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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear Nimmi,
Firstly my apologies - I was caught up a little in work and only now realised that I had missed the second half of Chapter 60 (my loss) - such a lovely dreamy one) and also forgot to unres Chapter 61.

Chapter 60 - post 2 - all about Gabriel , nay Sanskaar and Swara. She is right, though, if what Sanskaar showed was only a glimpse, what would the total picture be like? 😳😳😳😳😳

Chapter 61 - so much of angst and sorrow - it was heart-rending to read about their 'confrontation' and Baba's death. Well, as Baba said, he would find peace and hope Sanskaar finds his life.

Chapter 62 - The final stage is being set. Ram Prasad is certainly too confident of himself - well that is just too bad, especially when he is underestimating someone like Gabriel, who is now on the path of personal vengence. And Apte has his suspicions - well that could lead to another twist.

Maddy final agrees to Sanskaar's mad plan - that must be the only reason he decides to 'gatecrash' the DP Maheswari party.

Eagerly anticipating the next updates!

Love,
Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi! šŸ¤—
Its so heart wrenching to see Sanskaar in this state! Thank Goodness! Swara is with him. she understands him inside out.
every time Sanskaar says he won't cry, his baba is with him. this sentence leaves me teary eyed.
and Maddy is so perceptive.
by the way, despite sad moments, I couldn't help but shook my head at the entry of Maddy in the end! him and his love for parties!!!!!!
Let's see what is the plan? I thought they were going to kidnap Durga!!! but seems it isn't the plan.
eagerly waiting for the next one.
PS- no need to say Sorry yaar, its your story and totally your wish! at least Sanskaar got a greatest father in his baba though for few years and me too wanted his and Swara's meeting. but then... at least he saw(isn't it!) and knew about Swara! and in the end moment he was at peace that he didn't fail as father (though he never failed) and he wasn't leaving Sanskaar alone!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Sanskar was shattered after losing his papa. He was his strength.
Waiting for your next update
Edited by Sakkiyah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
So emotional...
I hope Sanskar will accept his love for Swara soon
Super - Duper Awesome

Amazing Update
Loved It
Post Next Part Super Soon
Thanks for the PM
Edited by 7APK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional update..
Hope apte finds out the truth
N sanskar avenges soon..
I hope he would walk towards light along with swara..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Nimmi!
Read your FF and finally got to comment!
And it's really AMAZING! I mean this would be an understatement I guess but It's just fantabulous and awesome and amazing and brilliant!
Although my UN goes MusicAddict I guess it's more Angel Addict!
I'm really addicted to this one now
Can you please PM me for this. Finally my exams are over and trust me I used to read one chapter here and one chapter there during my exams even!
So can you please PM me and update soon!
Will be waiting
Sakshi
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Posted: 10 years ago
NimmišŸ¤—

No need to apologize yaar. I understand. I am happy by the fact that Rana did mentioned Swara , and advised Sanskaar to allow himself to love and live.😃

Sanskaar is terribly heartbrokenšŸ’”. Just reading about his situation breaks my heart.
I am very glad that Swara offered him some silent comfort.😊

The part where Sanskaar speaks up about his father's death and Swara offers him a much needed silent comfort was very heatwarming. It was really good, really sad but really good.

It's rather touching you know; although the one person who has been a true father figure to him after those many miserable years is gone(he died to save him) but his kitten, is here to comfort him and to provide him strenght. And his baba is also always watching and guiding him from heaven.😳

Maddy is such a darling. 😃He is a true friend. He did left the house when he saw Sanskaar's change of mood. He even agreed to be a part of the crazy plan of Sanskaar.

That was really a bad idea to go to that place which is full of people hunting for your blood. Sanskaar must have been harmed fatally. Well Sanskaar may be numero uno assassin, but it also shows that afterall he is a human and can make some mistakes like that.😊

The graveyard scene where Sanskaar witnesses the last rites of his father was just heartbreaking. 😭

Isn't Ram Prasad being overconfident? Well when there are such situations even few smart people also behave follishly. And how dare he again put the blame of his own deeds on Gabriel. And why did everyone there assumed that he will kill the same person who he considers as a father. At least durgaprasad surely must knew about the bond his so called best friend shared with his son.šŸ˜•

Apte is suspicious if the situation. Chalo someone feom the other side have a suspicion that something fishy os going onšŸ˜†. Well I never excepted him be the one thinking like that. Hope he further investigates into the matter and solve all puzzle pieces. But he should do it discretely. If Ram Prasad comes to know about his suspicions he will not think twice before wiping him out of the picture. And who knows will put even this blame upon Sanskaar.
That laat dialouge of Maddy just cracked me upšŸ˜†. Its gonna be one intresting intresting meeting😃

As always excellent writingšŸ‘. It was an interesting chapter with major twists. Can't wait to see what happens next. How Maddy will carry out Sanskaar's plan😃. You did left us all at a cliffhanger .

And who is this secret player. I am really curious now.😊

Waiting for the next update eagerly.😳

Thank you for this chapter😃
Take care
Lots of lovešŸ¤—

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome..
sankar pain of lossing his fatherly figure...

But lucky kitten was their to lessen his sorrow...
SwaSan are insane...
Maddy... he is just awesome...

Hope Stupid Apte!! get his mind clear...
and start searching for
Its Gabriel plan.. It will work...

So the plan Starts now..
continue soon..
thank u for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
emotional emotional chapter
sanskar is literally shattered can actually feel his pain through ur words
aaahhh * me screaming*😲 this chapter cant describe in words how im feeling
its like i can feel each and every emotions display in last two chapters completely

swara's understanding is speechlessā¤ļø the silence comfort and strength she's giving to her man, her guardian angel is commendable
they both are made for each other in all senses

the burial of a legend and a son watching it from a far controlling his tears as it will pain his beloved father... apte's realization that the man standing in front of him is not the man he wanted to or yearning tokill from so many days but a SON mourning his beloved father "HIS BABA" and really have no wish to live anymore in this cruel world

i really cant believe how can durga prasad even think that sanskar could kill rana... he may be gabriel for the dark world, he maybe the devil, the death himself but still he is sanskar the soul son to his baba only...or maybe DP senses or thinking is now no more and the GOD of underworld is listening to rumors or stories of others
come on atleast he have a doubt that maybe u know maybe... since he didnt actually see gabriel killing rana??šŸ¤”

so in the end finale is nearing...with maddy entering the arena followed by the avenging devil himself... really im having goosebumps now😃




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Posted: 10 years ago
What...Maddy??please don't turn him into a negative character...
I love him...please always keep him in favour of Gabriel and not Ram Prasad Maheshwari.. Plss. I know may be these r just my thoughts but I really don't want Maddy to be seen as " backstaber " even in my dreams..

Anyway I dont think that Maddy has wrong intention, he may just came because he had to attend this meeting...or is it a plan by Gabriel..idk but whatever it is it's a good thing..

Isn't Maddy at danger too as he supports Gabriel.. ??

Ram Prasad's partner is really interesting, eagerly waiting to know his face..

And yeah Ram is over confident about the death of Gabriel...Gabriel is the Angel of Death, he survived many times from death, how can Ram think to kill him simply like that? ...

Update soon...
Thxx for the pm...
:)
Edited by _akaur_ - 10 years ago

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