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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#381

Res-

Unres!

Smoke and Mirrors - you are the magician here, Shru!👏

Ragini attempting to double cross Sanskaar - was a master stroke - that she failed was solely because she underestimated Sanskaar. Well, she presumed that Sanskaar would act as she would have - but however, dark and gone he appeared to be, he still had scruples. Unlike Ragini- darkness within and darkness without.

The contrast between the sisters - light and night - It was beautiful, especially since it meant that both the sisters did not have to pretend. Swara had nothing to hide so she could always be in the light and not worry; Ragini in the cover of darkness could stop hiding the darkness within her.

Sanskaar, forced to take Swara with him - well, Ragini did not give him much of chance there - in a way she did win this round without any bloodshed, not what she wanted,I am sure, but a victory for her nonetheless.

Sanskaar giving up so easily on not gaining access to Lakshya's chambers - seems to be more than meets the eye. Not hazarding any guess here.Smile

Regarding Ragini revealing her true self to Swara - an act of smugness with a tinge of overconfidence - guess she was elated at the thought of how Swara could be thoroughly maligned and that nothing could stop her from being Lakshya's wife.

Swara - can be as rigid as she wants for now, once the betrayal sinks in, Sanskaar would be the only one who comforts her!

All in all - an amazing update!

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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piccola1

@piccola1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#382

Brilliant, Shruti ! 👏

I realized that I had been holding my breatg all thru Chapter 7, only when it finished ..what a stunner this was !

Res for now - Couldnt but rush to share my delight with it. But will wait to use my laptop for a "real" reply...

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chandanagimsy

@chandanagimsy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#383

Loved the updates...omg ragini did a master stroke...

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Pearl

@pearl.16

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#384

Awesome updates !! I read all of them in one go !!

Please update soon...

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dilwali

@dilwali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#385

wow Shruti its awesum update n u covered so much. U tried to show Why Ragini felt like this n why she feels so insecure n i m desperate to read how swasan gonna be together alone. U work so hard on stories n update till late nights. All i can say is THANKU FROM BOTTOM OF MY HEART for updating soon.

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Sana

@Forum.Maniac

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#386

Shru, what a brilliant one this is! You have again outdone yourself 👏

I always knew Ragini would double cross Sanskaar, but never expected it to be in this way! That moment when Sanskaar and Swara freeze with their eyes on each other, reeling with what they have just learned, was PERFECT! You described it so well ❤️

And then Sanskaar has no option but to act in the way that Ragini wants (minus the killing part). I got sadistic pleasure from the part where he was all business and Swara was wondering how he could be the same masked man that had helped her. Even that moment when he let her believe he killed that man 😆 Their interactions in the future are sure going to be interesting, looking forward to it!

I was as clueless as Swara abt why Sanskaar wanted her to go to Lakshay's bedchambers and why he relented, when she couldn't, so easily. It would be great if you could explain or is this some mystery?

Woohoo! That confrontation with Ragini was epic. I was all prepared for Swara thinking of Sanskaar as the sole bad guy, but I'm glad you revealed that Ragini was in it too and Sanskaar chose to take her away rather than kill her. Though its still not going to be all bed and roses for SwaSan, waiting to see how this will change the dynamics of their relationship! ❤️

Btw that last moment with SwaSan riding away on the horse, I imagined it to be Picture Perfect Our Prince and Princess!

Eagerly waiting for the next part of this FF, Shru! Continue soon! Lots of love 🤗

PS: I love the way you brought out Ragini's deeply ingrained insecurity regarding Swara and how it is about even the smallest of things like loving the light and not just Laksh, like on the show 👍🏼

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.FairyDust.

@.FairyDust.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#387

Res

IF was finally meherbaan on me and let me comment!!

And...

YAAY YAAY I Knew it! From Our previous discussions on the group, I always knew something like this would happen and I KNEW IT!

Sorry Shru I'm kinda crazy right now as I'm so excited...because I KNEW IT 🤣

Abhi ke liye RES, will come back after I study and read and Unres!

Also, you made this a FF from SS?! Yaay! *doing victory dance*

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#388

Awesome update. Really loved it.

In the update I really loved the swasan parts. It was a real surprise for me. Sanskar was waiting for ragini and she sent swara to sanskar's chamber.

Ragini is a naagin. Sanskar called her right name.

But swara was really surprised by this new sanskar. But she believed that he can't harm some one.

Ragini, only want swara's death. She doesn't deserve a sister like swara, who always wanted to protect her from all the evil.

It was really a sad moment when swara wanted to save her sister from death. For that she was ready to sacrifice her life.

Sanskar saved swara's life.

Waiting for your next update

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a_uma

@a_uma

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#389

totally loved both chapters 6 and 7... 👏👏👏.. Your FF is enthralling me more than the ongoing serial on TV.. its far better to get lost in your beautiful words .. than seeing weird incidents and maasi's antics.. and thats the absolute truth.. 😳😆

Surprising twist... Swara came to know about Sankar's truth.. she was bound to sooner or later... but the way she learnt it suddenly was stunning for her... wonder what she will think of Sanskar now..😲but I am more eager to know about the secret convo between Sanskar and Ragini, just before he left on his mission..

evil Ragini has added her own twist to Sanskar's mission.. kill Swara / leave her to be killed, or take her alongwith him.. of course he choose the latter course.. can't wait to see what happens next. ..