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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 16:
Hmmm! The problem with being noble is that the consequences noble people face often tell others NOT to be noble. Sanskaar you might have won that battle but I hope it doesnt cost you the war So while Sanskaar stepped up to take the lashings for this man not a single person from the crowd stepped in to save/ help him😊 They never do! Ofc they have their own reasons & they are right most of the time but that is just how the general public is...a big crowd who will just look on & clap for the hero & villain alike as long as they get a good show out of it.

Veer😭 Dont harm my horsie😭 Stay away from him you brutes😭 😭 😭

Swara was really smart there in hiding her true identity but the poor thing did not know that Dev had already recognized Sanskaar & by association, her. So the subterfuge didnt last long

Dev is an intelligent guy but then he must be. After all he has managed to fool some of the wisest minds in the country👏 And he has found a piece of the map as well😲 Too much power concentrating in the hands of one man here!😳

I might have liked Dev if he hadn't been such a lecher🤢 🤢 🤢 Keep your filthy hands off Swara!😡 And who is this friend who has turned now?! Turrncloaks are always just the worst sort of people😡

And you are fooling no one Swara...not Dev, not us😆 We KNOW how much you like Sanskaar now😆 & Dev is a smart guy & hence might just figure out too😆

I had always known Laksh cannot be the traitor. He is too 🥱 for that😆 Now I hope you dont intend of making Laksh & Adarsh SwaSan's rescuers because that would be utter
Edited by The.Lannister - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for the super quick Res Nita 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

*Updated*

As I read the first paragraph and the description of his appearance, I was still mulling..friend or foe...maybe friend pretending to be foe...and towards the end of the chapter I was like eeeyuk foe foe foe foe !!!

His voice made me giggle, shriller when agitated 😆

So basically Sanskaar's actions to save that poor man landed him in a toughie !! Sigh, the burdens of being a saviour ! I guess seeing Veer, gave DSR an inkling of Sanskaar's identity ! Hate that the trio are in such a fix...and even worse that Sanskaar is against so many ! These bleddy gaaonwale are also of no help... ! As always his thoughts rest only with Swara's safety. Loved how his protective streak flared in that conversation regarding who Swara will ride with.

Despite Swara's dodge with Maithili and (vik)RAM, DSR already identified (atleast Sanskaar) them. He definitely seems intelligent although utterly vile and lecherous. Sanskaar's ire is palpable. Ugh, what's with this royal landscape and there not being any worthy adversaries to contend with. It's like bechara Sanskaar has taken that burden for all four kingdoms !

So he's got Sanskaar's weapons, the map, the horse and the girl L Not good news at all. I can't tell you how much I look forward to Sanskaar wiping the floor with DSR and especially obliterating that smug expression off his face !! All these princes were clearly bested by Sanskaar in the past and are still carrying that grudge !! The sadistic pleasure he derives in showing Sanskaar his helplessness is making me cringe !

Lakshya not the traitor...well I didn't expect him to be...like I said, don't credit him with too much intelligence 😆...but didn't expect to be an entirely new clan (i thought the traitor might have been Adarsh in cahoots with someone else), the whole of which is out to get the other kingdoms. So the plan is to torture Sanskaar and revel in making him suffer. Beta, you are better off trying to finish him off, because obviously you don't know Sanskaar and the fact that he'll use exactly that time to annihilate you ! Na key milega, na supply treasures, na kuch !! He best pray that he get an easy death, because Sanskaar is going to making him pay hell for all past crimes as well as for Swara !! I am completely hopefully J...yes S will go through some pain, but that will only make him stronger and better. I'm not sure if Sanskaar is giving him the upper hand here in terms of gleaning more information, or if his tiredness and exhaustion is making him not see the big picture, but have full faith in his return to awesomeness !

Who is this old friend, tsk..really Sanskaar was just surrounded by the worst people !! Seriously hope it is not PKJ *please no..no...no...I'll go into denial* But given DSR used an expletive (whether he meant it literally...which would be an interesting angle) to address PKJ...I'm guessing it's not him *heart still holding out*

Applause for Swara's plan...I hope it throws him off if only slightly. While I do think Devendra is very shrewd, he might just do stupidity if bewitched by Swara *though that might be more DDD's strengths !!*. Nevertheless good try Swara (you can see Sanskaar almost hit his head with his palm, but for now he can only despair)...but who knows maybe she holds out until the merry men come *okay where are theyyy ??*

Loved the update Shru...some answers...more questions...more suspense :) Keep up the brilliance ! Will wait for the next part eagerly ! mmmwwaaah *still continuing with Veer style*

Edited by bones123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Perilous Revelations indeed. So the traitor is Devendra Singh Rathore! And this revelation is quite stunning to Sanskaar because he also comes to know that Lakshya was never involved in the 'treachery', which truly disrupts his best laid plans.

But then Devendra is not acting alone, cannot be- for when Sanskaar was 'found', the fourth map, the key code and the Maheshwari heirloom sword were missing. And when Sanskaar escapes with Swara, he only had the Maheshwari portion of the map - which is what Devendra retrieves from Sanskaar's belongings.
But he believes that Sanskaar is in possession of the key code??? Further, he is confident of the Gadodia portion, which is still, presumably, in the safe keeping of the Maheswaris.

And Devendra's reference to "as an old friend of yours, who will be delighted to see you again and he will use his powers of persuasion," is it Surendra Bagri (purely guessing).

The ending - Swara steps up - getting in her word before Sanskaar can speak one. She is surely following her guts and attempting to buy time but does she have the gumption to carry it out to its conclusion?

Sanskaar shutting his eyes in despair - no, not because he believes Swara's words, I think it is because he is aware that she is trying to buy time and is actually worried about the consequences such an act would lead to (more so for her especially if he is unable to assist her).

I am tired - your revelations have actually raised so many questions, my mind is in a whirl! I am going to wait for the next chapter, as patiently as I can.😉

love,
Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shruti🤗
So the traitor has been revealed.
Prince Devendra, oh how I would love to punch him for causing all this trouble for Sanskar.
And that creep is eyeing Swara😡
I just wish Sanskar is freed quickly so that he could beat him black and blue.

So Swara is trying to free Sanskar by acting helpless .
But will Devendra believe her?
And hope Sanskar realizes she's just acting.But I'm sure he'll quickly catch on to her act.

The story is getting more and more interesting with every update but you leave me on tenterhooks when you end it at a cliffhanger.

Thank you so much Shruti, for such an amazing story.
Edited by Vini224 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shruti, my friend
While reading the update I was little confused. But I was sure that the unknown man realized the real identity of them. I was suspicious about his act. He observed swara and sanskar and he find that they were not married. And his men were also cruel. And they caught veer too.
The man gave a special attention to swara. His act were to mysterious. And swara was not feeling comfort with him. A strange fear was haunting her.
But at last the mystery was solved. He knew about the real identity of them. The real enemy of sanskar. But sanskar realized it bit late. Devendra always hated sanskar. He plotted plan against sanskar.
But he wants the map
But I think sanskar will never gave it. Because he is not a traitor.
But one fact is true. Devendra is a good enemy to sanskar. Because some time our enemies gave a special strength to find against the odd.
Sanskar is a warrior, so he will fight for his country.
But I think the last dialogues of swara is a idea of her. Because she find the real traitor. So to save sanskar she is doing this.
But what will happen next?
I really loved this update. And it was really nice.
Eagerly waiting for your next update.
Thanks for the pm
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 16 is brilliant. Never expected the leader to be a prince of another clan. But nonetheless sanskaar has found the traitor and I am sure he will find a way out to escape and prove himself innocent.
Now coming to Swara I am impressed with her, she is playing a very nice game with devendra. I am sure she has said the kidnapping part so that devendra trusts her on she not liking sanskaar at all and wants to get away from him as soon as possible.

Now have to wait and see whether devendra believes her and how is sanskaar going to react. Will he understand her or not.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shruti !!!!!!!!!😊
My heart will be in my mouth until your next update ! You've left this brilliant story ( and our nerves)😃 on a knife's edge 😲

Res for now..couldn't not respond and give a big THANK YOU for this!

A big 🤗 for treating us with it to beat the Monday blues!
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Posted: 9 years ago
hiii shruti...well i hv one thing to cnfess dear...
after entering this forum i just used to b a very silent reader and moreover a very inactive person.
bt as time grows i started get into ccs ats ffs etc...
when u send me the link for the first time i didnt cmmnt cz i was busy in reading ghe t1 section just to get the plot...now i am done with it so now i will comment here.

welll The bnd btween swasan is truely commandable.
Their frndship and bond is awesome
no comment about ragini total wastage of time.
do update and pm me
u descrideb the era in a best possible way!!!!
i am loving it...
With Love

Soumi.

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