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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: dilwali
simply love this story n lovely update Shruti

Hello! Thank you so much for this! Glad you are enjoying the story! What is your name btw? 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#292

Originally posted by: .Avengers.
Ah why you are apologizing? We will take a full chapter of SwaSan over action anyday 😆

So Sanskaar went out to clear his not so pious thoughts and left her and Haveli unguarded. Swara thought he had left her alone in middle of nowhere or something. Poor girl was so scared and worried for him, but he was so confused with the foreign feelings she invoke in him that he lashed out. His words also hit her deep down, really why when she got the only opportunity to run away she didn't, too consumed by her worries? Sure, they were in middle of nowhere, but she could have tried. It didn't cross her mind, rather she was busy dwelling whether the man she now thinks is a different person can be a enemy of country who was going to betray them all or not. You are in so deep,girl 😆

Sanskaar was adorable. He realized quickly how rude he was to her and so wrong to lash out at her when she only meant well. I liked how he didn't wait for her to calm down. He started from door and ended near window 😆 he thought the stones hit Swara 🤣 Slave prince at Swara's service, this guy is trying to kill with cuteness. Who can resist him, really?

That story is like another dimension love story of SwaSan. A girl who was princess but now a commoner, the prince who care about nothing but her, and literally burnt the world down when she was taken from him. The parallels are too much to miss, but hope there's no lady in waiting who fancy prince , or someone in love with the Prince *cough*Cavity*cough*. Let her stay dead.

So they are going to this ruin next, so the action will take place there? Maybe his friend who was captured gave him up? Or its back in Mansion?

Looking forward to next update.

Riya.

Dear Riya 🤗

So glad you are back and with more fab comments! 😳 These two are both in so deep and are simply playing games with themselves pretending otherwise. Swara is actually genuinely of course unaware to a greater extent than Sanskaar but he is in a real bind as he simply has (according to him) no time for this and also cannot even think on it due to his current status. But when does the heart listen to such complications?!

You liked this Sanskaar? He is irresistible no? With the whole strong man bending as he feels bad for being mean and then those antics. Haha, I thought it funny if in throwing stones he felt he had hit her! I love Sanskaar so much 😳😳

Ah- the SamKal story- yes it does have some tangential parallels or at least enough to make it a real risk of foreshadowing for our couple. But whether that actually pans out or not we shall have to see! I see you too dread Kavita- she is my most hated character in SR on screen to date I think

There is action at the ruin yes. As to how it finds them and how they fare- you will soon see! You will hopefully find some twists in how the action ensues and then what happens after too 😉

Thank you for this and will look for you on the next part xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: .Avengers.
Hunger acche accho ko pagal bana deta hai! Grab a Snickers, not a pebble 🤣

LMAO 🤣 Such apt ad line for the situation. But no package food in those days.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: pearl.16
Hi dear !! Just read the recent updates... All were awesome !! Omg !! Finally these two r realising something... Love..
Love is soon gonna knock their doors...

Do continue soon dear... Keep me updated !!

And yes big thanks for the PM !!

Thank you so much Pearl, so happy you are loving the way the story is going and especially with the changing feelings of SwaSan 😃 I will keep you on the PM list so don't worry, you'll know when I update. Lots of love,

Shruti x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: simsen23
shruti.. 😊
This chapter was all about swasan whom we love most
Swara's reaction in the morning cosidering the absence of sanskar was beautifully described .
she had a chance to elope ...but somewhere in her heart she believes that sanskar is not a traitor ...
she is blushing thinking about sanskar
sanskar was attracted to her but the feelings are mutual ...
his anger ...the way he convinced her was adorable
ya swara was moved by that story ...
I am looking forward to the next chapter ..
love ,
simi 😊

Hey Simi 🤗

Our SwaSan ❤️. Thank you for your kind words, glad you liked the description of Swara's turmoil on finding Sanskaar gone when she woke. And yes, Sanskaar too in way in over his head but both want to deny this at the moment. I'll try not to disappoint with 12 😃

Love,

Shru x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: foresight
just read chapter 11...beautiful. both are facing internal dilemma of their own and you have brought that beautifully. they sense what they feel but are unsure if whether they should and their interaction and the cute nok jhok was portrayed beautifully. so now they are off to samkalgoonj i guess. i don't know if that story which sanskar told swara was make belief that he made up to entice her, but that place might just cement their relationship a lot further.

Hey Sapna 🤗

Thank you hon! So glad you liked it! Aha- the story he told her was true and not his own creation and of course he tried to make it out that he doesn't quite believe in all that and will remain unmoved at the place- so we shall have to see won't we?! 😉 I have plans for something to happen at that place but am hoping that despite the lack of secrecy I have kept about that, the actual execution will still make it something people want to read 😃

Love, S xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot
hi shru...🤗
read last two chapters together...awesome updates😊👏
thanks for the pm😳
update more soon😃
keep writing😊

Hello Ray dear 🤗

Thank you and lovely to know that you enjoyed both 10 and 11 😳. I'll update 12 as soon as I manage to get some time to write 😃

Love, S x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome update
Prince samarjit and kalyani story was interesting and emotional.
looking forward to read more

Thank you Javeria, glad you loved it 😃 xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Replies in red 😆

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Shuruuu baby...🤗
Did i tell u ur amazing...??? 👏
What should i say about this chapter..11...im not good at writing.. detail analysis but in short i can say it was fantastic, beautiful, and amazingly written chapter...😳😊

Loved swasan nok jhok...they are behaving like lovers/ husband n wife...im in awe ...

Waiting for next chapter penned down by ur skillful n beautiful hands...love u shuruuu...❤️
Fingers crossed for next chapter...waiting...☺️

Talia 🤗🤗

Well you said amazing now so for that I 😳😳 and thank you!!! So happy to know you loved it that much! Yes they are behaving like a couple already right?! I'll work on the next chapter, I know it's very special to you 😉

Lots of love always xoxo

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