The simmering pain: Raglak STORY Note 11/3/16 - Page 5

Originally posted by: ShaktiArshaKR

Your version of Ragini is very mysterious n appealing..the last chapter was a treat to read..loving the story very much ..Can't wait to read further.

I know right this Ragini is great

Superb..very well written.. 👏

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Wow..
I loved their convo..I love ur phrase making Ragini a mystery...

I love u n ur creations

yupp...till now rags was obsessed with lakshya..but she has yet to become selfless and learn... while laksh has been blind to rags...but now he's,started noticing her...he too needs,to actually understand the real ragini...only then can he fall for her truly madly deeply

Originally posted by: rbb1

I know their conversation was great

Ray thank a lot for ur comments...u r really treat as a reader for me as a writer...

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Ray thank a lot for ur comments...u r really treat as a reader for me as a writer...

you are so sweet x

Originally posted by: Divfan

omg i love this...i was looking for the exact os for the ten days in forum...you expressed ragini and lakshya so deeply...swara has a very secure childhood in comparison to ragini...i know she does not get fatherly love when she was young but she has a loving mother to share her doubts with ..she has freedom ...but we watched from starting that ragini was so badly controlled by her dadi... she never wanted something on her own...but when she get lakshya she was happy...that that is she is getting something she loves so much...but that was painful that the person you loved does not love u...its a very bad feeling and one is not stable to take a good or bad path...at that time sanskar sew the bad seeds in her mind...and then she gets to know that by being devil she can get anything she want...and then here we have a devil ragini...lakshya always wanted a challenge...swara was confident so he loved her ...but noe the weak ragini is confident u described that so well... yes i want a love hate relationship bw ragya ...because swara and sanskar are alike...and ragini and lakshya are alike...a little devil is hidden behind a innocent face in both of them...witch empower them time to time...love this side of your os...


sorry but my excitement write this long comment for you please continue this ...lovely work...will vvisit the forum only for your story..

...omggghg...thank a lot for ur lovely lovely content...in fact I really feel happy that my as has satisfied a reader in u and pulled u to this forum...it's a real pleasure..having readers so much connected to my work...please keep showing ur love and excitement and such a long manner and bekeive me...I would happily dance to a new and try to give a better update...so that I get same conments...

Originally posted by: Porkalai2892

awsm...de way u narrated it was awsm ...

plz to keep reading and commenting

Originally posted by: rbb1

Oh wow this is amazing what can I say love how you are making them both play with each other but please don't make Ragini weak I want to see Ragini strong and smart. I don't want her to let him get to her it will be sad. Thank you for the update x

but ragini has to pay for her deeds...love is not easy...

Originally posted by: ShaktiArshaKR

Your version of Ragini is very mysterious n appealing..the last chapter was a treat to read..loving the story very much ..Can't wait to read further.

mystery in a burning relation gives it a new lease of life...it's necessary to not always be an open book...

Originally posted by: sneharay

Superb..very well written.. 👏

😃