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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

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Hi Shruti🤗 , Sorry for the the late Unres. A chapter entirely devoted to Swasan why would anyone complain about that😃. Swara is embarrassed to know she slept next to Sanskar all night, i do understand her😳 . But i loved how she somehow doesnt feel it was wrong . And Swara search for Sanskar started once she found out he was not there. i really loved how you explained her conflicting emotions, one side she wants to run, the other side she is worried that he abandoned her and her relief when she finally saw him from the balcony. That was the best part of this chapter 👏. I liked the whole chapter , it just that i loved this part a bit more.

Loved the Swasan interaction and i liked Swara childish Resolution as an payback for his harshful words😎. Sanskar finally makes her comeout after countless attempts including filling the pots with water , loved the whole story he told her about the significance of the place where he promised to take her . So finally they are back on talking bases, i like my Swasan when they are in truce mode😊 . I loved how he finally told her the real reason behind his anger and Swara finally happy again to know he cares about her safety. I like when my Swasan are happy and laughing too . As you know i read it last night itself it took me this long to Unres , sorry about that and Do continue soon .

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Hi Shruti ,

Yep i changed my UN. And i am Good . 😃 . I liked to read about the buried guilt of Ragini , as you know the show is doing an awesome redemption track😡. it was an refreshing change to read about a Ragini that is believable 😊. Also loved the Swasan scenes .

Cant wait to read Chapter 11 . i would love to read it like now but i wait 😆 , if it is longer than i am more happier😃

Nita dear x

Ah yes, the redemption track or lack of on the show is beyond frustrating 😡. Just posted 11- am disappointed at myself as I couldn't cover what I wanted to but it would simply not fit so have set the stage instead for the next chapter and I wanted what I did include to be conveyed too. Hope everyone likes it!

And was so happy you reserved straight away 😃

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: geetkumar
Hi Shruti,
Sorry for the delayed comment. As usual the update is par excellence. Well Ragini's guilt trip was a pleasant surprise. At least she is relatable. And what more to say about Swara and Sanskar. After all they are soulmates. And who understands you more than your soulmate?
Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Dear Geet

Please don't say sorry- your response anytime is so welcome. I am so happy you liked this chapter and am thrilled with the reactions 😳 Thank you so much! Chapter 11 now up!

Love, S x

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: bones123

Yesss...I remember discussing Ragini and our frustrations of how she's so one dimensional on the show with next to zero motivations for her actions (well unless you tally the number of the times she's said haq and pehla pyaarr..*gag*)...that's why I love how well layered your Ragini is...she's a villanious but relatable...her actions and her path chose are condemnable but atleast they have a reason behind it. And the fact that she doesn't enjoy the fruits of her fight as gladly is even more relatable !!

Ditto about man of humour...I find that to be the most endearing quality in any person..!!

So glad that you and Shruti (Lannister...I must at some point virtual discuss with her as well..considering this is probably the third time you've mentioned our thoughts are along the same line) are on the same track about Swara's panic about him leaving her...wheee...will gladly wait for that...

Your comments about 11 are making me grin wide...ear to ear now...can't hardly wait !!

About rest : should we say DK is giving you and Swara sleepless nights...😆...I see your point about the hiatus...but remember not to be away for too long post DK...I don't think the actual show will last me over that period...Here in the fanfic world you bring us character masks and how the leads shield their emotions from the ones they love the most...while onset they are dealing with real cuckoo masks...will not survive :P

Lots of love...hope you have a good week 🤗

Priyu dear xoxo

Shruti is a kindred soul on these matters, she likes in-depth exploration of characters and plot lines like us- she might read this too 😃.

I feel guilty about 11- I had such an ambitious plan of the amount it was meant to cover but even the first part of it needed attention to do it justice so have posted that as 11 and the other section will now be in 12 as it will take a while to write and it will still be rather long I believe. I hope everyone will not be too disappointed.

Awww- thanks for saying you rely on FFs including mine to tide us over bad phases on screen 😳; despite any intention, I bet I won't be able to stay away too long!

Love, S xoxo

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Vianna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#245

Res chapter 11 :)

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Hey Shruti,
Sorry for this late unres. Fab chapter! It was complete SwaSan centric and I am glad that you decided to fit the action packed chapter in the next update and not this one since this chapter has established the growing feelings that each have for the other which they cant seem to understand. Damn cute! <3

I enjoyed reading the whole story about the ruins. You have put in the beautiful Sanskaar-Kavita tv love story (before the stupid track going on now). This part really gripped me. I love to here the stories behind ruins and you have written it pretty captivatingly. :)

I am loving all the names you are coming up with. Princess Sulky, Prince Churlish! Ingenious. I loved this short moment that has taken place between SwaSan. Swara's opinion about Sanskaar is changing with respect to the traitor aspect which is good.

All in all, a cute and sweet chapter of SwaSan goodness. Thanks for this awesome update. Awaiting the next one. :)

-V :)

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: Chexa123
Hiii,
Wow an amazing story line...just spell bound...really great imagination...simply loved it... read the entire chapters in one go... u r a splendid writer... do PM me... waiting eagerly for the coming parts...

Hello my dear! How are you? Good to have you back on one of my FFs 🤗

Thank you so much- am so glad you liked it and can't believe you read them all at once 😲😳. I'll keep you on the PM list for sure:) and just posted 11 so hope you like it! xoxo

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nita dear x

Ah yes, the redemption track or lack of on the show is beyond frustrating 😡. Just posted 11- am disappointed at myself as I couldn't cover what I wanted to but it would simply not fit so have set the stage instead for the next chapter and I wanted what I did include to be conveyed too. Hope everyone likes it!

And was so happy you reserved straight away 😃

x

I just finished Reading it and i loved it . I had to read as soon as i saw that you have updated it . But it little late here so will unres once i get my sleep 😊

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#248

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Dear Shru,

"Sometimes following your heart means losing your mind"

This is the state of both Swara and Sanskaar - and hence neither of them wants to hear what their hearts are saying.😊

So Swara wakes up with a gentle smile and a sense of well being - surely indicative of how safe and content she must have been in Sanskaar's company - unbeknownst to her and her mind , her heart realises the pull Sanskaar has. The battle between her mind and her heart - a logical (if impractical) idea of escape was labeled as betrayal by her heart. And joy and concern for Sanskaar which soon transforms to hurt at Sanskaar's harshness (I am sure her mind must be telling her heart -"told you so").

Sanskaar's mind seems to be faring a little better (could be that being a warrior, he is far used to overruling his heart and thinking with his mind ) but not for long - after all the heart wants what the heart wants - and his mind simply allowed his heart to rule.

And what followed was priceless - Slave prince / Prince Churlish / Prince Grumpy. 😆😆😆

Petulant Swara and Sanskaar trying to persuade her. From banging on her door to throwing pebbles at her window (I was half hoping he would actually try to climb to her room through the window). And finally, he threatens to break down her door.

The folktale - of Samarjit and Kalyani was faintly reminiscent of Swara and Sanskaar (she would now no longer be a princess and he has already been branded a traitor) but please do not bring any more parallels (actually Swara has already been betrayed by her sister, still) especially in resurrecting Kavita (I have a bad feeling about this🤔).

Blooms amidst the Desert: immediately brings to mind:

"Mayflowers blooming around him, fragrant, filling the air with a sweet and wonderful sweetness." -Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

that is what I felt reading about SwaSan (heavenly bliss) - a full chapter of only Swara and Sanskaar -with no other characters, with the exception of Veer.

Love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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Chexa123

@Chexa123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#249

Wow chapter 11 was simply adorable👏👏 ...that angry and hurt Swara... Sanskar trying to pacify her in many ways... then that wonderful story of the prince and princess...it was a cute and lovely chapter... thnxx for updating... can't wait for the next...

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#250

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Loved this chapter Shru. Totally SwaSanlicious! Only SwaSan and they were so cute. I knew it. Swara felt embarrassed that she slept the whole night with Sanskaar. I can understand. But it's ok. I knew Swara would not run away because even she has to start falling for her Knight. 😳 She was so worried that Sanskaar wasn't anywhere around. Her delusional mind giving her no way out. And by that time Sanskaar came. Thank God! She might have run away you never know!😆 I actually sighed, a sigh full of relief, that Sanskaar had come back, while reading😛

Oh my! Sanskaar was so rude. But the rudeness was worth it after reading the entire chapter.😉 Of course, Swara would feel bad, here she was concerned for the Prince and Prince is shutting her up! Bad manners😆. Look, again I started writing nonsense! So coming back, Sanskaar himself felt terrible, I knew he would, he's such a sweetheartt! And his ways of trying to manao Swara were so cute<3😳 If I would have been Swara, I would have literally been flat for this guy and would have started drooling from the window itself.😆😳 Gosh! I'm so besharam. Look, again I got carried away.

So again coming back, Swara was being so childish. She called Sanskaar Prince Grumpy, she was being more grumpy grumpy! She was in no mood to adhere to his continuous pleadings and banging at the door. Just like a 5 yr old kid<3 So cute! Sanskaar will not have breakfast if she doesn't have. Reminds of SwaSan KC!<3😳

So the Prince is throwing pebbles at the Princess' window! So reminds me of Love Story by Taylor Swift if you've heard it. When Swara said Prince Sanskaar, you can go to hell, I literally cracked up! It was soo sweet. Like Sanskaar even I love this feisty Swara.😆😛 Sanskaar tackled her, so cutely calling her his friend again and again. I love this man! The biggest problem of being a fangirl is that you want the hero for the heroine as well and for yourselves as well! Lol😆😳 Again I'm bhatakoing!!

The Story was too good! Swara was too lost in it. Prince Churlish exactly knew how to melt his Princess Sulky! Series of nicknames.😆 Shru, are SwaSan gonna pray for each other there? And then maybe the troops arrive and they have to run and it's all action packed!Is it so? Well whatever it is, I'll be waiting for the update and will try to unres sooner than this.
Love
Sakshi

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