SwaSan & RagLak FF - Janam Janam Ka Pyaar aur Dosti Ch.11 on Pg.12 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
thanks for pm dear really two parts are dam good raglak aww but laksh ? sanskaar entry was superb
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you everyone who spend their time for Reading and giving all the valuable comment!🤗
Thank you@ShrishaTeddy @KritikaWarrior @Abika @MysticRiver

Thank you @rbb1 - The story will be having a love triangle of Rag-Lak-Swa similar to the original one .. You will have to wait to see if Ragini will do somthing or not - Plus yes finally sanskar does his entry

Thank you @Sakkiyah - Hmm I'm glad your enjoying the story..Yes I changed the story a bit from the original one even the FBs .. Hope you will enjoy the upcoming ones too ..

Thank you @Azira07 - Thanks for your lovely comments .. RagLak will happen but not so easily too ..

Will be updating the next chapter soon .. I'll try to make it a bit longer as well 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey!
Nice work! 👍🏼 I like your take on the story. So here Swara is Sanskar's friend, not Ragini. Loved all the four characters. Waiting to see how you develop the story. Continue soon dear... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 8

The doctor does Sanskar's Check-up and Informs that he is suffering from some sort of shock, due to which he is behaving like this. He warns them to make sure he doesn't face any sort of pressure.

That night Laksh decides to tell Ragini the truth about his feeling that he has fallen in love with Swara and doesn't know what to do

Laksh: Ragini mujhe saamaj mein nahi aara hai ke mein tum kaise baatau ke mein shaayad Swara se pyaar karne laaga hu..

Ragini was in a state of shock, The person who she was about to marry, the person with whom she had fallen in love with was longer hers. She didn't know how to reaction to what laksh was saying. Should she feel pity on her kismat or be happy for her sister Swara?

Ragini: Swara se pyaar?

Laksh: Yes Ragini, Dekhoo Ragini, I know hamare shaadi hoone wali hai but I cannot hide such a big truth from you and I hope you will understand me

Ragini: Kaa Swara tumse pyaar karti hai?

Laksh was speechless, he never thought about what Ragini asked him. He loved swara a lot but does she love him too? This question was going around in Laksh's mind for the whole day

Laksh told Ragini to help him find out Whether Swara loves him too or not, Ragini was feeling sad that she had lost her first love but for the happiness of her sister she could do anything. She agreed to Laksh and asked Swara

Ragini goes back home and to Swara's room

Ragini: Hi Swara

Swara: Ragini Tum? Come in ..

Ragini: Meine tumhe disturb toh nahi kiya na?

Swara: Nai Nai Bilkul naahi ..

Ragini: Swara.. Ek baat poochu?

Swara: Poocho na..

Ragini: Have you ever fallen in love with anyone

Swara: Till now it's a big no ...

Ragini: Laksh se bhi nahi?

Swara looks at Ragini and wonders why she was asking her such questions all of a sudden.

Swara: Nahii.. Meine kisi se pyaar nahi kiya

Ragini: Zhoot maat bolo Swara ...

Swara: Mein zhoot naahi bolrai hu ..

Ragini: Ok.. tik hai maat baatao, mujhe bhi tumse ko baat nahi karna

Swara and Ragini both sat on opposite side of their bed not talking to each other for around 10 mintus, Swara couldnt control anymore and decided to talk to Ragini

Swara: Aachaa baba .. Listen .. Laksh has become my good friend but I am confused about my feelings, I dont know what I feel for him is as a lover or as a good friend..

Ragini: But Laksh loves you Swara..

Swara: (Shocked) Kyaa? Yeh tu kya bol rai hai?

Ragini: Sachh.. I'm telling you the truth.. I have to go now see you tomorrow.. Ek aur baat .. Kal Sanskar se milne bhi Jaana hai as you know he doesn't listen to anyone else

Ragini leaves and Swara thinks about what Ragini just told her, thinking about that she falls as sleep.

Next morning, Lakshy goes to Sanskar's room, He was still asleep

Laksh: Bhai.. Kaha te tum Itne Sal ? Mujhe choor ke kyu chale gaay te? (Crying) And now when your back, you deny to reconigse me? Kyu bhai?

Sanskar wakes up and sees Lakshy there, he instantly wakes up and askes Laksh about Swara's wherea about

Sanskar: Woo.. Wooo Dupaata wali larki kaha hai?

Laksh:Dupaata wali larki? (He laughs)

Sanskar: haa.. woh meri dost ..

Laksh: Swara?

At the moment Swara enters the room while Ragini waits in the Living room of Maheshwari Mansion for Swara

Swara: Sanskaar Mein yaaha hu ..

She sits next to Sanskar and Lucky on the bed and Sanskar hugs her

Sanskar: Dupaata?

Swara: Sorry Aaaj dupaata nahi Peehna .. Tomorrow I'll wear a dress with dupaata ok?

Sanskar: Tik hai ..

Laksh, Swara and Sanskar goes down to the hall, Ragini was holding a puja tali as she had to visit the temple as well. Sanskar sees Ragini wearing the dupaata clothes and hides behind her paalu

Ragini: Swara Mein Mandir hokar Aati hu .. (Sanskar doesn't leave her dupaata)

Swara: Saanskar.. Ragini ko jaana hai ..

Sanskar: Mujhe bhi jana hai saath mein..

Anupoorna: Paar Sanskar..

Ragini: It's okay Aunty, let him come if he wants to anyways we are going to mandir, I'll drop him back home later..

On Ragini's request, The family memebers let Sanskar go with Ragini to the Temple and Laksh calls Swara to the rooftop by telling he want to tell her something

In the Terrance --

Laksh: Swara..

Swara: I know tum kya kehna chaate ho.. Ragini ne mujhe kal sab kuch baata diya hai .. Deekhoo Laksh I know you love me and I accept that but Mein tumse pyaar nahi karti .. I have always considered you as my good friend and nothing else

Laksh was hurt by hearing what Swara said but he accept it

Laksh: It's okay Swara .. Mein tumse pyaar karta tha aur meine tumse baata diya .. I won't force you to love me back.

Swara: Laksh .. Jaane se pehle ek aurr baat .. Mujhe laagta hai ke Ragini tumse pyyaar karti hai .. She never told anyone this but yesterday her eyes told everything, Woh Yeh baat kisi ko bhi naaahi baatai ge ke she loves you and will keep it to herself becacuse she doesnt want to hurt anymore .. Especially you laksh .. I have told what I thought .. I'll see you later

Swara went and Laksh kept think about what Swara said, Does Ragini really love him? If yes then why didnt she said anything yesterday when he told he loves Swara

In the Temple --

Ragini and Sanskaar Visited the temple and prayed, Saanskar sees the Ice-cream and askes Ragini to buy it for him. Ragini tells Sanskar to wait for her here and she'll bring the ice-cream

Ragini was on her way back from buying the ice-cream, due to many people around and the nosie pollution. A car was coming on the way and was about to hit Ragini when Sanskar sees it and saves her

Ragini: Sanskar ..

Sanskar: Ragini.. Tum teek hona ? You should have been carefull .. Agaar tum kuch hogata toh?

Sanskar then realised that he should have said what he said, it left Ragini completely shock to know that Sanskar was all alright and nothing happened to him. Questions were flying in her mind as to why Sanskar did this drama in front of his family and making them worried

Ragini: Sanskar tum tik ho toh yeh sab?

Sanskar: Sorry Ragini, tumhe sach naa baata ne kile .. Let's go there, I'll tell you everything

Sanskar brings Ragini near the park areas and tells her that he had done all this drama because he want to get Revenge from Laksh and Especially DP for taking his love Kavita away from him

Ragini: But that was a accident right? The bomb in the bus and ...

Sanskar: Woh koi accident nahi tha .. I am sure yeh sab DP ne kiya tha as he was not happy with our relation

Ragini: Toh Iss mein laksh ki kya Galti hai?

Sanskar: Saari galti laksh ki hai , Only he knew that me and Kavita were planning to leave home and get married, the rest only know that I was going to leave home

Ragini: You might be mistaken also right? How are you so sure Laksh told everyone, they could have found out the truth by themselves also..

Sanskar: ...

Ragini: As long as I know Laksh was very happy to have you back and I must say the most happiest to get his brother and best friend back, When you were not there he always kept talking about you to me and Swara.. We are getting late we must go home now

Sanskar: Ragini please don't tell about my truth to anymore

Ragini promises that she would tell anyone About Sanskar's truth and drops him back to Maheshwari Mansion

Laksh remembers what Swara told him before leaving and decides to talk to Ragini once more to Clarify everything.

Edited by Shinning_AD - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
I liked it a lot dear. It is very nice. I never watched the show and I am loving it👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Nice update Hun whatever happens please don't make Ragini negative
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Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

I liked it a lot dear. It is very nice. I never watched the show and I am loving it👏

I'm waiting for your update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update.In this update you unfold the truth of sanskar, he wanted to take revenge from dp and Laksh. But in today's episode why sanskar accompanied ragini, I think he knew that Laksh is in love with swara. But I really loved the sister bond in today's update. Ragini was happy for sister and swara understand the truth that her sister is in love with Laksh.
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome FF! Would love to see some romance between mad Sanskar and Swara! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 9

Laksh and Ragini are seen talking in Laksh's room.

Ragini: Kya hua Laksh? Tumhne mujhe yaha kyu bolaya?

Laksh: Mein tumse jo bhi poochunga Uska sach sach zawab dogi?

Ragini: Kon sa sawal?

Laksh: Do you love me Ragini?

Ragini was surprised as to how Laksh Found out about it and why he was asking her this question

Laksh: Bolo Ragini.. Kya tum mujhe pyaar karti ho?

Ragini turns back and was about to walk back outside without replaying when laksh holds her hand

Laksh: Ragini, you can't leave without answering my question

Ragini: Yes karti hu mein tumse pyaar..

Laksh: Agaar karti ho toh why didn't you say anything yesterday jab meine tumhe bola tha ke mein swara se pyaar karta hu..

Ragini: What's the point of telling you jab tum Swara se pyaar karte ho?

Laksh: If you remember then our engagement is postponded to tomorrow due to the incident yesterday

Ragini: Engagement? Tum abhi bhi mujhe shaadi karna chate ho?

Laksh: What's the point of stoping this jab Swara mujhse pyaar nahi karti? Ragini mein nahi janta how well I will be able to manage this relation but I will try to fullfill it with honesty.

Ragini: (Smiles)

Laksh: See you tomorrow again then..

Ragini Leaves and goes back to her house. Next day the engagement gets done, Days passed by and soon Swara starts to fall for Laksh but keeps it to herself as there is nothing that she can do now but Neither could laksh forget about Swara everytime she came infront of him.

Ragini notices how Swara and Laksh keep staring at eachother but same as usuall Ragini just doesn't ask or talk to them about it.

It wasn't only Ragini who Witnessed Laksh and Swara but Sanskar as well. Sanskaar was determined not to let Laksh and Swara be together and break them as part. Since for him due to Laksh he lost his first love so how could laksh have his first love

Not only this but he was instigating Ragini to stand for herself and fight for her love.

Sanskaar: Ragini Abb kab tab tum hamesha dusro ke kushi keliye appne kushi sacrifice karte raahogi? Learn to stand for yourself sometimes, Just because elders tell you to do something doesn't mean ke hamesha woh lok sahi hai.. Ragini tum samaaj rahi hona ke main kya bolra hu .. Aggar hum saath milke karenge toh kuch bhi muskil nahi hai

Ragini for few days thinks about Sanskar's word, Seeing Laksh's and Swara's closeness day by day thinks he is right. She becomes so blind for her love for Laksh that She was ready to destroy the life of her own sister by first making her agree to laksh's love and later betraying her

Sanskar and Ragini starts with their ploting and planning, Swara confess her love to Laksh and later he informs the whole family about it

Ragini tells the Family if Swara and Laksh are happy with eachother who is she to stop their happiness and lies that she is happy with their marriage

Both the family then Proceed with Swara-Laksh Marriage. All the marriage ceremony and rituals are being carried out. Two week Later ... Swara finds out the truth about Sanskar and decides to confront him

Edited by Shinning_AD - 9 years ago

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