DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- T2- DELETED- AN- PG 1 - Page 29

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res. 😊 Shru please bear with me, as the un res could take time. Lots of work to catch up on at office, and some pending un res's on other threads to do. Plus am writing something which a few pals had requested me for.


Liked chap 11 a lot, and you know I don't like giving cursory, proforma comments to updates by you, Saku, Naina and a few others...

Shall un res either later today or tomorrow pakka. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji


Sis xoxo

As I said on our scrap exchange, no rush whatsoever, you take your time and focus on the real life stuff- this can happily wait! Love to you x
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome update

The update was surprise. It was a swasan centric update.
The beginning of the update was nice. Swara was thinking about yesterday and the time she spent with sanskar.
They enjoyed each other's company.
But when she not find sanskar and veer, she was worried about him.
She searched the whole house. At that time a unknown feeling was there. She was thinking about him.
Her brain says that he was a traitor and he stole the map
But her heart was saying another. He was not a bad person, she was a stranger for him, but he saved her life.
And she also remember the words of that old man
She felt a fear in her mind.
But after seeing sanskar she was happy. She was at the zenith of happiness.
But sanskar's words spoiled her happiness.
Her eyes was filled with tears.
But after realizing his mistakes sanskar done all the possible methods for forgiveness.
The story of samarjith and kalyani was heart touching.
They loved each other and betrayed by the people, they believed them as their well wishers.
Samarjith's revenge for kalyani's death and his love for kalyani was beautifully described by sanskar
After hearing the story swara came down stairs.
Now he knew how to handle his princess.
The whole update was really nice
And you beautifully portrayed the emotions of thoughts of swara and sanskar.
Waiting for your next update


Hey Sakkiyah 🤗

I made this all SwaSan as a little treat! And you have perfectly summed up the chapter as always 😃 It covered all of that and now puts them in place for the next stage of their journey. So glad you liked it and felt that I did justice to the emotions! Until the next chapter then, thank you so much! Love,
S xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago
All the updates are just so superb and amazing ...particularly loved chapter 11!!! The growing feelings of Swara and Sanskaar for each other are described all too beautifully but poor innocent souls ... They don't recognize it or rather swara doesn't but Sanskaar is fighting it tooth and nail knowing he doesn't deserve her after causing her so much pain ... Tho he doesn't realize tht right now he is the balm too of all her pain and she is slowly but surely falling head over heels for him too...

Can't wait for chapter 12 where u will take us with Swara and Sanskaar to Samkalgoonj...by the way tht love story was so beautifully heartbreaking...I don't wonder and dear innocent Swara being so affected by it!

Lotsa love
Tas
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: amimus

This is truly Swansan related chaptersand so Damn refreshing after the gloom that has come in the show itself.

Loved the Update and now waiting for the action as they can not live in the isolated haveli for ever.


Hey Amina,

So glad you loved this and it provides some relief from what we have to currently watch! 😃 Thank you! Yes, action will come soon enough 😉

Love, S xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sneharay

Its really a lovely update..full of swasanalicious.. 😊


Thanks a lot Sneha:)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

AMAZING...IS THE TALE TRUE...WOOW...HOPE SWARA AND SANSKAAR PRAY FOR EACH OTHER...THIS IS MIND BLOWING...CONTIUE SOON


Thank you so much! You might get your wish in the next chapter 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

It was awesome 👏
Full of swasanlicious 😆


Thank you Sujay, glad you liked it! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Wonderful updt.
Read lst 3parts 2gethr.
Love it.awsm.
Swasan<3<3


Hey Sonu! Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you Sadhana 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dearest Shru,

I'm back although two chapters later... My computer was out of order. I hate typing from phone, you know the lengthy comments I want to give here, it would take me eons to type those from my mobile. So I just gave up and waited until my computer would rise from its ashes.

So coming to chapter ten. When I read the first scene I did know this was a dream sequence, what I wondered was who was the dreamer.

It turned out to be Ragini. Wow! Now that's some seriously interesting insight in to her mindset. So she is at the same time cursing her sister and fearing the outcome of that curse...what a diabolical and confused soul she is!

Then again, I guess that is a true gist of Ragini. Inside her own self she is struggling to justify everything she does, she reasons with herself that she does not have any choice and has to do what she is doing.

That I feel is her way of finding peace, but a tiny part within her is not satisfied with that and consistently reminds her of the evil deeds she has committed, making sure she never attains peace.

Then coming to Sanskar and Swara. Again that was masterful. The way their bond seems to grow and the subtle notes of attraction Sanskar is feeling.

Swara is really at see when it comes this topic right? She couldn't see the building up problem with Lakshya at first and now she can't see Sanskar is losing himself.

As for Sanskar I love this man more with each update. The way you present the layers to his character one by one is just so much a treat to read. It feels now that I personally know a prince called Sanskar, I could practically visualize the walls of his heart cracking and being tossed off..that waking up beside Swara scene was that profound!

Although I must say I was shocked when he rode of so suddenly...

Then chapter 11...

Can I just say he deserved it?

Swara did well, shutting the door on his face. Such arrogance! But I can see where Sanskar is coming from. He has much important motives in mind and has absolutely no time to waste for his poor heart...the attraction and can I call it the first signs of love, is scaring him. He is afraid to make a bond that would weaken him...perfectly understandable for a man in his position.

And Swara...

I enjoyed reading how, instead of sizing her opportunity to run, the poor girl was worrying about the missing man! So, something has caught fire here as well huh? And she being typical Swara says that it is honoring her word and of cause friendship...yeah right, if she says so.

I loved the scene that followed. Of Sanskar trying to coax her to forsake her self imposed imprisonment and finally succeeding there. In the dark times that was a much needed spark.

The story about the ruins, not only captivated Swara's interest but mine too. That was a wonderful story. But I fear something sinister would be waiting for them at the ruins...it won't be a silent journey. Perhaps, they'll have to move away from this temporary heaven as well.

Well I'm not match to guess anything in such a brilliant tale, so I would shut up and enjoy whatever comes my way greedily.

Do continue soon!

Loads of love,
Sakura

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