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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice continue soon thanks for pm
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HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL 😊

PART -8

everyone shocked at the step of annapurna ji...
Her eyes were full of anger , hatred towards ragini...which made ragini fear to even have a look at annapurna...

Ra :...maa aap ...aap ye galath kar rahe hai...aap..aap bhul rahe hai ki hum is ghar ki malikin hai...

Ap : malikin...malikin...thum?? kaise banaa malikin...thum ye kuch kamayaa?? sirf soudhaa kiya..ragini...soudhaa...

swara was in tears seeing AP ...

Ap : kis cheeze ki dhamki dhe rahe ho ragini??? bathao hume...

Ragini turned to Dp ...

Ra : papaji ...maa hamari bezzath kar rahi hai..kya aap nahi rokhenge ise...

before dp could react ... Ap again stormed...

Ap : aaj koi nahi rokhegaa hume ...

ragini was frightened ...kya hua maa ko???

Ap : jo sach ke baare mein thum dhamki dhe rahe ho naa ragini...wo aab sabke saamne ayegaa...Uttara hamari beti hai...aur hamesha rahegi...

Ragini looked at sujata & uttara...they didn't change their feelings...mathlab ye sab ko patha hai???

Sw : haa ragini ...e sab ko patha hai...aur jaanthe ho kya..thumhari khel khatham...waha dekhoo...

pointing to the veiled lady...

Sw : boliye...aap kisise darne ki jharoorath nahi hai...boliyeee

Lady : hume maaf kardhijiye...hum paise ke liye majbhoor the...durga prasad ji peechle 20 saal se hume paise dhe rahe hai..aur jab ek dhin hum inse milne aya thaa...thab ragini aur unki dadimaa ne hamari saari baathe sunli...aur unhomne hamari majbhoori ka faidha utaake ...jyadha paise ki lalach dhikayaa...aur..aur hum bhi paise ke liye...

Ap : kaisi aurath hai aap?? paise ke liye kuch bhi karenge...jahaa thak ki aap ki beti...nahi...uttara ki baare mein bhi nahi socha...jab palnaa hi nahi hai..tho paidha krthe kyun ?? kyun ladki hai isliye?? ladkiyaan ghar ki lakshmi hothe hai..maa baap ke guroor hothe hai..humne apni uttara ko aise hi palaa hai...hamari laadli hai wo...ham sab ki jaan hai wo...

this made sujata emotional...

Sujata : teek kahaa jijji aapne...uttara maari chori hai...maari beti...aur maari beti ki dhamki dhekar je aurath ne teek naa ki...main tho ise chodoongi nahi...

Sw : nahi mom...hum kuch nahi karenge...aab jo bhi karenge police wale aakar hi karenge...

By listening to the name of police that lady shivered & fell to the ground...by joining hands...she said

Lady : nahi nahi...hume maaf kar dhijiye...hum tho sirf paise ke liye e sab kiya tha...aab dhoobara hum nahi ayenge yahaa par..hume maaf kar dhijiye...

Sujata : tho...thu..nikal yahaa se...agar thu ek minute bhi yahaa rukaa ...ya phir meri chori ki tarah mud ke bhi dekhaa tho main thumhari jaan le loongi...chal nikaal yahaa se...

then turned to ragini...

Sujata : kya kuch na kiya thune maare sath...hamara jeena mushkil kar dhiya...aaj main thume nahi chodoongi ragini...je tho mari bahu swara ne manne ko sab sach bathadhi hai...

Flash back...

after consoling annapurna ...swara & sanskaar went to sujata & explained everything to her...she was shocked to know that uttara was not his own daughter ...

" nahi...mai kisi aur ki nahi...main aapki hi beti hoon " uttara spoke with tears in her eyes...

uttara rushed to sujata & hugged her tightly ...

Su : na naa...thu maari chori hai...kisi ne yeh kahaa ke dhikay ki thu maari beti na hai...uski jaan le loongi...

consoled her ...

Sw : haa uttara...thum is ghar ki beti ho...ye koi nahi badhalsaktha...kal hum sach sab ke saamne rakhenge aur thum himmath se rehnaa...

Sa : thujhe tho koi hum se dhoor nahi kar sakthe...kyun ki hamare alavaa thujhe aur koi nahi jhelsakthe...he teased her...

Ut : bhai... she hugged him...

Then both sanskaar & swara said about their divorce & drama...

Sujata : maanne maaf kar dhe swara...maine kabhi bhi thumhare baare mein acha nahi kahaa...lekin aaj thu hamari sath kuch galath nahi hone dhe rahe ho...aaj main sache mann se apni bahu man rahi hoon...aur thu chora maari bahu ko kabhi thaang math karna...

Sa : momm...

sujata hugged both swara & sanskaar ...

flash back ends...

Sw : kya se kya hogayaa ragini??? dekha thumne sach bahar aane par bhi kuch nahi hua hai...wo tho badepapa mom , dad aur badimaa ko thakleef mein nahi dekhsakthe isliye wo chup chap thumhari har bath manaa hai...aur thumne kya kiya ragini??? aab kya karoge...jo is sach ka sabooth hai wo hi khudh chali gayee...aab kya karoge???

Ra : papaji ...shayad aap bhool rahe hai ...aap bhool rahe hai ki..hum chahe tho laksh ko jail kar sakthe hai...

Laksh jumped & said...

La : chal Ragini ...main jail jaane ke liye thayyar hoon ...chalo...

he holds her hand.

Ra : hamara haath chodiye ..jaana tho aab aap ko padegaa...

La : haa ragini mere sath sath thume bhi janaa hogaa...

Ragini's expressions changed...

Ra : hum kyun jaayenge?? aap ne hamari kidnap ki ...aur hamari jaan lene ki koshish ki ...aap ko jail se hume nikalaa tha laksh...

La : wowww... ragini ...thum kithni boli ho...e math bhulo ki thumne kya kya kiya swara ke saath? use drugs dhi , nadhi mein dhakka dhi , maa ko kidnap kiya , aur yaad hai thumne uski jaan lene ki koshish bhi ki...uska cd abhi bhi hamare pass hai...tho jail chale ragini...

she was dumbstruck at this unexpected instance...Just then shekar & shomi arrives...

She : teek kahaa laksh ne...

Da : shekar ... shouted at him

She : maa chillayiye math...aap umar mein badi hai aur main nahi chahtha ki aap is umar mein jail jay...tho aap pls yahaa se chaliye...

Da : naa shekar ...main apni laado ko chodke nahi javoongi...

Ap : aap ko janaa hi hogaa kakisaa... akhir aap dhoosron ki ghar mein kithne dhin thak rahenge?? humari yahaa tho beti ki sasural mein pani thak nahi peethe...

Ra : Dadimaa ...kahi nahi jayenge...e hamara ghar hai...hum is ghar ki malikin hai ...

Swara burst into laughter...

Sw : Ragini ...ragini ...sach mein thum kithne boli ho...

Ra : enough swara... with frustration...

Sw : acha teek hai...thum is ghar ki malikin ho naa...tho documents dhikao hume??

Ra : achaa...shayad thum bhool gayee hogi..us dhin party mein papaji ne sign karke sab kuch hamara naam kardhiyaa ...

Sw : tho dhikao un doucments ko...

Ragini goes & brings the documents ...

Ra : yeh dhekho swara ...aab tho yaad ayaa hogaa...

Sw : main nahi ragini ..thum khudh dekho ise..yeh tho sirf power of attorney hai...mathlab jaantho ho??

Ragini face was confused...

Sa : power of attorney mathlab ...thum sirf decision le sakthe ho...thum sach mein owner nahi ho Ragini...

ragini was hell shocked...

La : aab chale ragini police station ...yaa phir police ko yahi bhulalethe hai...kyun bhai?

Sa : haa laksh ye teek rahegaa...main abhi phone kartha hoon...

ragini rushed to Dadimaa...

Ra : Dadimaa...dekhiye naa...ye sab...

but shekar interrupted her..

She : maa aap ghar jayiye...

Da : naa shekar ...main laado ko chodke kahi nahi chavegaa

She : maa pls...main apni beti ko sahi rasthaa dikhana chahtha hoon..aap pls jayiye yahaa se...

Dadi left maheswari mansion with tears in her eyes...

Sw : aab thumhara khel khatham ragini...kahaa na maine paanch dhin mein main apni aur sanskaar ke beech sahi karoongi ...maine kar liya...

sanskaar comes & holds swara's hand...

Sa : thume kya lagaa ragini ...ki thum mujhe aur swara ko alag karoge...mujhe swara pe poora vishwas hai..pyaar kartha hoon use...usne sign anjaan mein ki..ye bhi patha hai mujhe...

La : is se baath kyun kar rahe ho?? aap police ko phone kijiye ...mere saath saath ye bhi jail chalegi...

Ragini was completely broken ...she looked at everyone...everyone laughing at her ...she didn't tolaerate their smile...she ran into her room & came back with something in her hand...

she stood before swara & said...

Ra : kyun swara ? kyun kiya thumne hamare saath aisa? humne jo bhi kiya hamare pyaar ke liye kiya...Laksh pehle hamara pyaar tha jo thumne humse cheena hai...haa humne ye sab laksh ko paane ke liya kiya hai...lekin thum...thum mujhse meri pyaar chenna hai...phir apni parivaar ko ...aur aab apni sasural ko bhi...aab tho thumhara sanskaar bhi thume mila hai na..pat hamara kya?? I hate u swara ...I hate u so much...jo kushi mujhe nahi mili hai wo thume bhi nahi milne dhoongi... mujhe main nahi chodoongi swara ...thume main jeethne nahi dhoongi ..khatham kardhoongi sab...

Saying this she revealed the thing which she brought ...pistol...& shot bullet to swara...

everyone shocked at this ...sanskaar shouted Swaraaa...

Ragini with hatred & angry on her face ...with tears rolling down the tears ...she suddenly realized ...nahi ...yeh humne kiya?? hum tho swara ko maarna chahthe hai...par ..par...

she dropped the pistol looking at the person lying on the floor in disbelief...

Everyone shocked ...they were not in a condition to realise what just had happened...

End of Part 8

Thanks for reading

Suhasini

Precap : Ragini decides to die...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Did she shot Sanskar or Shekhar? Oh God!! Please update soon. This suspense is killing me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Who took the bullet???
Nice twist!!
Continue soon!!
Thank you for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
awesome update dear...i think it is laksh...woh beech mei aayi hogi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Awsm.lv it.
Who sv swara?sanskar or laksh?
Edited by LoveSonu2408 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Awsm yr...read all in one go!
Its amazing

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I think its laksh...update soon...awesome one yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Who got shot. Loved both the part. Finally dp told the truth to ap. And everything was clear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice work
thanks for pm update more soon
Edited by rayab_rajpoot - 9 years ago

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