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TRPS

@TRPS

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#781

Nimmi! I am thinking from yesterday what to say about this!
how excited Sanskaar was for this meeting of his with baba and it went totally unexpected way!
such a heart warming bond they share!
here, I was thinking baba got three children now, and ... don't know what to say!
that scene when he says he will always be with him reminds of the scene between Harry and Serius(just loved the scene and bonding) like in the novel I wanted Serius to live and so wanted baba to live!
well, Baba always wanted Sanskaar to follow the light, let's see, what descision Sanskaar takes!! and blessing for Swasan , that was so pure!!
hope, Swasan together will overcome this loss and other hurdles too.
eagerly waiting for the next update!

Edited by TRPS - 10 years ago

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#782

Mortal self has gone but the spirit lives on! Loved this line!

Sad that Sanskar lost his Baba but atleast Baba left with a smile, happy in his heart to join his wife and daughter.

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 10 years ago

#783

RES ... New chapter ... Yes i am still sad about Rana will unres comment about last chapter soon. First let me read the new one😆

Finally Unres Nimmi...

I knew Swara will be there for Sanskar has the loss his way too much for him to handle alone. I loved how Mav left these two alone once he saw the broken state of his elder brother. I so loved Swara patience and her waiting for him to finally open up about it. I really liked the scene😊...

Ram Prasad used to be a man i found hard to dechiper in the early chapters but for the past two chapters the moment he enters i knew what diabolical plan he would come up with next 😡and just as i expected he did frama Gabriel for Rana death😡 . You trying to keep the suspence about the partner for so long Nimmi, while you are giving all the hints towards the politician i am still thinking that you might surprise me with the twist. well i wait for the reveal then😉...

Devil is back and i like it, He came up with an insane plan that even Mav is scared of it. But if i knew Mav he will support his brother 100%😆 . i just loved how Swara is fully supporting Sanskar in this plan as she knows how much his father meant to him😊.

And just when i was recovering from the loss of Rana , you write the funeral scene😭. It was so painful to see Gabriel lost in thoughts that he failed to notice Apte . But i really loved how Apte the man who is only brawn finally learnt there is an bigger picture seeing Angel looks so lost. That was my favourite scene in this chapter😃..

So Durga prasad Maheshwari is reallly brawns not brains . He believed Gabreil killed his son , okay but how can he easily believe Gabreil would kill Rana . Okay i let it go as he is still mourning the loss of his Son. The meeting went as expected and then Mav made his entry and i am so excited... But Nimmi just letting you know i never for one moment would doubt Mav and i know it was Sanskar plan.You really did a good job of hinting that the funeral scene was what sanskar insane plan but i always knew it was not just that.😎.

I loved this chapter Nimmi. Sorry for the late Unres and You are the Sweetest.🤗

Edited by NitaReid - 10 years ago

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#784

Nimmi...😊

Ya Rana's death was painful.but as you said,the story is set.so its better .Felt very bad about sanskar...😭.

Omg the man has to bear so much pain always.

Swara understands him perfectly.

She tried her best to support him to compose himself.

Swara's monologue was so pure,how she had wished to meet her angel's baba ,her little dreams to meet another father figure.

All broken,but still she won't let her angel to feel lonely.

Maddy's concern for his big bro was so genuine.

Finally sanskar decided to take revenge

Time for the avenging Angel to step in the Battle again .

A wounded man who is hurt mentally is more dangerous than a whole gang of underworld.

Maddy was concerned for him ..but swara understands his pain and let him go to attend the funeral of his beloved baba.still he is ignoring her love and wants to be away from her to protect her..one day he will believe destiny and swara's words.one day he will give respect to her love😳...

Ram prashad played another dirty game,I had expected this move from him.Durgaprashad has lost all his sense that he believes Gaby killed his father!!But apte saw the truth in sanskar's eyes.I hope he will get to know the truth soon.

So Maddy's entry was planned..awesome...

Waiting for the next part dear .

Love,

Simi😊

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#785

Finally read all the updated parts of this story..
Mindblowing nd brilliantly written.. 👍🏼
Thrilling nd interesting.. 👏
Thank you 😊

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manishasatpathy

@manishasatpathy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#786

amazing story till now! honestly i was too shocked at sanskaar's father's death i eud hv loved to see the bonding hd and swara shared
who is this partner?
and its sanskaar's plan to send maddy there
plzz update soon
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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#787

RES!

UNRES!

I am truly very sorry Nimmo di as I truly wanted to pen down the comments on previous parts but it is always one thing or the other happening and I am rarely left with time for myself...and when that actually happens the laziness quota in me turns to magnanimous proportions and I can't write a damn line! I am trying and will edit my spots...today and that has to happen! Gotta let it off my chest!

So before I mark another and leave for Timbaktu here I am. To begin with I never wanted Rana and Swara to cross paths, mostly because Swara could be a cruel reminder of Amyra's loss...or so I think...but it is good that they never met, who knows what painful memories would be triggered once these two would cross each other's path. So it is good that they parted ways without meeting each other! As for Sanskaar, well a broken Sanskaar I could take but this one is shattered to piece and he does not even have the luxury of crying for it'll hurt his Baba and would also dim that fire of revenge in him. I have no idea as to how he is holding up...part of me thinks because he still has Swara and Maddy as family and other says, to quote you here: Darkness belongs to him. He is a torn man...torn to an extent that it defines him now. I can't help but admire him some more...how can one be all clean while being a resident of filthy abyss? No wonder the Titan called him his son.

That entire description of the broken, no, shattered man really did move me. I am a sucker for angst...not because I have a sadist bone dumped in me somewhere but because I believe that pain brings out the true self in you, and Sanskaar is out and naked for people to see. He is still that child who was horribly abused and neglected, who wore his pain as an emblem and one whom the darkness chose. I can now understand his depravity, the reason behind him prying Swara off his fabric and the reason why he hasn't allowed Maddy to cling close...it is one thing to be brooding and dark and it is completely another to be all pitch black and not be sorry about it! (Psst! It is official...I am dying single!!!)

And now the shadow player, you know I had always wanted Ram Prasad to be a dark horse in the show as well. The most dangerous are those who stick by you through thick and thin and then strike you down even before you could suspect. Much like that legendary Iago from Shakespeare's Othello. Such villainy is to respected and admired. Of course Ram Prasad will meet his end and that end would be grotesque but even then he will have managed to achieve and iota of all that he wanted and what's more he has managed to hit his opponents where it hurts the most. I don't think there is anything left to achieve more...the throne he is lurking after has chosen a devil and can be accepted or rejected by him alone!

The partner though...I have some interesting theories on him as well...only time will tell how right I am on the front but it is okay, I will wait and watch! So Sanskaar has up-ed the ante by making Maddy a hound who brought Devil on knees and Swara actually agreed to it all! Brilliant! Here I was thinking one of the three must have grown brains by now but nah! They have all thrown their brains in the gutter and are playing inky-pinky-ponkey with a happy face! Bhagwaan bachaye aise ulluon se!

Things escalated quickly after all that...from Rana's burial to Apte's suspicion and of course Maddy's entry as the per Devil's plan. I am in two minds about how to feel on this one...the finale battle is drawing close and is turning more murkier than expected but now there is too much at stake, hopefully things will end on a saner note or I will go all Hindi TV heroine on you screaming: NAHI!!!!!!!

Edited by Meself - 10 years ago

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#788

Nimmi...🤗

Apologies accepted my dear. I know the story demanded it. But still couldn't control the wave of sadness that came over me and which is still hurting me. But it's okay. I understand.

My heart went out for Sanskar, for his loss. And Swara, she just knows him inside out. She loves him so much and her love will give him strength to come out of his grief, to fight back. The way she supported him was so touching. She is even supporting him in his insane plans just so that he could attain peace. She is what her Angel perfectly said, the wind beneath his Angel wings.

Maddy again proved that he is a true friend. He tried to protect his brother from danger and stood by him in his plan even if it endangered his own life. He stood by him to avenge the death of his father. Another gem of a character you have created Nimmi!

So Apte finally acknowledged the fact that there is more to the scenario than what meets the eyes. He saw the broken form of a son who was mourning for the loss of his father. I hope he will rather try to look into the matter and inform Durga Prasad about the innocence of Sanskar than jumping into action without thinking anything. He seems to be a genuine person.

So finally, Maddy is here to put the plan into action! The final war is about to commence! Let's see what future and destiny has in store for our Angel, his Kitten and their Maddy.

I'm looking forward to the further journey Nimmi. Do continue soon. Thank you so much for your immense love for us! ❤️😊

Lots and lots of love, 🤗❤️

Ashi.