*Zehenaseeb* A SwaSan OS - Page 2

Shona thank u so much sweetheart for pm me about this
even me too is nt happy wd the ongoing track and splly the equation b/w swasan...
I just love the way sanskar hold her during her confession and let her out all her pains and agonies
The last one to one convo is so cool and touchy...
Yes swara indeed a lucky person to have a man like sanskar in her life..
u peened down it so well...
I wish cvs could be a lil bit sensible and shw us smthng like this...
they actually deserves the happiness that too wdout any struggle.

Lovely os

Shonali...this is just amazing...

Hey shonali its an awesome and emotional os you have penned down swara's trauma and emotional fears beautifully i had tears in my eyes while reading her condition and actually i was imagining her state it had shooked me to d core i liked d way you had shown sanskar understood her condition even before she confessed her state sanskar's confession right from where he was blinded only by revenge and swara who came like an angel in his life and changed him into d old sanskar i liked each every emotion of swasan where they were able to share their fears and promising to stand wid each other in case one falls.In your complete os one para which stopped my breath for secs was d lady who had physically harmed swara and thrown her as a toy jail is really a very khatarnak place where even strong person will be broken completely.Thank you so much for dis emotional os shona

I so wish we get to see something like this in show! (However that's not possible , CV's -.-)

This was absolutely fantastic! Res for now

superb sonali..i loved it so much..i literally want samethng happn in show too..aww da way u showed da pain of swara dat was amazing..sanskar was so supporting even he felt da pain wht swara was going through..loved somi here..awsme os..thnx for pm r else i culd hv miss such a beautiful heart touching os!!!!!!

I'm out of words...
Just u nailed it..

Res, i read it and it was awesome . WIll unres once i reach home from my laptop

hey shonali this is jst mindblwoing amazingly written swara's pain pinned my heart u mde m cry how loving n caring sanskaar is d way he mde her come out of trauma how well he understand her silence its simply amazingly written n u r outstanding writer yar hats off p.s. i want a hubby like sanskar for m n yeh aise ache ache stories cvs ko forward kro SR ke kuch to acha emotional milega dekhne