this way.

I think I do like exploring the psychology and emotional trauma of the characters always. I have come to the realization that the emotional and psychological scenes are my forte and I just cannot finish any OS without involving such dramas!😆 I guess I am such a sadist and depressing person that way😆 But thank you so much for reading and commenting

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Awesome OS :)
Beautiful :)

Thank you so much Sumana for reading and commenting. I am glad you liked it

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Varunika1
its more than just awesome!!!!
Its just Beyond words...just loved it!!
Giving u a standing ovation...I just don't knw wat 2 say!!!
👏

Thank you so much Varunika for the appreciation. Means a lot to me