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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
d swasan scene was so beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the update and swasan moments super. Continue soon and pls pm me also
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii friends...sorry for late update ...

PART 7



sanskaar was lost in his thoughts looking out from the window,he was thinking about his badepapa,what happened to him?why is he letting Ragini to do whatever she want?even in office too he was silent when she was insulting him repeatedly,he was unable to find the reason but he has to know the actual reason behind it...

swara came out of washroom changing her clothes,she noticed sanskaar.He was in deep thoughts ,she understood that he was thinking about badepapa,she went & stood near him .He took his hand into hers & asked.

sw :Badepapa ke baare mein soch rahe ho?

He took a deep breathe & said...

Sa : patha hai swara..maine bahuth saari galathiyan ki..maine socha ki kavita ki mouth ki zimmedhar badepapa hai..aur usi gusse mein main sabse dhoor chala gayaa, paanch saal ke baad apni bhadla lene aya thaa..par jab sach saamne ayaa,aur patha chala ki badepapa ki koi galathi nahi hai..thab khudh par gussa ayaa...

she watched him with tears in her eyes...he continued

Sa : haa ...swara par patha nahi kuch dhin se badepapa aisa kyun kar rahe hai? kyun ragini ko ithna maan rahe hai? wo jo bhi karna chahthe hai, use karne dhethe hai...property,company,bungalow sab uska naam kar dhiya... akhir aisa kya hua ki unhomne divorce papers par thumharaa sign bhi liyaa...kithna sochaa tha maine..par kuch bhi connect nahi ho rahaa hai..ye baath sirf laksh jail jaane ki nahi hai...kuch aur...

swara continued his words...

Sw : kuch aur hai sanskaar...

He looked at her ...

Sw : Haa sanskaar ..thume yaad hai us dhin maine ek photo dikhane ke liye thume cafe bhulayaa tha...aur vahaa thum par haamla hua tha...

Sanskaar remembered the total incident...when swara was showing him a photo a lady came in burkha snatced the photo & escaped from them...

Sa : haa...yaad hai swaraa

Sw : Ek minute...

she went to the cupboard & picked a photo from the right drawer , she handed over the photo to him...seeing the photograph for q few seconds he said

Sa : par swara isme tho kuch hai nahi...sirf wo dancer hai , aur badepapa use dekh rahe hai...

he didn't understand why she is after this photo...

Sw : Nahi sanskaar...dhyaan se dekho ..badepapa ka ep dekho...wo bahuth tensed hai..aisa lag raha hai ki unhomne kuch dekha hai wo unhe yakeen nahi ho rahaa hai...aur e dancer tho baar baar badepapa ki tarah dekh ke hi ganaa gayaa tha...kuch tho hai..agar isme kuch nahi hai ragini us dhin e photo humse leke kyun bhaag gayee??

immediately he responded...

Sa : ek minute..e photo thumhare pass kaise?? humse e kho gayee na...tho??

Swara said in a low voice...

Sw : wo maine ...e photo ragini ki kamre se churaliya..

Sa :thum tho chor hui ...(he said teasingly...)

Sw : haa main chor hoon...kisiko bathanaa maath (she too joined his teasing conversation)

he kept his hand under his chin giving a posture like he is thinking ...& said

Sa : Nahi bathavoonga...par iske liye tho kuch ...

she understood what he was upto...

Sw : Hmmm ...kuchhh???

Sa : agar kuch milegaa tho????

she too in a teasing mode...

Sw : haa kyun nahi milegaa naa...ek minute

He eagerly saw her go to one of the corner of the room,she picked somthing in her hands & came to him ...stood infromt & said

Sw : Sirf thumahre liye... & opened her fist to show him some chocolates...

He made a face & said...

Sa : main koi chota bacha nahi hoon...

Sw : Awww...u r my baby
she said pulling his cheeks...

Sa : Achaaa...u r my shonaaa...

he too pulled her cheeks...& she realized he called shona...
she hugged him...& he too embraced her tightly...

But both in their hearts thinking of only one thing...why ragini is playing with badepapa?? both assured in their hearts that they will set everything right...The night came to an end...

Next day morning...
All ladies are busy in household work...gents already left to office..Ragini's malkingiri started ,but it became their daily routine so maheswari ladies didn't feel sad at it.But the one who is watching this felt very sad but she couldn't do anything.

Swara in her deep thoughts visualizing all her scenes happened in the party , she quickly had a glance at the photograph then by most difficulty she got the party CD from parineeta.She locked her room & watched the total party

then by most difficulty she got the party CD from parineeta.She locked her room & watched the total party from the beginning, she noticed that badepapa seemed tensed after the entry of the dancer.but she couldn't see her face as she wore veil.she zoomed many times but of no use.She felt helpless & prayed god to show her a way..

Midnight Maheswari Mansion:

All were in deep sleep except DP...he came out of his room to the garden area outside of the house...he felt very sad to see ragini torturing his family but his hands were binded he couldn't do anything, if the secret which he had hid from years comes out ..No ..the thought sent chill down his spine...

Something made him to come out of his thoughts.. a shadow appeared ...he asked 'koun hai' ..the shadow ran from his sight into the house...he too followed the shadow...she is here?? ..she walked briskly & reached the terrace...she was now standing in the centre of the terrace , her face turned away from him..

The lights were off but the moon light is enough to him to identify her...she is still in veil her face is not visible..but he knows that she is her..he asked her

Dp : Kyun ayii ho ??

She didn't respond...
He once again asked..

Dp : Kyun Ayi ho???
She didn't move an inch..
He was frustrated ...
Dp : kisi bhi haal mein main wo raaj bahaar nahi ane dhoonga..jo bees sal pehle hua tha...wo ab main kisiko patha nahi chalne dhoonga...

he continued...but he didn't know that he was being watched...

Dp : us kaam ke liye thume jithna paisa chahiye tha maine uthnaa paisa thume dhedhiya...ab phir kyun ayi ho wapas...

but she didn't respond...it made him more frustrated...
Dp : thum kuch kyun nahi bol rahe ho?? thume jithna paise chahiye uthnaa main thume dhoongaa...chali jao yahaa se...

the lady started to speak...

Lady : Nahi ...jiske liye hum aye hai...wo kaam karne ke binaa hum nahi jayenge...

Dp : yeh main hargis nahi hone dhoonga...kabhi bhi nahi...Uttara humari beti hai...hum use hum se dhoor nahi karenge...

unacceptable thing made its way from his mouth ...which shocked the person who was watching...

" yeh aap kya keh rahe ho badepapa??/ uttara ???" asked the voice from behind...

he was shocked to see swara...

Sw : haa badepapa boliye ...kya bath hai ..jo aap ko kayi jha rahi hai...jo aapko kuch nahi karne dhi ja rahi hai???


Dp : swara...humne pehle hi kahaa tha...hum kuch nahi batha sakthe...

" kyun nahi batha sakthe badepapa?" came another voice...he turned to see...

Dp: Sanskaar ???

Sa : ha badepapa...aap ko bathana hi hogaa?? kyun aap ragini ki har baath man rahe ho? aisa bhi kya hua ? aap dhoke se swara se divorce papers par sign karvaliya??ye sab kya hai badepapa?? plsss hume bathayiye...

Dp: sanskaar , swara ...hum kuch nahi bathayenge...pehle hum is aurath ko yaha se nikaalna chahthe hai...aur thum (pointing to veiled lady )

Sw : ek minute rukhiye..?? badepapa...

she said & went to veiled lady.She removed her veil & turned to face him...

Dp was shocked.. : Annapurna ji...

Sw : hume maaf kar dhijiye badepapa...hum aur koi rastha nahi tha humare pass...

annapurna made her way straight to Dp , took his hand & kept on her head...& asked with tears in her eyes...

Ap : aapko hamari kasam ...sach kya hai hum jan na chahthe hai...

he stood idle ...

Ap : aap ko aaj kehana hi hogaa ji...kya sach hai? Uttara ke baare mein jo baath aap ne ki ?? mathlab kya hai???

he took off his hand & started to say...

Dp : hume maaf kar dhijiye annapurnaji ...hume ek sach chupaya tha ..aapse , apne bhai se ...poore parivaar se...hum nahi chaha ki e sach sab ke saamne ay...lekin aaj kismath ne hume aisa jagah kada kar dhiya ki ..hum sach se aur bhaag nahi sakthe...Haa sach uttara ke baare mein hi hai...Uttara ..is ghar ki beti nahi hai...

Finally he bursted the truth...

Ap : ye ...ye aap kya keh rahe hai ji...nahi...e sach nahi hai...uttara is ghar ki beti hai...wo humara hi beti hai...

Dp : hume patha hai annapurna ji ...ki aap sach ko nahi swikaar karenge...aapne kabhi bhi adarsh laksh aur sanskaar uttara ke beech koi farak nahi kiya...jaha thak ki uttara ko khudh apne pal poss kar badaa kiya...hume ache se patha ki ladki hone ke naathe aap uttara ko kithna laad kiya...

aap ko yaada hai annapurna ji adarsh hone ke baad aap ladki ke liye kithn mannath mange hai...lekin hume laksh hua tha...aur jab sujata ko ladki honewali ki kabar mili ...thab tho aap bahuth kush hogayee ki ...ghar ki lakshmi a rahi hai...

par ek bath aap kisiko nahi patha hai...jo sujatha ko paidha hui ...wo...wo..mari hui beti paidha hui...usi samay nurse ne hum se kaha ki dhoosri aurath ek bachi ko chodke chali gaye...hume sirf aap ke baare mein sochaa...aap ki kushi ke baare mein socha..tho humne us bachi ko apni beti ki jagah ghar le ayaa...

e sach hum kisiko bathanaa jharoori nahi samjhaa...kyun ki hum hamesha uttara ko hamari beti se bhi jyadhaa manaa...

all four of them were in tears...

Sw : badepapa...tho ragini kaise patha chala???

Dp : ithne saalon ke baadh ek dhin wo nurse hamare pass ayi hai..paise ke liye...thab ragini aur kakisa ne dekhliya...aur unhe sach patha chal gayaa...

Sw : mathlab wo dancer...???

Dp : haa beta...uttara us aurath ki hi beti hai...

Ap : nahi ...uttara hamari beti hai...hamari...

She broke into tears...swara & sanskaar consoled her

that night came to an end...Even Dp felt relaxed after letting this weight on heart down...

Next Day morning ... Maheswari Mansion...

Everyone in hall...Ragini with dadimaa arrives

Ra : Maa ...hamare liye chai leke ayiyee ...

this frustrates everyone...

Sujata : pagal ho gayee kya ragini??

La : how dare you ragini???

But annapurna stopped them

Ap : Nahi apni bahu ko main chai banaake lavoongi..koi kuch nahi kahegaa...

Swara & Sanskaar relieved...

after a while...Ap came with chai try...

Ra : wah maa...kushboo tho bahuth achi tarah se a rahi hai...laayiye...

Ap placed tray before ragini & took a cup to handover to ragini...but with in a sec she poured tea on ragini's head..whish chosked everyone...

Ra : Aaawww... shouted ragini... Dadi was utterly shocked at this action...

Da : annapurnaji...yeh kya pagalpaan hai...

but Ap stormed at her...

Ap : bas...kakisaa...aap beech mein math boliye...ye meri aur ragini ki beech ki bath hai...aur aap hamari ghar ki mamlon mein dhakal math dhijiye...varna mai ye bhuljavoongi ki ap umar mein mujhse badi hai...

Dadi was dumbstruck at this instance...even ragini was numb...

End of Part 7

Suhasini

Precap : Ragini shoots Swara...sanskaar shouts swara's name
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
very interesting update.finally raaz khul gaya.AP just roacked and Dadi-Poti shocked.thanks for the PM dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
i came across this and read it all in one go and i loved it especially swasan ka chup chup romance. very cute. precap is scary update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Superb
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg !! Ragini Shoots Swara ?? Wow..nyc...superb...plzz.nxt part...Hope Swara is safe b Sanskaar saves her...plzz.continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Nice update!!
Too different form the serial!!

Continue soon!!
Thank u for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Goldie93

Omg !! Ragini Shoots Swara ?? Wow..nyc...superb...plzz.nxt part...Hope Swara is safe b Sanskaar saves her...plzz.continue soon



Thank you ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Nice work
Ap proves that action speaks better than words... Love the chai wala scene
ragini is ''censored''
😡
thanks for the pm
update more soon

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