Swasan Raglak FF:- Hatred or Love (part 12 on pg 13) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update...they confessed their feelings..great 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Poor swara..
two times swara was helples..

Nice..
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Awsum yaar..n nxt part main SwaSan Gets Cozy...wowow...plzz update soon..cnt wait fr the Nxt part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

I know guys you all will be waiting for this part for a long time but I have not crossed the limits yet so don't expect more from this part but have tried my best.Hope you guys like it

Part 11

As Swasan were having a passionate hug it starts to rain and they both feel the drops on their body but enjoy being in the rain.Swara was enjoying in rain when Sanskaar pulls her

Swara: What are doing Sanskaar?

Sanskaar :Shh let me do what ever I want

And he holds her waist more tightly and pulls her closer and leans towards her lips and they both kiss. He bites her upper lips and she feels the pain but enjoys it and also response by biting his lower lips.He then sucks the bitten area with passion and they both get lost in each other and kiss becomes a passionate but they broke it as they were out of oxygen and were looking each other lovingly

Sanskaar:Got the thing which I needed the most

Swara:What?

Sanskaar: You,Your love and Your presence is the thing I needed the most.Swara you are my life and my whole world.Promise me that you will never leave me.

Swara:Its a promise that I will never leave you but you also have to promise me that you will also never leave.

Sanskaar :I also promise you that I will never leave you in any situation.Whether I have to die

Swara:(keeps his hand on his mouth)Never ever tell things like this again.My heart beat stops when I think of you going away from me(tears fell from her eyes)

Sanskaar:Ok baba now stop crying(cups her face and wipes the tears) Lets search a place tonight

Swara:Yaa

And they both start searching for a place to spend tonight and find a hotel and they both go inside.

Receptionist:Sir two rooms are not available

Swara :We only need one room

Sanskaar is left blank listening to Swara and Swara takes the keys and pulls Sanskaar and takes him to the room and they both reach there.The room was beautifully decorated and was beautiful.As they both were wet they have change so they wore night dress and after changing Swara came out of the washroom Sanskaar was mesmerized seeing her like this.She was wearing a purple color dress which was sleeves and knee length.Sanskaar got up and pulled her close to him.

Sanskaar:You are looking awesome in this dress and you have teased my manly hood by wearing this.So miss Swara get ready

Swara:I am yours and you have whole right on me

Listening to this Sanskaar becomes restless and pulls her more closer to him and goes deep into his neck and kiss there.He bites there and Swara moans in pleasure.To reduce the pain he places soft kiss on the bitten area,He then goes to the other part of the neck and kiss there but this time with more passion .He then cups Swara's face and places a kiss o her forehead.He then takes her in his arms and while taking to bed Swara starts unbuttoning his shirt and as he reach the bed he makes her sit and sits behind her.He sees his shirts button open he takes it out and throw it and starts caressing Swara's leg and slowly comes and her waist and hold it tight and hugs her and then he makes her lie down and comes beside her and pulls her close to him and leans towards her lips and they kiss and they kissed each other as long and it was a needed one for them.He was biting her upper lips and whereas she was biting his lower lip and soon they both doze off in each others embrace.

Precap:Swasan decide to settle in London and the entry of Laksh and Ragini and an unknown guy .The villain of the four.

Hope you all guys have liked my this part also and I have decided to join even Raglak in my story and the not the villain.Swasan are going to play cupid in their love story and the unknown guy is the villain and who is he you will get to know in next part.

Edited by zaira786 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys as I have decide to add Raglak also so here is their introduction.

Laksh Maheshwari:A charming loved by every one.His brother Sanskaar Maheshwari is his inspiration and Bose are biggest Rivals.

Ragini Gadodia:A sweet and simple girl.Step sister of Swara but are more than any sister and rivals are Maheshwaris.

So guys this was the introduction of Raglak.Hope you all like this new entries.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsum.loved it...it was Good Romance of SwaSan bt Expect more haa..plzz.Cross ur Limits 😳..i knw m being Shameless bt SwaSan k liye kuch bhi..soo plzz Cross ur Limits soon n Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey please update soon... its been almost a week since u have updated...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear!
help me...
whenever i type ff n enter captcha it says that the captcha is wrong though its right...what to do?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it
Can you pm when you next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry guys for not posting for so many days but what to do was out of town and now my exams are even coming so may be I will be not much active but will try my best to post. So guys here is the next part and this part contains a big twist which can be heart breaking so keep yourself strong and read.

Part 12

Both Swasan were sleeping peacefully in each others embrace. They both had satisfaction in each others heart when suddenly a sun ray fall on Sanskaar. The first thing he saw was Swara. She was looking beautiful while sleeping and he was just staring at her but suddenly some memories flashes in his mind which made him tensed and as he moved Swara's smile also disappeared as she also got some flashes of past and she was sweating whole and because of fear she got up and saw Sanskaar and hugged him tightly. Even Sanskaar reciprocated and hugged her even more tightly and their both eyes were filled with tears and heart contained the fear of loosing each other. Soon they broke the hug and got some corage to tell her the truth.

Sanskaar:Swara I wanted to tell you something and I don't know how you will react but it's important

Swara:Even I wanted to tell you something

Sanskaar:First let me tell Swara my family have never accepted me.they have always ignored and they have never ever liked me.they even hate the person who is with me or who supports me and Swara they can even harm me or you. Swara I just don't want to loose you.

Swara:Sanskaar May I tell now. My parents died when I was young and my uncle and aunt took care of me but they never liked they always hated me and they just want to marry me and send me away. They can go so low that they can even sell me to any one and as I know they will never accept our relationship and will surely try to harm you. I don't want to loose you Sanskaar. I love you.

Sanskaar: I love too.

And they both again hugged each other there was pain and fear of loosing each other in their heart. Soon they broke their hug.

Sanskaar:So I have decided that we stay here itself

Swara:But how Sanskaar

Sanskaar:Swara you don't need to worry.I have my own company here also. I just wanted a chance to get a sponsor and that I got it. I even have my own house here in llondon and we both will live and what else is needed

She hugs him tightly

Swara:But will they then leave us?

Sanskaar had no answer and they again hugged. Their tears were showing the fear in their heart.

In India

A guy is talking to some Men

Guy:Just kill that Sanskaar Maheshwari and every person with him.

Men:As your wish

Another guy comes and there were even two ladies with him

2nd Guy:Advance Congratulation to Mr Durga Prasad Maheshwari for getting the other 50% share of property from your nephew

Dp:Same to you as you are also going to get 50% share of property from your niece Swara Bose Mr.Jatin Gadodiia

Urvashi:At last will get rid of her

Ap:Correct At last going to get Rid of him

And all four laugh evilly.

At London Airport

A handsome Boy comes out of the airport and dashes with a sweet gestured Girl who was very simple and because of dashing their things got shattered

Girl:I am sorry

Boy:Take care while walking and yes Laksh Maheshwari forgave

Listening to his name the girl gets

Girl:Now I don't need to be sorry as it happened good only

Laksh:What?Who are you?

Girl:Yes and Myself Ragini Gadodia sister of owner of Bose company Swara Bose

Laksh:Oh then May I tell you I am Laksh Maheshwari brother of owner of Maheshwari company Sanskaar Maheshwari

Ragini:Wow nice to meet you Mr Akdu

Laksh:What did you called me?If I am Akdu then you are Miss Chatterbox

Ragini:How dare you call me like that

Then they see two people coming and they both run and hug them

Ragini:Swara how are you?

Swara:I am fine and what will happen to me. There many people who try to broke me but see see I am fine.

Ragini:Is everything OK?

Swara:Yes

She was looking at Sanskaar. She had pain in her eyes even anger.

Laksh:Bhai How are you?

Sanskaar:I am my best and have got more strong because of some one. (was looking at Swara)

Laksh:Are you worried Bhai?

Sanskaar:No

And Raglak go and and take their luggage and go near them

Raglak:Lets go

Swasan took them to Car and dashed with each other

Swara:Don't even dare to come near me

Sanskaar:Who wants to

Swara:There is nothing between us except hatred

Sanskaar:Neither can be

And both Swaragini and Sanlak leave to the hotel

Precap:Swasan crying and Raglak seeing them

Guys I know you would be shocked by the sudden twist but this twist contains a big secret.Hope you all have liked this part.Please do comment.

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