The simmering pain: Raglak STORY Note 11/3/16

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hi Hun are you going to post the next updates today please say yes I can't wait to read it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Wow..
I loved their convo..I love ur phrase making Ragini a mystery...

I love u n ur creations

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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove
Wow..
I loved their convo..I love ur phrase making Ragini a mystery...

I love u n ur creations

I know their conversation was great

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kavyaa0755

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Posted: 9 years ago

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omg i love this...i was looking for the exact os for the ten days in forum...you expressed ragini and lakshya so deeply...swara has a very secure childhood in comparison to ragini...i know she does not get fatherly love when she was young but she has a loving mother to share her doubts with ..she has freedom ...but we watched from starting that ragini was so badly controlled by her dadi... she never wanted something on her own...but when she get lakshya she was happy...that that is she is getting something she loves so much...but that was painful that the person you loved does not love u...its a very bad feeling and one is not stable to take a good or bad path...at that time sanskar sew the bad seeds in her mind...and then she gets to know that by being devil she can get anything she want...and then here we have a devil ragini...lakshya always wanted a challenge...swara was confident so he loved her ...but noe the weak ragini is confident u described that so well... yes i want a love hate relationship bw ragya ...because swara and sanskar are alike...and ragini and lakshya are alike...a little devil is hidden behind a innocent face in both of them...witch empower them time to time...love this side of your os...

sorry but my excitement write this long comment for you please continue this ...lovely work...will vvisit the forum only for your story..

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Porkalai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

awsm...de way u narrated it was awsm ...

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Divfan
omg i love this...i was looking for the exact os for the ten days in forum...you expressed ragini and lakshya so deeply...swara has a very secure childhood in comparison to ragini...i know she does not get fatherly love when she was young but she has a loving mother to share her doubts with ..she has freedom ...but we watched from starting that ragini was so badly controlled by her dadi... she never wanted something on her own...but when she get lakshya she was happy...that that is she is getting something she loves so much...but that was painful that the person you loved does not love u...its a very bad feeling and one is not stable to take a good or bad path...at that time sanskar sew the bad seeds in her mind...and then she gets to know that by being devil she can get anything she want...and then here we have a devil ragini...lakshya always wanted a challenge...swara was confident so he loved her ...but noe the weak ragini is confident u described that so well... yes i want a love hate relationship bw ragya ...because swara and sanskar are alike...and ragini and lakshya are alike...a little devil is hidden behind a innocent face in both of them...witch empower them time to time...love this side of your os...

sorry but my excitement write this long comment for you please continue this ...lovely work...will vvisit the forum only for your story..

your comment is on point

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 6

L was intensely watching the retreating R...still shaken by there convo. She was implying something. She was talking in puzzles. As far as he knew her..she was very open and straight forward...instead of hiding behind she was out in open nowadays...her bold and bindass attitude was truly badass..she could really make an amazing politician or a gang leader behind that very innocent face and eyes. It was unbelievable that a vixen like her could after all this still carry a strange appealing innocence. And this is,where he knew how badly she tried to hide that behind her fake boldness...and he would bring that innocence to fore now. Only this can truly kill the venom in her. That innocence and he we're the only weakness she had ATM. Still in thinking mode he felt her turning back to face him b4 she went away. This mysterious ragini was compelling him..pulling him..and he was more than eager to know the reason behind this sudden change in her.

R: L why did u agree to go with me?

L trying to prolong and gauge her reaction asked with an equal innocence " where "??

R: At my ma barsi, though am genuinely thankful for ur gesture. Why??

L felt she was genuinely thankful. He could see tears forming in her eyes and a searing pain flashing through her big doe eyes just by using the word maa..it had been ages since he had seen such a pure expression on her face..though he had agreed only as a part of his plan..but he realised this had really meant a lot to her..it brought a genuine smile on his face...he took a deep breath and walked slowly towards her studying her every emotion and puzzlement...

He stood straight in front of her...forced her to look at him straight...bent very close..almost a breath away..her eyes grew so big with surprise at his actions but she stood still...he could feel her breath..her heart beat...her quivering luscious lips...damn indeed she was very beautiful ...

R: please say L.. ...y????

L: very softly... coz this was a very important day Forrr Myyy...Wife...and...

R felt her breath hitching in her throat,wife...did he really tell wife...his wife...me..his.. wife...he felt him leaning more into her..felt him cup her face in his hands..his forehead now touched hers...it seemed life had stopped for her...she could feel her heart going crazily haywire...he mind dancing at this closeness

R: Very huskily...did...u say wife...ur wife...

L: Aren't you???

R: and??????

L very huskily..

L: and...I wanted to be there for u..with u..by ur side...by my

wife's side..

R removed his hands from her face took a step back, taking a deep breath..

R: But this time I didn't force you..

L again tried to near her and she backed again with a shock written on her face...he knew..he had hitt the mark...he knew..she was speechless and wanted to ask so many things..but..he wanted to tread very cautiously...she was no more the mousy behnji...but a sharp siren..he had to make her trust him come what may...he had to win her..

L: yeah..u didn't force me...it was my own wish..u r my wife Ragini and I know what this day meant to u..so I had to be there for you..just for you...

He pulled back a lose strand of hair flowing behind her ears..

L: Gudnite wifey..sleep well

And with that he walked away in the house humming a soft tune leaving a bewildered puzzled surprised happy ragini behind...

Since I actually don't watch the show...can u please tell if they share same room or not...

Edited by dreamyjennice - 9 years ago

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Oh wow this is amazing what can I say love how you are making them both play with each other but please don't make Ragini weak I want to see Ragini strong and smart. I don't want her to let him get to her it will be sad. Thank you for the update x