Winds of winter SwaSan IK era OS #8 pg 13 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Oooh woww...this last one was so painful. ...and alsoo so integral to IK...why did u leave it out saku??? Sanskaar calling swara when he needed her most and even tho she would hv had a million questions running in her head she accepted his words with such quietude. ... their compatibility was brilliant even then...wonder why sanskaar didnt notice it then??? Or was it coz he didnt want to be in tht relationship out of no choice???

Beautiful os sakura!

Oh, I had to take it out dear, it was too heavy for the chapter it was originally planned for...you know the one in SQ just before the finale...the chapter was too bitter even without Swara recalling this conversation.
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Fatma6

Saku this is just beautiful.👏


Well this trios noj jhok is soo cute😆

Reminds of my childhood nojjhoks with my cousins.😆

It's only to read ur lovely works I have registered myself in India forums😉
I am jus waiting to read ur Icarus.
⭐️

Did it happen when I restricted some posts as members only? Ohh...I'm sorry dear. But I had a fear of making them so accessible.
Thanks, It thrills me I made some one join IF because of me. So happy at the moment😊
I hope you will enjoy Icarus, too, the part one is already posted😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Saku 🤗

I am late again but here I am! I haven't forgotten Phoenix but those type of stories need un-diverted attention and I will get to that properly:)
Shru🤗🤗 Take your time darling, I'm in no hurry and no is the phoenix. I'm glad you read these, even if you're late😳

OS 2:
Really liked this too. It was painful but realistic to see how Swara is almost compelled to seek her father and despite the insults she meets there is rooted. It is redolent in many ways of the Swara we see but feels more natural here. Loved Sanskaar's protective instincts and clear stand he takes for Swara- again, totally what we expect but lovely to read! Am off to read the 3rd one now (gone 12.15 am 😆).
True...she is so dependent on family...that is what SQ and IK are all about. 12.15? Girl...when do you sleep?
OS 3:
This is the perfect SwaSan chapter- brings home so clearly why these two are soul mates. I loved the absolute accord with each other they have and how the masks can slip to nothingness with each other. The conversation and Sanskaar's way of mitigating her pain was so effective. I could feel Swara's pain and the answering echo of it in Sanskaar. I also liked the questions game, said so much so powerfully especially the fears and the deepest longings. Also the subtle way Swara's growing awareness of Sanskaar now coming to the front was nicely done. Really enjoyed this one too Saku.

Thanks...yes the masks do slip when they are alone, and it was supposed to highlight all the soulmate connection😳😳
Parts 4, 5, 6:
These were totally adorable and heart warming and made me miss IK/ SQ again. Loved the interaction between SwaSan of course but actually even Lakshya in 4 made me laugh with the way he stupidly let the cat out of the bag for the party! Sanskaar in all 3 is so suave even at that age, which is so appealing. I love the whole dynamic of how he still "allows" Swara to bully him. I had a friendship in my late teens with one of my best friends a little like that- (we weren't romantically involved!!) but I got away with murder with him and he let me boss him around when no one else could, this made me quite nostalgic as of course at that age, I never even realised it 😊. I also enjoyed in particular the way Sanskaar was so angry that Lakshya had hurt Swara, nice foreshadowing there. The chess game made me remember Medha's piece Black and White again and miss her but I always love chess analogies and descriptions. These have all been such a delight.

Lots of love Saku xx

I miss winter land as well...spring is lonely... You liked Lakshya even? Yes he is sort of the idiot of the three...Swara the pet and Sanskar the leader, perfect trio.😃 I have that kind of a friend too...these parts were sort of based on our bond...we aren't romantically involved either. There are some sweet friendships of that kind!
I miss Medhu too...but her work is all too important. Wish she could write more often here😊
Love you too Shru! Thanks a ton!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

Hey Sakura!

I've always been a silent reader. A friend of mine suggested Ice King to me and I was bowled over with the very first part that I read. I went ahead and finished IK and SQ the same day and I must say they are THE BEST works that I have read on SwaSan, THE BEST.
You've created a completely different world and I'm in love with it!
I've also read another of your works, Elixir, and that is pure magic too. <3
And coming to the Winds, I'm so loving these stories of a younger SwaSan. Especially the last 3 that you've put up. Swara and Sanskaar's relation is such a joy to read about and seems like even in those old days, what they shared had been much deeper than friendship and closer to the love they finally found in the future. <3
It's sad that they had to go through so much to finally get there, but they found their spring and that's what's important. <3

Looking forward to reading more on SwaSan from you. xoxo

- Love, Yukthi.

Hey Yukthi😊
It's nice to hear from you. You made my day with this comment. Tell that friend of yours I thanked them separately.
Oooh, you liked them that much? Thanks, thanks a ton. I'm too glad you found Elixir magic😳
Yes, there bond was very deep that's why they made up, even after suffering so many wounds on it. You would read more from me for sure...I hope you'll continue to enjoy them as well!
-Love Sakura.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: chemgirl

Girl u made my day...read these in bed...awesome...awesome...awesome...there seems to be a strong bond between sanskaar and swara...he is very protective of her...laksh on the other hand just wants to giv her what she asks

Yes, you realized the between the lines facts correctly dear! Thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ah. This one is after he refuses to marry her and chooses Kavita, right?
He chose Kavita, yet his mind and heart is with Swara. He is still tied to Swara..loved how he said he misses her. <3 These two were so clearly in love, it's sad they had to go through so much pain and separation before reuniting for good. But then again, we wouldn't have got IK and SQ, so I'm glad things went how they did. 😳 And talking of IK and SQ, I think it's time for me to revisit them as the winds, especially this OS has made me very nostalgic. <3

PS - The last line where he apologizes to Swara is piognant..I have no words to express. ❤️
You're truly best, Saku 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hey Yukthi😊
It's nice to hear from you. You made my day with this comment. Tell that friend of yours I thanked them separately.
Oooh, you liked them that much? Thanks, thanks a ton. I'm too glad you found Elixir magic😳
Yes, there bond was very deep that's why they made up, even after suffering so many wounds on it. You would read more from me for sure...I hope you'll continue to enjoy them as well!
-Love Sakura.

I'm sure you know her, It was Anna. And I am SO grateful I was introduced to IK and followed my way through SQ, elixir, phoenix and here I am. 😳 All of them are really great, But nothing can beat IK and SQ..they're a completely different world in themselves. <3

Oh, I miss the winter land SO much after reading The Winds, especially the latest part. Makes me sad and it was so poignant, stirred some deep hidden emotion in me. I hope we get to read more on SwaSan from The Winterland..or spring. Or even The Winds.

- Love, Yukthi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

read all the 6 parts in one go..

Wow they are so nic.e..

Swasan closed friend..
Lucky always seem to have some space of his between them,..
Poor lucky..

one question why does sheksar and his family hates swara??
Loved that swara can come in mm house though she is bengali and loved by Ap...

Continue soon..
And do PM me nxt time..

Hey dear!
I think you're a little confused, these one shots belongs to the ice king and Snow queen, so there Swara's father doesn't like her and her parents were divorced, remember?
Thanks BTW, I'm glad you enjoyed them!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

I'm sure you know her, It was Anna. And I am SO grateful I was introduced to IK and followed my way through SQ, elixir, phoenix and here I am. 😳 All of them are really great, But nothing can beat IK and SQ..they're a completely different world in themselves. <3

Oh, I miss the winter land SO much after reading The Winds, especially the latest part. Makes me sad and it was so poignant, stirred some deep hidden emotion in me. I hope we get to read more on SwaSan from The Winterland..or spring. Or even The Winds.

- Love, Yukthi.

Oh Anna? Yes, yes, I do know her! True, nothing can beat the winter lands, I put so much effort in to them. I hope you'll try Icarus as well, just started writing it😊
There is only one more wind left dear, I said it was 8 of them in the beginning😳 But I'm really considering of writing some more winter tales...perhaps after Icarus is done. Thanks a lot once more😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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