SwaSan & RagLak FF - Janam Janam Ka Pyaar aur Dosti Ch.11 on Pg.12 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
superb update dear really thanks for pm waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
nice...
It awesome..

When is sanskar returning???
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you Everyone for spending your time and Reading, Hope you all enjoyed it 😳

Thank you @Jamina @rbb1 @Abika @avithothi @MysticRiver

Thank you @Jidnyasa - Sanskar will be shown after some more episdoes .. Might take time as I'm writing small updates

Thank you @Sakkiyah - Yes too many love stories in this update ..

Thank you @azira07 - Will update soonish :)


Edited by Shinning_AD - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 6

Laksh and Ragini were talking, however both didn't know what to talk with each other they were quite for a while

After a moment of slience, laksh finally spoke with Ragini, Ragini was feeling shy and didn't know much to talk about

Laksh: Ragini .. Mujhe samaj mein toh nahi aara hai ke kya bolu .. But as you know that now that we are getting married we are going to spend our whole life together so before we have a husband-wife relationship .. Let's be friends first .. I promise you whether I will be able to be a good life partner or not, I will definitely be your good friends (Smiles)

Ragini smiles back at Laksh and replies

Ragini: Mein bhi tumse Waada karti hu ke zindagi ke haar mor pe mein tumhare saath hu .. There's a saying na ke it's easier to find a partner in your friends then finding a friend in you partner ...

After a long time of laughing, talking and chit-chatting Parineeta came to call Laksh and Ragini outside

In The Maheshwari Mansion Hall/Living room, as everyone was done with their discussion on Laksh and Ragini marriage and decided the dates, They had dinner together. Adarsh praised Ragini and Swara for their talent of music and tells even Anupoorna loves it

While having the dinner, Ragini occasionally looked at Laksh while Laksh was looking at Swara and smiling. Ragini notices that but just ignores it for the time being

Dinner came to an end and everyone returned back to Baadi, the preparation was full on progress. Days passed by and the engagement day was coming nearer, the night before, Laksh, Swara and Ragini were all in their own respectively bedroom lost in their own thought

Ragini - (Looking at Laksh's Photo) Laksh .. Laksh .. Kya mein sachh mein laksh se pyaar karne laagi hu? .. (she stands up and goes near her window) Why does my heart beat goes fast when I see him, Why do I feel something when he comes near me? Kya mujhe laksh se sacchi mein pyaar hua hai?

Swara - (thinks about when she first met laksh) - Laksh has become a very good friends of mine .. Why am I thinking about Laksh (she says to herself) He is just my friend and nothing else

Laksh - (Looking at Swara and Ragini's Photo) Swaragini - what a lovely pair of sister they are (smiles) Kal mera Ragini se engagement hone waala hai, paar kya mein Ragini se zaada swara se milna keliye kush hu .. Ragini is a really sweet and nice girl and on the other side swara, very carefree and lively .. But why am I thinking about swara so much? Why do I see her everywhere? .. (He pauses for a second) Am I hiding from my own feelings? Yes, I am .. (Says to himself) Laksh accept your feelings you are in love with Swara ..

The next morning was the engagement which was being held in Baadi, Laksh wore a green sherwani While Ragini wore a beautiful green sari matching. Swara was wearing a Pink lenga

Slowly, The guest started coming and the dance floor was set up with music. Parieeta and Aadarsh send Ragini and Laksh to dance on the dance floor, After a while Ragini makes Swara dance as well as Pareenita and Aadarsh. Throughout the whole time Ragini looks at laksh and once again she notices him looking at swara.

She decides to ask him and clarify about whether there is something going in his mind after the engagement ends as there were too many guest there at the time


Edited by Shinning_AD - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Nice update well it's nice he wants to be trends but why was he looking at Swara, this is not looking very good, I hope Ragini questions him about it before it's too late, thank you for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Really nice update - I like the Rag-Swa-Lak scene in their bedroom
Love triangle coming up
Update soon and PM me
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Chapter 7

The Dance was on going, after a while it was time for engagement, Swara went to get the ring for both Ragini and Lakshy. It was first Ragini's turn to put ring in Laksh's finger, next was Laksh's turn. Laksh takes the ring and was about to put into Ragini's finger when the light turns off

Dadi: Yeh Lights kaise chala gaya?

Swara: Mein check karke Aati hu ..

Swara goes to the light switch to check, all the lights were fine. In few mintus they hear a scream and it sounded much like Swara's voice

Sharmista: Yeh toh Swara ki avas hai.. (sounding worried)

The lights comes back, and there was Swara, surrounded by a young guy in dirty old torn clothes with a knife near her neck

Everyone was surprise and didn't know what to do, But the more they were shouting at him the more he was blackmailing to kill Swara with the knife. The Bose and Gadodia family were standing there wondering who the person could have been and how he is here in this condition While the Maheshwari Family were standing there in shock, not being able to believe what their eyes saw

Sujata was in full tears, Lakshy runs toward and instantly hugs the person.

Laksh: Sanskar Bhaiyaa.. Kaha teh app Itne saal? Do you know how much we missed you ..

Sanskar Pushes Laksh and tells him not to touch him. He was mentally not stable at the moment. He sits on the floor with his hands holding onto Swara's dupaata

The Person was no other that Sanskar Maheshwari, Sujata and Ram Prasad's son and Laksh's cousin brother

Sanskar: Meine kuch nahi kiya .. (Scared) Chooro mujhe ... Kuch naahi kiya meine ..

The engagement gets Halted and The family apologies to the guest for the inconvience caused informing the engagement won't take place that afternoon.

Sujata : Yeh mara Sanskar ko kya hogaya hai? Why is he behaving like this

DP: Mujhe Lagta hai yeh boohot bhaara shock laga hai Issi liyee

Sanskar just holds onto Swara's duppata not leaving it.

Sanskar: Tum Mujhe Choor ke nahi Jaugina?

Swara looks around then looks back at Sanskar and says she won't leave him. Sanskar hides behind Swara's Dupaata. DP says that they should leave now and tells about Bringing Sanskar with him but Sanskar denies going with them and stays close to Swara

Swara tells that she'll come with them and drop Sanskar home, Ragini goes along with Swara. They all sat in the car and reached back to Maheshwari Mansion. Swara stays with Sanskar in the Living room while Sujata and Anupoorna prepares Sanskar's room

Ragini and Laksh stand a side watching them

Swara: Sanskar .. Yeh deeko .. Yeh hai Laksh .. Tumhara bhai .. Come on Hug him

Sanskar gives him a werid look and hugs Laksh. Swara slowly makes Sanskar meet all the family memebers and drop him till his room

Swara: Sanskar Abb mujhe ghaar wapass jana hai..

Sanskar: Nahii .. Mujhe Choor ke maat jao ..

Swara: Yeh tumhara ghar hai .. Aurr chinta maat kaaro mein tumse kal milne Zaaroor aungi ..

Sanskar: Promise?

Swara: I promise ..

Swara Pacifies Sanskar to stay in the house with the promise that she will be back again tomorrow to meet him

As Soon as Sanskar falls as sleep, The family called the doctor to check him up and know what has actually happened to him

Edited by Shinning_AD - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Nice update. Raglak scenes were awesome. But Laksh is in love with swara, but please don't break swaragini. I really love this sister bond.sanskar's entry is also a surprise for me. Waiting for your next update
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh wow so Sanskar is here nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update. Sanskar's entry was awesome. In real story sanskar black mailed the family members that he will kill ragini using the knife. But here it was swara..Laksh's love for his brother was also beautifully portrayed. Thank you for giving such a beautiful update. Waiting for the next update.
Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago

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