DARK KNIGHT- A SwaSan FF- T2- DELETED- AN- PG 1

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Wonderful updt.
Read lst 3parts 2gethr.
Love it.awsm.
Swasan<3<3

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dilwali

@dilwali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

simply love this story n lovely update Shruti

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Ah why you are apologizing? We will take a full chapter of SwaSan over action anyday 😆

So Sanskaar went out to clear his not so pious thoughts and left her and Haveli unguarded. Swara thought he had left her alone in middle of nowhere or something. Poor girl was so scared and worried for him, but he was so confused with the foreign feelings she invoke in him that he lashed out. His words also hit her deep down, really why when she got the only opportunity to run away she didn't, too consumed by her worries? Sure, they were in middle of nowhere, but she could have tried. It didn't cross her mind, rather she was busy dwelling whether the man she now thinks is a different person can be a enemy of country who was going to betray them all or not. You are in so deep,girl 😆

Sanskaar was adorable. He realized quickly how rude he was to her and so wrong to lash out at her when she only meant well. I liked how he didn't wait for her to calm down. He started from door and ended near window 😆 he thought the stones hit Swara 🤣 Slave prince at Swara's service, this guy is trying to kill with cuteness. Who can resist him, really?

That story is like another dimension love story of SwaSan. A girl who was princess but now a commoner, the prince who care about nothing but her, and literally burnt the world down when she was taken from him. The parallels are too much to miss, but hope there's no lady in waiting who fancy prince , or someone in love with the Prince *cough*Cavity*cough*. Let her stay dead.

So they are going to this ruin next, so the action will take place there? Maybe his friend who was captured gave him up? Or its back in Mansion?

Looking forward to next update.

Riya.

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Hunger acche accho ko pagal bana deta hai! Grab a Snickers, not a pebble 🤣

LMAO 🤣 Such apt ad line for the situation. But no package food in those days.

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Pearl

@pearl.16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Hi dear !! Just read the recent updates... All were awesome !! Omg !! Finally these two r realising something... Love..

Love is soon gonna knock their doors...

Do continue soon dear... Keep me updated !!

And yes big thanks for the PM !!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Dear sweet friends
Thanks for ensuring I woke to some heart warming replies on this cold and dreary Monday morning here! I'll reply to all once my work day allows but big thanks in the meantime to those who have already shared their kind views xoxo

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 9 years ago

#267

shruti.. 😊
This chapter was all about swasan whom we love most
Swara's reaction in the morning cosidering the absence of sanskar was beautifully described .
she had a chance to elope ...but somewhere in her heart she believes that sanskar is not a traitor ...
she is blushing thinking about sanskar
sanskar was attracted to her but the feelings are mutual ...
his anger ...the way he convinced her was adorable
ya swara was moved by that story ...
I am looking forward to the next chapter ..
love ,
simi 😊

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#268

just read chapter 11...beautiful. both are facing internal dilemma of their own and you have brought that beautifully. they sense what they feel but are unsure if whether they should and their interaction and the cute nok jhok was portrayed beautifully. so now they are off to samkalgoonj i guess. i don't know if that story which sanskar told swara was make belief that he made up to entice her, but that place might just cement their relationship a lot further.

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: Chexa123
Wow chapter 11 was simply adorable👏👏 ...that angry and hurt Swara... Sanskar trying to pacify her in many ways... then that wonderful story of the prince and princess...it was a cute and lovely chapter... thnxx for updating... can't wait for the next...

Thank you so much dear! So glad to see you enjoyed reading it and found those two as adorable as I see them as:). Keep reading, I'll be back soon!

Love,
S