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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Dear Shonali,

UnRes page 5😊

Nyna

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Pearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Beautiful !! Emotions were beautifully expressed and the bond was elegantly shown... Their understanding was amazing !! Loved it...

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Miss-swasan
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for 1st comment just because all of yourposts are amazing😉

Unres...

Girl do you have a fever or something always talking about how you will bore us

Nope absolutely no I am wide awake and smiling at this cute OS

I love your writings they are always so amazing because you have the best ideas ever

*Standing ovation *

👏 👏 👏

You really brought the characters to life as I read I imagined this happening

Sanskar was kind and caring as her made sure his Shona was alright haiii if only I could have a. Sanskar in my life it would be complete am I right

Poor Swara experienced brutal treatment from being in jail but hey SANSKAR is there for her

I loved how he knew everything from just looking at her

So manny reasons haiii mar dala

I completely agree with you the current track is completely testing my patience
And CVS better make up for this

Maybe even use this story line of they did I would be sooo happy

Thank you for sharing your beautiful work

❤️

ZAINAB

Hey Zainab,

Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. Brought a wide smile on my face.

Haha. Not fever Zainab, but there are so many wonderful writers in the forum that I am nothing in front of them. Thats why I feel, mine wouldn't be that great!! But I am really glad that you liked it.

We all know how dedicated is Sanskaar in love. Swara can stumble sometimes but Sanskaar would never and will never let her fall!! And we cannot forget that the Sanskaar we love today is because of Swara. If it was not for her, Sanskaar wouldn't have changed his path of evil.

This track is definitely testing my patience. So I just had to come up with my version for my sanity.

But I am glad you liked it.

Thank you once again love for reading and commenting.

Love,

Shonali

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Awesome os 👏
Loved last scene 😳
I hope if this can be same in show 😊
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much for reading and commenting Sujoy!!

I am hoping for the same.

I am glad you liked it😃

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ..NightDragon..
Shona... 🤗
You have penned it down amazingly... absolutely loved it ...
Poor Swara... felt so bad for her... there are very less chance in show where Swara will be shown so vulnerable but what you wrote is a natural reaction if anyone goes through such circumstances...I wish cvs show something like this... actually this would be a logical track after this... but with ot luck we will get utter nonsense as next track...
Loved Sanskaar... his support... his love for Swara make me fall in love with him all over again...
Keep writing more...😳
Love
Nitzy😳

Nityah, my love, I miss you so so so much!!!!😃

I feel so happy that you read and commented here!! And I am so so glad that you liked it!!

I am so pissed off with the current track that I just came up with my own version of this track that would help me get over the crap we are watching right now!!

I always wanted to see the vulnerable side of Swara and that how Sanskaar gets her out of this like Swara got him out of his revenge mode.

Well, dont we all love Sanskar for what he is and does?

I love you too and thank you so much love for reading and commenting. You made my day

Love,

Shonali

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Sanavi
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U hv shown each person's emotions wonderfully.
I was shocked at the jail inmates behaviour but I guess jail environment does that.
Sanskaar handled swara nicely

Hi Sanavi,

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!

Yup, jail environment does break you!! But Sanskaar is Sanskaar and he can fix his Swara all the time!!

Thanks once again

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome.. 😊

Thank you so much for reading and commenting Sneh

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: anu91
Sweetest and loveliest os loved it so so much...

And thats the sweetest and loveliest comment I got.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Superb ... beautifully written every moment ... loved it
keep writting

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BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: kavita_b_2004
a beautiful portrayal of emotions... life cud not have asked for more... wow... a simple wow...
Hope the makers learn something from here...

Thank you Kavita!!

Thats a really sweet comment of yours!!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting😃