DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- T2- DELETED- AN- PG 1 - Page 28

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Chapter 11:

Blooms amidst the desert😆

Throughout this chapter all I did was 😆 😆 😆

So in the end when she had the chance she couldn't leave huh?😉😆 And not only did she not leave, she even felt abandoned & betrayed😛 I am so glad that she is finally understanding what her subconscious has known all along, that there is more to Sanskaar than meets the eye😳 And then the relief she experiences to see he hasn't left her & then of course the volley of questions😆

Nothing hurts worse than the truth. So when Sanskaar pointed out the obvious she naturally had to be offended 😆 In marathi we have this saying "tuza maza jamena; tuzya vaachun karme na" which loosely translated would be 'cant live with you, cant live without you'😆 These two have already reached that point. They pretend to tolerate one another but as soon as one leaves they panic & cannot rest till they see him😳 Aag dono taraf barabar ki lagi hai😉

The famous silent treatment👏😆 Make him squirm!!!😈 (though to be fair he didn't say anything wrong & he wasn't even rude😛)

Aww so he does not eat because she wouldn't have eaten?😳 And he misses all the little things he used to enjoy so much with her around, her humming as she worked, her constant smiles, her wit...it is these everyday things which make any relationship more special IMO.

She is hanging on to his every word but damn if she will let him know😆 Hunger acche accho ko pagal bana deta hai! Grab a Snickers, not a pebble 🤣 Poor poor Princess, almost hit by a stone 🤣 I hope he didnt forget to feed my Veer at least. Inka toh ye sab chalta rahega. First drove him like crazy in that desert, then now at least feed the poor thing🤔

He sure knows how to draw her out😳 That tale seems to me a mix - n - match of many tales, some from his own life, some just tales🤪 Though it was sad😭 Now get ready for some endless questions on that folktale Sunny! If I know her at all pareshan karke chodegi ye chori tumhe😆

And so many titles for these two here😆 Each of them all 😆 He isn't Prince Churlish Swara...he is Prince Charming

He sure knows how to win a woman's heart. So he was angry that he left her alone unguarded😳 You are not fooling us one bit though🤪

Why were they calling each other Prince & Princess. It reminds me of something🤢 Just Sanskaar & Swara is OK 😳

P.S.: This was in the last chapter but I forgot to mention it there: he said she was prettier than the horse & that pleased her?? 🤣 But then Veer is a handsome steed so yeah maybe it was a compliment 😆 Veer

Originally posted by: Shuchi2013

Hey,

Read both the chapters in a go!!!I was having a bad day and they made it happy.Loved them immensely.I absolutely am enjoying the turn story has taken!!Running out of compliments!!Thank you for such amazing chapters!! :-)

Originally posted by: piccola1

That was utterly charming, Shru !😃 Heartwarmingly satiating yet leaving me eager for the next ! Will have to read this over and over, because your writing is so addictive-ly beautiful...I can literally "see" our golden couple together !😊

I will add more..but gotta rush to work. So res for now.

Just want to add a BIG Thank you Hug for giving us these scrumptious weekend treats ! 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Lanny 🤗

God- the aggro it took this time to get the title. Lots of options were discarded!

Aha yes- when the door and windows were wide open, she caged herself in for how is she now to leave without him? 😳 I felt that her subconscious would feel the abandonment and brand her a betrayer even if common sense screamed at the illogical side of that. Like you say- she's questioning in the right direction and her heart believes in him already- it just needs consolidation to a more fixed point!

😆 Perfect saying here- totally apt!! Oh yes, this fire is raging and I like them trying to throw water on it as its only making the flames flare up more! Well, see that was the thing- the woman is always right and if you say anything at all in that wrong moment- God help you! And him being harsh- uh oh, bad move by the boy so squirm he had to.

I totally agree- the little things between a couple truly define the beauty of their relationship and with SwaSan that is endless no? Grab a snickers 😆😆 (That's actually a line from an advertisment of Snickers which is telecast here. IDK if you have it seen it or not😆) Reminded me of the Take a break, have a Kitkat too 😆. Yum I want chocolate now- trip to upstairs vending machine coming up I think! OMG- I almost put in that he did feed Veer but thought that even for me, that much detail was not needed 😆😆 (No detail about Veer or Pawan or Sanskaar can be extra dear! We need everything we can get about these awesome threesome😳)

Ah yes that tale. I made that up literally whilst writing that scene, discarding some other ideas I had vaguely formed. It's a mix yes, some of it is redolent of them but other bits not and I have very deliberately used it here as in the next chapter it will lead to some communication, some confusion and it is for readers to find out at some point, if there is indeed any foreshadowing intended or whether it is a parallel of what can be/ will be/ may not be- oops, think I have confused myself with that 😆

He is so Prince Charming! Wonder if he will ever get called that 😉 (Some other girl should, while describing him to her other girl friends in front of Swara 🤣 It has always been my dream to have a bunch of girls discuss Sanskaar in front of Swara while she sits & fumes 😆)

Oh the Prince and princess- in that setting and era, they are unlikely to be totally informal unless actually a couple and even then- simply feels natural that they refer by their title no? So despite the writing in english, I am imagining the "Rajkumar" and "Rajkumari" address they must have to pay and Sanskaar is already sometimes just on Swara 😳 but to make her get to that stage, I need to build more up 😉. It is in the programme! Also, as for the show - they did that after DK I claim!! 😛 So the titles must stick. Even Lakshya is getting called a Prince so ...😆😆

PS: Haha, Sanskaar is taking every chance to compliment and every chance he takes seems like a compliment to Madam now 😆. Awww Veer!!!

Lots of love xoxo

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res

UnRes

Dear Shru,

"Sometimes following your heart means losing your mind"

This is the state of both Swara and Sanskaar - and hence neither of them wants to hear what their hearts are saying.😊

So Swara wakes up with a gentle smile and a sense of well being - surely indicative of how safe and content she must have been in Sanskaar's company - unbeknownst to her and her mind , her heart realises the pull Sanskaar has. The battle between her mind and her heart - a logical (if impractical) idea of escape was labeled as betrayal by her heart. And joy and concern for Sanskaar which soon transforms to hurt at Sanskaar's harshness (I am sure her mind must be telling her heart -"told you so").

Sanskaar's mind seems to be faring a little better (could be that being a warrior, he is far used to overruling his heart and thinking with his mind ) but not for long - after all the heart wants what the heart wants - and his mind simply allowed his heart to rule.

And what followed was priceless - Slave prince / Prince Churlish / Prince Grumpy. 😆😆😆

Petulant Swara and Sanskaar trying to persuade her. From banging on her door to throwing pebbles at her window (I was half hoping he would actually try to climb to her room through the window). And finally, he threatens to break down her door.

The folktale - of Samarjit and Kalyani was faintly reminiscent of Swara and Sanskaar (she would now no longer be a princess and he has already been branded a traitor) but please do not bring any more parallels (actually Swara has already been betrayed by her sister, still) especially in resurrecting Kavita (I have a bad feeling about this🤔).

Blooms amidst the Desert: immediately brings to mind:

"Mayflowers blooming around him, fragrant, filling the air with a sweet and wonderful sweetness." -Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

that is what I felt reading about SwaSan (heavenly bliss) - a full chapter of only Swara and Sanskaar -with no other characters, with the exception of Veer.

Love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Shru, baby I'm so sorry! I've read the entire update, but I'll unres tmrw!
Really sorry. Pakka tmrw!!