SWASAN together forever..... Part 10 updated (page 16) - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Yay!! I guessed it right to be Shekhar. But you again held us on cliffhanger. She took poison na? Plz update soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Hasini
Nice update as usual..
Woww never thought shekar ll save swara...i m really proud of him
I so loved swasan scene...they r much into each other..
so ragini took poison..can wait for the next part..please update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was shekhar...wah...ragini's suicide attempt .update soon...dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
omg this was awesome update
is it shekhar or lakshya???
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiii friends...well i know i'm very very late to give the update..i'm so sorry holding my ears...i will try to update now regularly ...

PART 10

After 10 Days - MM Mansion - Night 10pm

All maheswaris had their Dinner & dispersed to their rooms.Swara , was standing by the side of window staring into the dark sky.Her thoughts full of Ragini,She didn't know her once friend now turned sister had so much of hatred in her heart .She always strived to show her right path as her sister but all in vain.Swara felt a lump in her throat , not for ragini wanted to kill her but she decided to end her life too. Tears pooled in her eyes...Once again all the incidents happened that day in hospital visualized before her

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Ra (with great trouble ): swa...swara...

swara fumed : basss...Ragini ...ab ...

she didn't complete her sentence , Ragini choked & vomitted BLOOD which dipped swara's feet & she too fell on her feet unconscious...

Sw : Raginiii...she screamed...

Laksh & sanskaar came running to ragini...blood oozing from her mouth ...

swara stood numb in her place analyzing what had just happened.All family members rushed to Ragini , screaming shouting her name.Laksh lifted her in his arms & laid her on the stretcher which was brought by ward boy immediately.Laksh,Ap, Sanskaar & Dp rushed along with ward boy.Taking few steps a head sanskaar realized swara was not with them , he turned back & came to her calling..

Sa : swara..

but she didn't move , she was in shock...he moved her holding her arms.

Sa : Swaraaa...

Swara came to her senses with a heavy breath...

Sw : Sanskaar...wo..wo Ragini...

She burst into tears...Sanskaar felt very bad to see her , to see his love crying from all the day...

Sa : bas ..swara...

Su : arey thu kyun ro rahi hai swara...manne patha hai wo chori ragini abhi bhi natak kar rahi hai..bas nataak

Sanskaar turned to her & said.

Sa : bas kijiye mom... plzz ..chalo swara ...come

he helped her to stand & took her with him . They joined laksh & Ap

La : ICU mein leke gayaa hai use...

Ap : Swara...ja beta ...thumhare pahiron aur kapade par khoon lagi hai..jao ise saaf karo...

Swara stood their crying seeing the door of ICU

Ap : sanskaar ...leke jao use...

Sa : ji...chalo swara ...

saying this he took swara with him & they returned back after a while

swara didn't speak to anyone , she was numb , she was trying to analyze the happenings which led to this step of ragini ' kaisi thi wo ..kaise ban gayii.."

her thoughts were interrupted by a voice screaming & shouting ...Dadi

Da : Laado...maari laado...ki hua mari laado...aap logon ne kya kia maari bacchi ke sath ...

Su : wahh..kakisa..hum ..hum tho kuch na ki hai..wo thaari laado ne shekar ji par goli chahalyi ..aur ab nayaa natak kar rahi hai

Dadi was stunned to hear this

Da : ki..ki hua maari shekar ko?? kaate hai wo ??

Sw : daadi ..ab baba teek hai...aur ragini ka bhi treatment chal raha hai ...kuch nahi hogaa...aap shanth ho jayiye...

Da : bas kaarrr...thu aur thaari maa hamari jindagi haraam karke rak dhi...aaj thum banagalanon ki waje se maari beta aur laado is halaath mein hai...

she vented out her anger on swara...

Ap : kakisa..bas kijiye aap..aap ko tho sab kuch patha hai..phir bhi ap swara ko doshi maan rahe hai ??

Dadi too treid to spoke ,but all were alerted seeing docotr out of the ICU...everyone rushed to him

La : Kya hua doctor...ragini kaisi hai?

swara stood praying to god in her mind...

Da : ki hua doctor saab maari laado ko...bathathiye ...ki huaa?

Doctor with most difficulty spoke : I'm Sorry ...Wo ...

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Her thoughts were disturbed by door opening sound...she wiped her tears & turnd to see , her husband Sanskaar...

Sa ; yeh kya swara thum khana nahi kayiii...


Sw : wo mujhe bhuk nahi hai sanskaar...

Sa : arey aise kaise ...chalo muh kolo...

Sw ; nahi sanskaar ...plzzz

Sa ; thum ka rahi ho ya nahi?? chalo

swara lost now & had her dinner fed by sasnkaar ...

After dinner swara was arranging their bed with absent mind...sanskaar noticed this & came to her...

Sa : kya hua swara ? thum teek ho

Sw : hmm..main..main teek hu...

Sa : thum kal ke baare mein soch rahi ho naa...

Sw : hmmm..kya hoga sanskaar ...mujhe bahuth dar lag rahi hai...sanskaar ...kya hum ek bhar laksh ko dekh ke ayenge ..plzzz

Sa : abhi ?? nahi swara wo so rahe honge...

Sw : plzz sasnkaar mere liye...chalo na..dekhthe hai..ek baar

Sa : teek hai chalo...

both reach Laksh's room ...Door was not locked ..sanskaar opened the door slightly ...

Laksh as usual sitting in the balcony keeping his legs on one another on the table near by...the room was dark ..but the moonlight was enough to have a clear view of the room..he was lost in his thoughts...staring into the sky... there was a paper in his hand...yes..letter..it was the letter written by ragini to him...

Laksh found that letter after coming from hospital , 2 days after ragini's incident...it said ...

Laksh Ji,

haa apne sahi sunaa laksh ji..jab se aapse mili hoon aaj thak apni dil ki bath kolke nahi batha payi aapse..aur agar aaj bhi nahi bathavoon tho shayad yeh mouka kabhi nahi milega mujhe..patha hai laksh ji ..jab hum chote the thabhi hamari maa chali gayi hume chodke..thab se leke aaj thak hamari dadimaa hi hamari maa bani..hume sab such seekhayi..badon se bath karna , ghar ki saare kam karna , sabse pyaar se bath karna ..par ye nahi seekhapayi ki apni pyaar ko kaise bhulnaa...haa..ye ek kaami hi hamari zindagi ki sabse badi mushkil bangayii..jab hume bathaya ki hamare liye aapko pasand kiya..thabi usi kshan se hum aapko apna manaa , apni dil mein aapko basaaliya..par jab hume patha chala ki aap swara se pyaar karthe humse nahi...hum aapko bhul nahi payi..aap ki pyaar mein hum ithnai andhi ho gayi ..hume sahi aur galath ka pehchaan hi nahi patha chala..apnon ke sath humne kithna buraa kiyaa..phir bhi swara hume maaf kiya..par hume uski achayi bhi bardash nahi ho payii ..aur hume dar lagaa ki aap humse dhoor jayenge..isliye wapis hum is ghar mein ayii...malikin bani ..aur hume lagaa ki kam se kam paison ke liye ap hume apnayenge..par nahi..hum haar gayii..sabse ...apne aap se bhi...aaj hum par khudh hi nafrath ho rahi hai..hum khudh se aankhe nahi mila pa rahe...aur humne sochliyaa...hum ab kisike sath kuch buraa nahi karenge..kisiki zindagi mein nahi ayenge..haa yehi teek hai...yehi acha hai sabke liye...swara se hum maafi mangne ki layak bhi nahi hai..par hume patha hai wo hume maaf karegi ..kyun ki behan hai na hum..par is baar hume us se maafi nahi chahiye...nahi mangenge use maafi...aur aapke liye laksh ji ye rahi apkeliye..ab aap azaad ho is rishtey se..hum ab aapko kabhi apni chehra nahi dhekhe ko milegaa...par Laksh ji ...ek bath kehna chahenge hum

HUM GALATH HAI ... PAR HAMARI PYAAR GALATH NAHI HAI...humne aapse saccha pyaar kiyaa...sirf aapse...

Ragini...

along with the letter there were divorce papers signed by her...

Swara still staring into the room ...sanskaar kept his hand on her shoulder & said..

Sa ; chalo swara ...bahuth raath ho gayii hai...

Swara wiped her tears & took a last glance of the room, turned to leave ...Laksh still in the same position...

End of Part

Thanks For Reading
Suhasini

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KostinsQueen thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
All my dear friends..thanks for all the likes & comments..though i don't reply individually i really feel happy for all your comments..thanks & Big hug to u all 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
BR!!!!!!!!!! MAST RE😳
PAR TUNNE KAAN KYUN PAKRA?😆😆
CHAL KOI NHI LOVED IT!!!
POST SOON!!!!!😉😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update dear...😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just now saw your ff will read fully comment later.. This part was just awesome..
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Posted: 9 years ago
nc update.do pm me for nxt update.

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