SwaSan & RagLak FF - Janam Janam Ka Pyaar aur Dosti Ch.11 on Pg.12 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Nice update.In this update swalak love story started and ragini and sanskar plotting against them. Please don't break swaragini. I really love that sister bond. Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
wow loved the update..tfs for the pm..😳
update soon 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
ho superb dear i liked it a lot and for me ragsan bhi OK but dont make ragini negative yaar *_* thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: azira07

ho superb dear i liked it a lot and for me ragsan bhi OK but dont make ragini negative yaar *_* thanks for pm dear

Yaa plz don't make ragini negative. I want her to be real and let laksh go😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
nice
but it is same story line as that of serial
its like reading wiki of swaragini
sorry if hurts but I guess some creativity must be there to foothold readers Interest.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
First of all sorry for not being here for so many days...
M loving ur story...
Hmm..Ragini.turned negative here too 😔 but of course u hv stored sm thing good for her..

I hope swaragini remains swaragini n dont apart..

Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Thank you everyone for taking you time and reading 🤗

Thank you @Ambika @rbb1 @Mansinarang95 @MysticRiver @Swaragini07 @-Jamina

Thank you @Cinderella3 - Thanks for liking the story and the characters

Thank you @Radhadreamlove @Senoritaamor - No worried, and yes I know many of you don't want negative Ragini but she'll also turn back Positive with a big twist in the story

Thank you @Ishanita - Thank you for your comments, I didn't feel bad at all. Sorry if your feeling bored with the storyline similar to the original one, But it will go on like this till Ragini Makin Drama, after that the story will be different.

Thank you @anzira07 @Sakkiyah - Ragini will have to be Negative but she'll turn Positive soon and Swaragini will be back as one
Edited by Shinning_AD - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 10

Swara confronts Sanskar and asks the reason behind doing all these drama

Swara: Sanskar, kyu karai ho yeh sab naatak? Kya milega tumhe yeh sab karke? What do you want?

Sanskar: Revenage.. mujhe sirf aur sirf Badla chaiye DP aur Laksh se

Swara: Why? What harm have they done to you?

Sanskar: Sab kuch Swara .. Un do baap bete ne meri puri zindagi badal diya .. Mujhse mere pyaar Kavita Chinke..

Swara remembers about Laksh talking about Sanskar and how he left home for his love and was ready to go against his family. She also remembers how much Laksh was missing his brother.

Swara: How can you be so sure Sanskar that were behind all this?

Sanskar tell Swara the story from his side and what happened that day and Why he blames DP and Lakshy for all this


Swara: How can you be so sure Sanskar that it's them? Have you seen them doing it or putting the bomb in the car? No right .. It could be an accident too. I agree I don't know DP and Laksh for as long as you do. But how much I know them they really love you and can never do this all to you. Although DP must have not be happy with your marriage but I believe that he can never do such thing.

Sanskar: ...

Swara: And now coming to Revenge , you want revenage right but from Whom? With Laksh .. Who loves you so much and was the happiest person to know that you are alive? With DP .. who treated you as is own son and never differentiate between you Laksh and Aadarsh? With Anupoorna .. Who you call your mother ? With Sujata .. Who is your mother? With whom are you talking revenage?

Sanskar: ...

Swara: But in all this what is my mistake? What harm have I done to you? Why are you spoiling my life sanskar ? Say something sanskar why are you Quiet?

Swara keeps on talking but Sanskar doesn't say a single word and just keeps on listening.

Swara: You will take revenage on them and then what? You will definitely feel satisfied for a while but then will you be able to stay happy after hurting your family ? The answer is a big No .. In all this your not only hurting them but also those who haven't done any harm. If you listen to me then Please stop all this revenage game, Neither you will be happy and neither other people. Tomorrow is Laksh's and My marriage. Please Let my and Laksh marriage happen peacefully

Swara contiues to gives sanskar a big Lecture [Same as the one in the Original Story] Afterwards she goes back Inside and Whole time Sanskar thinks about her word and thinks what she said was true. He calls Ragini on the phone and informs her he is not going to take Revenage anymore and Tells her to do the same and let the wedding happen [Same as what he tells her in the Original converstation]. He also Informs that after their wedding he will tell the truth about himself to everyone

Ragini: You can't betray me like this Sanskar.. If you won't help me then fine I'll do everything by myself now

The next morning -- It was the marriage day. Ragini takes Swara outside near the Bridge Side

Swara: Ragini tum mujhe yaha kyu lekar aaiho?

Ragini: Kuch nahi.. just to refresh our memories and talk for sometime because today is your marriage and pata nahi Aaj ke baat Whether I Will be able to meet you and talk with you like this again.

Both talk for a while and Soon Swara tells It's time to go home as everyone must be finding them and getting worried

Swara: Really Ragini, I'm really lucky to have a sister like you
Ragini: It's not you who is lucky but it's me to have a friend and sister like you ... BUT .. I'm sorry Swara

Ragini says Sorry and Pushes Swara in to the River. Back in the house Everyone was finding Swara and they ask Ragini but she says she doesn't know where she is at all

Sanskar doesn't Believe Ragini and Brings her into the Room to talk to her and ask where she kept Swara.

Sanskar: Don't try to be innocent infront of me.. I know you very well, tell me where swara is and what you have done to her. I know you are behind all this things

Ragini: Your right Sanskar, I'm the one who have done this to Swara, I am the one who pushed Swara into the River.. Go find her and bring her here in time if you can

Sanskar gets angry on hearing all this and decides to tell the Family about Ragini's truth without caring that his lie will also be out infront of his family about pretending to be Metal

Sanskar tells Ragini's truth but no one Belives him instead Ragini tells Sanskar's truth to everyone. Sanskar Apologise for his mistakes but DP doesn't forgive him neither does Laksh. DP tells sanskar to leave his house as there is no place for such person. Sujata tries to stop him but he doesn't listen to her.

Sanskar leaves the Marriage Venue and goes in search for Swara

Times goes by and it was soon time for the Wedding, Swara still didn't arrive at the venue and everyone gets worried when Ragini shows them the Video of Swara saying she isnt ready for marriage [Ragini had taken that Video by the same way as in the show without swara knowing] Laksh and all the family members including Maheshwari, Gadodia and Bose believe Swara's Video and get's traped in Ragini's Plot. Laksh was all shattered hearing what Swara Said

In the Video, she says she is not Ready for the marriage and now she is going very far away from his life

On the other hand, Sanskar finds Swara and Brings her to the nearby hospital. The doctor checks her up while he waits outside.

Back in the Baadi, Ragini attemps Suicide [Same drama as the show] and Finally Laksh agrees to marry Ragini with the consent of both the families

Ragini and Laksh marrriage gets completed. By the time Swara gets concious and Sanskar brings her back it was too late. RagLak was already married and Laksh humilates Swara infront of everyone. Swara leaves and Sanskar follows her
Edited by Shinning_AD - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Awesome update my friend. Swasan scenes were beautiful. Ragini swara ko pani mei dhakka diya, aur Laksh ke saath shadi Kar di, ragini has turned negative. Jaldi ragini ki sacchai sab ke saamne aana chahiye. Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Thanks for the pm dear
Update soon

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