SWASAN together forever..... Part 10 updated (page 16)

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KostinsQueen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hiii...friendss...i'm silent visitor of this forum... i love the writings of Naina , medhasankar & many (i don't know their names ...sorry )...after seeing so many FF's ...i too desperately wanted to write a FF...so finally i'm writing down...Basing on the present situation ...i continued my FF...

I hope you like my work... if not please let me know...so that i can improve it...

Being in the busy world...we always find time for our loved ones...for that only we are here...for our swasan...they had become a part of our life...😳 😳

so we start here...

It has been 1 month since the total empire of Maheswaris went into the evil hands of Ragini... in these 1 month she didn't leave a single chance to mock & taunt all maheswaris..Despite of all these ragini had a fear about Swara...she always come to their rescue... in order to get rid of her...she called marwari samajh people to MM ... They warned swara to leave sanskar in 5 days..

Swara decided to speak with sanskar she doesn't want to delay ..

Sw: aaj kuch bhi ho jaye

.mein sanskar ko aapni dil ki bath bathavungi...

She is waiting for him outside of the house

sanskar enters... Swara ko dekh ke bhi wo chalaa ja raha hai

sw: sanskar ..sanskar rukho...mujhe tumse kuch jaroori bath karni hai

sa : Achha... ab kounse mission ke baare mein swara..

sw : please sanskar mujhe ek mouka tho dho apni dil ki bath kehna hai mujhe.

sa: wow... tum mujhse apni dil ki bathein share karna chahthe ho .. teek hai bathao

sw: vo ... sanskar.. aaj samajh wale aye the ghar par..humari divorce ke baare mein

sa : acha hi hai na swara ... ek na dhin tho tume janaa hai...

sw: nahi sanskar mujhe nahi janaa..mein janaa nahi chahthi hoon

sa: haa main bhi kya...sorry swara maine bhool gayaa tum vahi karthi ho na jho tum karna chahithi ho... tho tum chahthi kya ho swara?

Seeing into his eyes..

sw : tum , iss parivaar , humara rishta e sab chahiye mujhe...

sa: kyun swara ... kuch dhin pehle thak tho tum mujh pe shak kar raha tha na ki ragini ki kidnap maine kiya..

sw: please sanskar bhool jao vo sab... maaf kardho mujhee...galathi ho gayee mujhse... ( tears in her eyes)

sa: kuch galathiya maafi ke layak nahi hothe swara...i'm sorry mujhe tumhari kisibhi baath pe yakeen nahi hai...

saying this he leaves...

swara's heartbroke at his bitter attitude.. She ran after him

He went into his room & closed doors on her face.

She cried vigorously ... Asking him to open door once...

Sw :Pls Sanskar ek baar meri bath suno... Aisa math karo pls sanskar...

E sab pehle se ragini dekh rahi hai... Thabi wo vaha akaar swara se kehthi

Ra: chhh...tume aisa dekh ke bahuth bura lag raha hai... Ithnaa ronaa dhonaa kiskeliye... Kuch faidha nahi hai swara... Vaise e tumhara dhoosra pyaar hai na swara...tho is baar tume bahuth mushkil hogaa... Aur mujhe bhi acha nahi lag raha hai e sab karthe

Sw: chup ho jaa ragini... Thume kya lagta hai ragini ...ki tum mujhe aur sanskar ko alag karoki

Ra : lagtha nahi yehi hogaa swara... Yeh math bhoolo ki thum dhono ki shaadi meri vajhese hui hai...jho shaadi meri vajhese

Hui...wo meri vajhese tootegi

Sw : sapne math dekho ragini...ek bath bathavoo.. Zindagi sabko dhoosri mouka dethi hai ragini... Thume bhi dhiya tha..lekin thumne us mouka gavaa dhiya..ab mujhe ek mouka mil rahi hai

..e mouka mein aapni haath se jane nahi dhoongi... Panch dhin...sirf panch dhin mein main apni aur sanskar ke beech sab teek kar dhoongi

Ra : dekhti hoon...

After that she leaves...swara goes to guest room to sleep...

In her room ... She remembers her marriage with sanskar , his confession , their fights , their togetherness... Silent tears rolling from her eyes...

Here Ragini to Dadima

Ra: e swara ko main chodungi nahi dadima.. Use tho main...

Da : yeh kya keh rahi hai laado.. Kuch aisa vaisa math karna... Vo bhi tho maari pothi hai...aur usne tumhari jaan bhi bachayaa

Ra : kya kare dadima.. Usne hume challenge kiya ki wo 5 dhin mein...

Da : ha haaa manne sab patha hai ...use tho is ghar se nikalna hai naa.. Iskeliye ek upaay hai mere paas.. E dekhoo...

She gives some documents to ragini...after seeing them

Ra : yeh divorce papers..aap ke paas kaise...is par tho sanskar ka sign bhi hai .. Aap ko kahase mila..

Da : wo aaj hum bhaadi gaye the na.. Tumhari dadaji ki kuch jaroori kagaz doond raha tha .. Thab yeh mila mujhe...bas is par swara ka Dasthakath kisi bhi tarah karake use ghar se bhejdho...lekin vaa swara kaise karegi laado..

Ra : (thinking deeply) wo sab aap hume chod dho dadimaa

Next day morning...

Everyone at breakfast table ... Swara comes just then

Ra : mujhe aap sab se ek jaroori bath karni hai... Aaj swara ghar chod kar ja rahi hai

Sw : pagal ho gaye kya ragini ..main kyun javoongi .

Sujata : sahi kahaa swara ne.. Jeh chori pagal ho gaye hain...

Ra : hum pagal nahi hai swara... Divorce ke papers sign karne ke baadh thum yahas kyun rahogi.

Annapurna : divorce...swara ne sign kiya..kab? Kyun ? Sanskar kuch bolo

Ra : ha haaa sanskar... yeh papers dekho aur bathao sabko...

he didn't understand...he kept watching that papers & swara...

Sa :ispe tho swara ka sign hai...

Sw : nahi sanskar maine koi sign nahi ki...tume kuch galath faimi hua tha..

Sa : achaa ... galath faimi... Tho ek baar in papers ko dekho kya yeh tumahari sign nahi thi?

Seeing that papers ... she was hell shocked...

Sw : yeh maine nahi kiya... maine jo sign wo yeh nahi hai...

Saying this she turned to bade papa ... expecting him to speak but he didn't...

Dp : ( in his mind) mujhe maaf kardho beta... Hume koi rastha nahi tha...hum majboor hai

Flash back

Ra : papaji hume aapse jaroori kam hai .. aap ayiye humare saath

Dp : ( seeing no one is around) he went and asked her ... Bolo ragini kya kaam hai

Ra : in papers par aap swara ka sign lijiye ...

Seeing that papers with angry...

Dp : yeh kaisa mazaak hai ragini ??

Ra : yeh mazaak nahi hai papaji ... aur aapko yaad dhiladhoo main is ghar ki malikin hoon...aap mujhse is tarah se baath math kijiye... aur in divorce papers pe already sanskar ka sign hai...aur aap swara ka sign karvayiye...

Dp : main yeh nahi karsaktha...

Ra : shayad aap bhool rahe hai papaji...maa ki thabiyaath abhi teek nahi hua hai... soch kar bathayiye...

Dp watches her silently..

Ra : hum aap ka kaam asaan kardhethe hai... aap in divorce papers ko is papers mein milayiye (gives some other documents) aur swara ko boliye ki kuch shares aap swara & sanskar ke naam pe giyaa ...uske baare mein kuch formalities hai karke boliye..

Dp : ( thinks about annapurnaji ) teek hai mujhe thoda waqt dho...

but ragini cuts him suddenly...

Ra : Nahi papaji aap abhi isi waqt jayenge...humare paass aur time nahi hai...abhi jayiye aap swara ke paas...

saying that she leaves... Dp walks silently to swara's room

he remembers his relation with her...how she always stood with their family...how she supported them all the time... but he has to do it...varna wo ragini kuch bhi karegii..annapurna ji ka thabhiyaath teek nahi hai...

he knocks swara's room door... after sometime she opens & is worried to see Dp at that time.

sw : badepapa ...aap yahaa...sab teek hai naa... badi maa...badi maa tho teek hai naa ( with concern )

Dp : haa beta ...sab teek hai...wo thumse kuch kaam tha...kya maine thumhari neendh tho karab nahi ki naa...

Sw : yeh aap kaise bathein kar rahe hai bade papa...aap andhar ayiyenaa...baitiye... boliye bade papa ...

Dp : ( with much hesitation )...wo ... betaaa...

sw : haa bade papa ...boliye naaa

Dp : wo humne company ka kuch shares thumhare aur sanskar ke naam pe kiya tha...aab tho saari property ragini ka hogayee...aur wo abhi yeh bhi poochegi...thooo humne sochaa thaa ki

sw : aap ne socha ki ...wo poochne se pehle ...aur use dhedhenge...kyun badepapa kyun kar rahe aap yeh sabb...jaroor kuch baath hai...kya hua badepapa...aap mujhe bathayiye...

Dp : (stands suddenly cutting her words )...koi baath nahi beta...agarr thumhe sign nahi karni tho teek haiii...

Sw : nahi nahi badepapa...mujhe e sab nahi chahiye...sanskar ne sign karliya...ab main bhi sign karoongi...

she takes papers from him...his hand trembles...

Dp : beta ek bhar paadlena...

Sw : uski koi jharoorath nahi hai badepapa...

she signs all the papers & gives it to him...he leaves sadly...& gives them to Ragini...

Ragini takes them from him with evil success smile...

flash back ends...

sujata : aab kyun chup hogayee chori...maine tho thume apnanegaa faisla bhi liyaa ...aur tumne aisaa kiya...

Annapurna : mujhe thumse yeh umeedh nahi thi swara...kyun kiya thumne aisa...

swara in her mind...yeh kya hua...aab main kaise bathavoon sabko...nahi main badepapa ka naam nahi le sakthi ...lekin mujhe is ghar nahi chodke janaa chahiye...aab kya karoon...( tears rolling from her eyes )...

then sanskaar leaves suddenly...after few mins...he comes back with her suitcase...

Sa : chali jao swara...is ghar se...meri zindagi se... hum sab se dhoor chali jaoo...

Sw : sanskar...

Sa : leaveee ( shouts at her )

Ra :(with her evil smile )... jao swara...aab aur tamasha math karo...

she holds swara's hand...and brings her outside...shows the way to out...

Ra : humne kahaa naa swaraaa...panch dhin nahi ek dhin mein humne aapko ghar se bahaar nikaldhiyaa... dhoobara is ghar mein ane ki koshish bhi math karna...

saying this she leaves...swara silently thinking about badepapa...

swara .in her mind.. badepapa ne humse sign liya divorce papers par...kyun?/ aisaa kya hua unke saath...is ghar jab koi mera saath nahi tha...thab bhi badepapa humare saath the...lekin aaj...yeh kya hua...

she is walking on the road with absent mind...then suddenly a car stopped infront of her with a jerk...

car door opened... & he came out...

she with hearty smile...rubbed her eyes ...& ran into his arms...hugging him tightlyyy...

Sw : sanskaar...

he too embraced her tightly with a smile...

End of Part 1
Love
Suhasini

Precap ; Swara's re-entry into maheswari mansion...

Edited by hasinig89 - 9 years ago

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KostinsQueen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
Wow!awsm strt.
Cntu soon

thank you...😊 will continue soon...

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Robia Yousaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice start.so now SwaSan will fight together

waiting for the next part.if possible plz PM me

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

Its really nice suhasini😃

loved it very much..😳

eager to know what is sanskar's plan..😊

loved your version of story..⭐️

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JIDHNYASA

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome..

Sanskar come to swara..

Waiting for the next part..

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KostinsQueen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: hp_2006
Its really nice suhasini😃
loved it very much..😳
eager to know what is sanskar's plan..😊
loved your version of story..⭐️

that's more than a compliment to me naina... thank youuu 😊

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KostinsQueen

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for all the support guys...😊 🤗

They forgot themselves in the embrace...she hide her face in his chest feeling the solace of his heartbeat...he closed his eyes to lock this movement forever ...

Before night ,...

after challenging to ragini swara went into guest room...but she was unable to speak ..she desperately wanted to speak with sanskarr...par kaise...she thought to speak with him early in the morning...by deciding that she went to her bed...switching off the lights...she lay on bed...

after so much struggle she closed her eyes...

suddenly she opened her eyes as she heard a sound... with out getting up from bed she scanned her room...then suddenly a shadow appeared on the window panel...that shadow trying to open the window door...she was shocked ...then she thought to herself...who is it?? may be thief...

then she slowly moved from bed & tiptoed to the side of the window...without making any noise she got the hold of vase on the table near her...she was in correct position to hit the person...then window opened slowlyyy...shadow now turned into a person...that person peeked slowly through window into room... then swara with out any late she hit him hard on the head...

Sa : shit ...swara... ( he spoke )...

Sw : oh my goddd...sanskaar ...tumm...yahaa,,,aise...kyun...kuch hua tho nahi naa...bolo...sanskaar ...tum kuch ...kuch baath nahi kar rahe ho ...kyun...bolooo..

Sa : offfooo ...swaraaa ...hold on for a moment...give me chance to speakk...

she brought him to the bed...& she switched on the lights...then she saw him hoding & rubbing his head...she really felt bad...

Sw : sanskaar...laagi tho nahi naa...

Sa : (sarcastically...) nahi tho...thumne tho phool se maraa tha naaa...nahi lagaa bhilkul bhi nahi...

Sw : acha...par mujhe thum yeh bathao...thum aise kyun aayaa??? dharvaje se aa sakthe hai naa...

he still rubbing his head...then she went to him & hold his head to see ...

eyelock...coming to their senses...

Sw : main...main abhi jaake thumhare liye icepack laathi hoon...ruko...

but he didn't let her go... he hold her hand & asked her to sit...

Sa ; bolo swara thum kuch baath karnaa chahethe ho naa...bathao...

Sw : ( she remebered his attitude towards her... in her mind...achaaa ithna curiosity ...abhi thak tho kithna manayaaa...aur yeh kithne rutee hua the...)

wo ...wo kuch kaas nahi thaa...

Sa : achaaa tho teek hai main chalathaa hoon...

he was on his feet to leave... then she hold his hand...

Sw : Nahi nahi...bathathi hoon...wo ...sanskaar...main ...wooo

Sa : arey ithna hesitate kyun kar rahi ho???? kuch dher pehle thak tho mere peeche pade hue ho...aab kya huaa...

sayinggg thisss he pulled her forwarddd ...now she is in his arms...seeing into his eyes...& lost...

without blinkinggg...he continued...

Sa : mujhe sab pathaa haiii swara... thum kya kehnaa chahthi hooo ..mujhe sab patha haiii...

Sw : patha haiii...kaise????

Sa : kaise...?? pyaar kiya hai swara thumse ...ithnaa pyaar kiya ki...thumhare aankhe pad saktha hoon ...thumhari dhadkhane sun saktha hoon...thumahri har cheese ko samajh saktha hoon...

Sw : ( with happy tears...) sanskaar...

Sa : SHHh..(keeping his finger on her lips ).kuch math bolo...mujhe patha hai thum yahaa kyun aayi ho??? jab main thume divorce paper dhene ayaa tha naa bhaadi ko...maine thume sindoor se thumahari maang bharthe hue dekha tha...thabhi main samajh gayeee ..lekin thumhari muh se sun na chahtha tha...aur jab main wapas ghar ayi yaha ragini poori ki poori parivaar ko is tarah aapmaan kiya...

phir tum ayi hooo...yaha parr ..main nahi chahtha swara thum aur thakleef lo...aur pareshan ho jao...sab ke liye jeethe jeethe thum apni zindagi bhool chuke ho...isliye main thume wapas jaane ke liye kahatha...

aur socha thaa ki yeh sab teek ho ne ke baad ,,...thume yahaa par le avoon...main thume kush dekhna chahtha hoon swara...phir se us ragini ki vaaje se thume dhook nahi dekhna chahtha...

Sw : aur mein vahaa...akeli ...thumse dhoor ...kaise kush rah pavoongi sanskaar...

Sa : lekin kya karoon swara??? ragini ki sach sabke saamne lanaa , aur uski yaardash wapas janaa.., uski kidnap...kya thumhari poori zindagi uski chakkar mein kaat jayegi...kya??

Sw : tho thum mujhse baath kyun nahi ki ?? aaj bhi mere baath sune binaa chalegayee... ( with doubtful face )

Sa : main bhi baath karnaa chahtha tha swara lekin ragini aur thumhari dadimaa hamesha thum pe nazaar rakaa hai...thum kya kar rahi ho? kahaa jaa rahe ho? har cheeza dekh rahe hai... aur aaj bhi cafe mein mujh par haamla...kisne kiya?? ragini ne us photograph ke liye...aur jabb hum baath kar rahe the..thab ragini hume dekh rahi thi...isliye maine bhina thumahre baath sune chalaa gayaa...

swara remembers ..how ragini came to her when she is asking sanskaar to open the door...

Sw : mathlab ..wo sabb ...thumne kahaa...thaa

Sa : wo sab nataak thaa...

Sw : nataak...thumne tho mujhe daraaa hi dhiya...meri jaan ja raahi thi...main kuch bhi sehloongi sanskaar ...par thumhara gussa nahi...

Sa : achaaa...babaa sorry...kahaa naa ...aab poora clear hai na...

Sw : magar sanskaar ...wo samajh waale...panch dhin...

Sa : uska bhi hum sochenge swara...

Sw : lekin sanskaar hum ragini se kyun chupa rahe hai ki hamari dhono ke beech ki baath??

Sa : exactly swara ... first thing ...main nahi chahtha ragini hamari beech kuch misunderstanding create kare...tho hum aisa rehna hai ki hamari jagada ho rahaa hai...tho ragini hamare baare mein kaam sochegi...aur second thing jab hum alaag alaag hai tho use dho khathara hai..thum aur main...kuch cheese allag rehake karna padtha hai swara...

Sw : wow... sanskaar ..thum meri saath rehthe rehthe ...bahuth smart ban gayaa...not bad... ( teasingly...)

Sa : acha...tho maine ithnaa kuchhh kiyaa...tthumare haath se maar bhi kayaa...tho mujhe kuch nahi milega???

swaraa...full off shyyy... : kya...kyaaa chahiye...

Sa : i just want to hear those 3 magical words from you swara...

Sw : woo... sanskaarrr ... I ...I...

Sa : hmmm youuu... bolo naa aageee... (moving close towards her )

Sw : wo... I ... I ...LOVE...

sudden knock knock on the door...

Both came to their state...jaaoo sanskaar...jaldhi jaoo yahaa se...pleae jaoo...

Sa : okay ...okay...byeee gud night...yeh baath kisi ko bhi maath bathanaa... hum kal baath karenge...bye...

Flash back ends...

They are still in their hug...forgettinggg all the world...