SWASAN together forever..... Part 10 updated (page 16) - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Thank u for the pm dear
wish u a happy new year
oh is it laksh???or dadi?
Plz sanakar sud be safe...i love the plot
waiting for swasan moments...
Update soon
love
simi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Wowow..yaar..awsum..loved.it..i think goli Laksh ko lagi nt to Swara ...waiting Eagerly..n add some SwaSan Romance also...
Continue soon. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 9

Ra : kyun swara ? kyun kiya thumne hamare saath aisa? humne jo bhi kiya hamare pyaar ke liye kiya...Laksh pehle hamara pyaar tha jo thumne humse cheena hai...haa humne ye sab laksh ko paane ke liya kiya hai...lekin thum...thum mujhse meri pyaar chenna hai...phir apni parivaar ko ...aur aab apni sasural ko bhi...aab tho thumhara sanskaar bhi thume mila hai na..pat hamara kya?? I hate u swara ...I hate u so much...jo kushi mujhe nahi mili hai wo thume bhi nahi milne dhoongi... mujhe main nahi chodoongi swara ...thume main jeethne nahi dhoongi ..khatham kardhoongi sab...

Saying this she revealed the thing which she brought ...pistol...& shot bullet to swara...

everyone shocked at this ...sanskaar shouted Swaraaa...

Ragini with hatred & angry on her face ...with tears rolling down the tears ...she suddenly realized ...nahi ...yeh humne kiya?? hum tho swara ko maarna chahthe hai...par ..par...

she dropped the pistol looking at the person lying on the floor in disbelief...


Every one shocked...all froze in their places...

Swara shouted "Babaaa"

Shomi : Shekarrr...


Ragini visulaized what had happened...she targetted swara ..& shot , but in a fraction of second shekar pushed swara which made him to take the bullet in his right arm...& he collapsed on floor in pool of blood...

Sa : Laksh gaadi nikaal ...

La : ji bhai...

Dp & Ap were hell shocked at the instance...shomi crying vigorously her heart out asking shekar to open his eyes...swara consoling her & calling "Babaa...babaa "

Ragini didn't move ...

Laksh brought the car to the main door & called sanskaar...sanskaar along with adarsh & Rp lifted shekar & made him to sit...shomi & swara sat on both sides of shekar ...Laksh drove the car with sanskaar who sat next to him...

remaining MM people sujata ,Pari ,annapurna,Dp & rp adjusted in another car & drove off...

no one blamed ragini , they even didn't look at her...they behaved as if she didn't exist & left for hospital...she stood still there...

Every one reached hospital ...swara & shomi crying ...sanskaar ,laksh spoke to doctor ...Dp came & spoke to him...doctors rushed with shekar to ICU leaving all the members out.

no one is able to console Shomi & swara ...laksh & sanskaar both looked at each other & went near to swara & shomi with water.

La (to shomi ): maa pls...sambhalo apne aapko...

Sujata : haa sharmista ji..chintha na karo..sab acha howe hai..bharosa rakh...aur swara thu bhi himmath rakh chori...

Ap : hume kuch samajh mein nahi a raha..kuch nahi sharmista ji ...

La : maa pls...agar aap hi aise ho jayenge tho swara ka hai hogaa...

with this swara felt uncontrollable to stop her cry & ran from there...

Sujata : swara...

Sa : main dekhtha hoon mom...

he follows swara ...swara came out of the hospital running ...sanskaar ran to her & hold her hand...

Sa : swara kya rahe hai??

Sw : Sanskaar...baba...baba...

he hugged her tightly...

Sa : kuch nahi hoga baba ko...kuch nahi hogaa...

she collapsed on her knees ...he tried to help her , he too knelt down...
he wiped her tears...& said

Sa : swara bas...maine kaha kuch nahi hoga baba ko...

Sw (crying..) : kyun sanskaar?? hamare saath hi aisa kyun? main kab ragini ki ithnai badi dhooshman ban gayee...aisa maine kya kiyaa??jo bhi kiya wo us ne kiya...(she said in between her sobs) phir bhi maine sab maaf kiya aur yehi socha ki wo uski zindagi mein kush rahe..lekin ithni nafraath?? ye sab meri wajaa se sanskaar...wo meri wajaa se sab ko taqleef de rahi hai...agar main hi chali gayee tho wo kuch...

Sa :shhh...dhoobara mujh se dhoor jaane ki sochna bhi math...is mein thumhari koi galathi nahi hai swara...

Sw :nahi sanskaar in sab ke liye kahi na kahi main hi jimmedhar hoon...

Sa : teek hai...jao ...jaanaa chahthi honaa chali jao...khudh ko doshi maan rahe ho na..jao...jaathe jaathe ek kaam kar ke jaana

swara looked at him questioningly

Sa : agar thume meri shona mile tho use kehana ki mai uske bhina jee na saktha , aur mujhe us ladki ka intezaar rahegaa jisne bahuth himmath se har mushkil ka saamna kiya , uske bhina jeena nahi saktha...jeena nahi saktha swara mein uske bhina...nahi jee saktha main thumhare bhina...

she ran to him & hugged him...her face into his chest ...they both sat on a bench for some time

sanskaar's mobile rang ,flashed laksh name on the screen

Sa : haa lucky...kya? ...teek hai hum a rahe ... (he cut the phone )swara chalo hume hospital janaa hai...papa ab khathre se bahaar hai...

Sw : sach...baba teek hai...

Sa : haa chalo...

they both reached hospital... swara searched for shomi...

Sujata :swara sharmista ji andhar hai...shekar ji ke pass...kahaa na maine kuch nahi hogaa...

Swara went near the door of the room & peeped through the glass passage on the door ...tears rolled from her eyes...her father laid on bed & her mother sat beside him ...now her mind was relaxed but her heart became very heavy to see her father ...her father was in this situation because of her she thought in mind...

Sanskaar read her thoughts & placed his hand on her shoulder assuringly ...she leaned on his chest ...then they both came out...


Maheswari Mansion

Pari was waiting for the phone call ...she was also tensed...mean while in ragini's room...she stood near the mirror , tears rolling down as if the gates of water falls has been opened...she looked herself in the mirror ,but she couldn't look at her own reflection even for a second...she turned her head...

"hahaaa " a laugh came...

Ragini searched around the room , no one was there ...but the laugh didn't stop...she searched once again & came to mirror...what the hell? she shocked to see her own reflection laughing at her ...her reflection wore salwar suit which she use to wore before marriage ,...

ragini trembled to see her ..."koun ...koun ho thum?? "she asked...

reflection : hahaaa...hum...pehachanaa hai ...thum thumhare antharathma hai...inner soul...

Ra : jao yahaa se...mujhe kisise baath nahi karni ...jaooo ...she screamed..

Ref : Ragini ...hum thumse alag nahi ho sakthe... aur yeh kya haal banake rakhi thumne...thume tho kush honaa chahiye...akhir thum jeeth gayee ho...

Ragini continued her looks...

Ref : dekho hamari taraf Ragini...kaise rehthi thi thum? aur kaisa ban gayaa aaj?? kisne dhoka dhiyaa thume??swara ne??nahi ...mujhe thumhari antharathma...humse...uske koi dhokha nahi kiya...

dhoka tho thumne kiya sab ke saath... thumhari behan ko maarna chahaa,uski zindagi barbath karna chahaa thumne...

laksh jee...ha laksh jee...patha hai thumne use kithna pyaar karthe the...aur aaj wo pyaar kaha hai? kis cheeze ki gussa nikal rahe ho un par? yehi ki unhomne thume nahi thumhari behan se pyaar kiyaa...lekin thume kya kiya...uska pyaar cheena..nataak kiyaa..dhoka kiya...

dekho na ragini ...aaj thum kis mode par aayi ho...apni behen ko maarna chahthi ..par kya hua...khudh ki baba ko maraa?? cheee...hume tho sharam athi hai thumhari antharathma hone ke liye...aaj tho thumhare pass koi nahi hai...koi bhi nahi...aur hum bhi nahi rehanaa chahthe hai ...ragini ...thum akeli ho aaj..aur aaj se thum akeli hi rahogi... hahaaa

by saying this the reflection also disappeared...she remebered every incident spent with swara , lask ,sanskaar ..and what she has done to them...she cried her heart outtt...

then after some time , ragini came out & reached hospital...

all were shocked to see her their...

Sujata : ye chori ...kyun aayi ho?? kuch tho sharam karr kyun aayi ho???

but ragini walked without replying like a statue ...laksh blocked her way...

La : chali jao ragini yahaa se...koi bhi thumhare shakal nahi dekhna chahthe...

Sa : rehne dhe laksh...

laksh moved giving her the way ...she came & stood before swara...

swara didn't pay attention to her ...don't know what she is feeling ...hate,angry,sad...don't know...she don't want to see her face...

Ra (with great trouble ): swa...swara...

swara fumed : basss...Ragini ...ab ...

she didn't complete her sentence , Ragini choked & vomitted BLOOD which dipped swara's feet & she too fell on her feet unconscious...

Sw : Raginiii...she screamed...

Laksh & sanskaar came running to ragini...blood oozing from her mouth ...

End of Part 9

Thanks for reading

Suhasini

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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
omo shekhar just saved his daughter hats of him to and what happend to ragini
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Omg...!she took posion kya?well written👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
👏 cvs ko b ittu sa bus ittu sa dimag de de upna😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Shekar came in between!!
Wow..
Ragini !!! what did she do to herself??
That's nice!!

Continue soon!!!
Thank u for the PM,,,
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Superb update😊
Did Ragini take poison??
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice work... I thinks ragini tries to suicideby using poison that's why blood is coming from her mouth.
.. Waiting for more...update more soon
thanks fot the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
NIce update yaar.thanks for the PM...now gives us some awesome swasan segment...and update soon...i really need this now

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