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kritz4ever

@kritz4ever

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#431

Tooo good

Hope nothing is going to happen for swaragini

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chemgirl

@chemgirl

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#432

So its Adarsh...I had feeling he had something to do with this...but i thought he and his mom were together in it...its an awesome ss...sorry for not commenting earlier

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arohijsp

@arohijsp

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#433

OMG, it was Adarsh all along!
The one I least suspected.. The eldest son!
When I was reading the part...what's rightfully mine, I knew you were talking about Adarsh not Laksh.
You penned it all so well.
Take a bow dear, you are an excellent writer!

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Strikhedonia

@Strikhedonia

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#434

Hey.. :)

Sorry for not being able to comment on a few updates. I was a little busy!

But this update is a masterpiece dear! I never expected it to be Adarsh. That fact was so surprising. A lot of truth has been revealed in this update. I'm still worried as to who got shot!

Update soon yaar! Waiting! ;)

-Arthy.

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#435

oh god i dont want ragini to die but yeah adarsh had lost it..

totally understood his frustrations but yeah he is too far gone

please do continue

bye sumi

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#436

The twist and turns...this is like reading a thriller. So, it was Adrash all the time. Beautifully written...

Loved how you made Sanskar all calm and steady even under threat! Cool!

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Sapna...
What an update...what an update. Masala thriller taken to the max. 👏 👏

I did have this niggling suspicion of Adarsh 😉

Too good. The adrenalin pumping way you had written this, the tension almost jumped off my mobile screen.

I guess, Ragini came in front of Swara as she was about to get shot? Her sisterly affection awakening and giving her a chance to redeem herself?

Glad to know that Durga Prasad didn't have a hand in Kavita's killing. But curious what Sanskaar told him that promoted his decision of handing over the CMD post to Sanskaar. Some evidence of Adarsh's wrongdoing perhaps?

hahaha...masala thriller, really 😳 😳. I am really glad it was adrenaline rush worthy. Yes you did, you had a doubt on him is the past two parts 😃...your intuition and analysis turned out to be true. 😃. I will hopefully be able to answer more about Ragini and DP in the next one 😳

🤗

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: sarathy321
No...
Again an awesome one..
So, laksh and adarsh...came out to be the people..
Waiting for u to continue
Pls...don't say something happens to swasan

thanks arathy...though it was only adarsh who did everything. Laksh was emotional and volatile because he thought sanskar was forcing his father. he did get the gun, but he is obedient when DP orders him anything. he punched the wall and then adarsh showed his true colours. laksh was shocked by it that he was left standing by the wall during the entire reveal.

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: Sakura24
How did Adarsh end up with a gun? It's Lakshya's gun, right...now I get it!
Lakshya...well in the entire game he was the one I did not waste my time suspecting!

Bravo girl, you were too good! No one would think Lakshya was capable of such things...awesome, perfect, the fast paced and thrilling way you have created this chapter is still ringing around me. I'm too thrilled and captivated at the moment.
I had a suspicion as to how Kavita happened, sort of right in that guess and when I asked you about Adarsh earlier, I had this nudging worry about him too.

But still, I was too caught up with Durga Prasad, never thought he had done nothing wrong than being Lakshya's father.

Wonderful! Amazing! Brilliant!

thanks Saku. you were right to not suspect Laksh. Laksh didnt do anything except provide Adarsh with the gun inadvertently. Laksh volatile as ever was pissed at sanskar for trying to force his father, but he put the gun down when DP ordered and punched that wall. That was when Adarsh showed his true colours for having been sidelines in favour of Sanskar by DP. Laksh was completely shocked at this point and kept standing by the wall.

You did have a inking about adarsh though girl 👏 😃

thanks for liking the update saku 🤗

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foresight

@foresight

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#440

Originally posted by: simsen23
Omg...i mean...ya i was guessing it must b laksh..but adarsh too...wat wl happen to swara...update soon buddy...

thanks simmi 😳 😃..laksh was never involved in the game...he is all bark no bite. adarsh was the one behind everything. laksh was just immature and volatile. he thought sanskar had tricked his father and got the gun. but he put it down when DP ordered him. that is when adarsh showed his true colours, shocking laksh completely.

Edited by foresight - 9 years ago

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