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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#421

next part...unveiling coming up soon.

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Shivangi

@Annei123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#422

😳 awesome update !!!

hope we get more swasan in next update😉

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: Annei123
😳 awesome update !!!
hope we get more swasan in next update😉

thanks so much Anne 😳 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#424

Sapna...

What an update...what an update. Masala thriller taken to the max. 👏 👏

I did have this niggling suspicion of Adarsh 😉

Too good. The adrenalin pumping way you had written this, the tension almost jumped off my mobile screen.

I guess, Ragini came in front of Swara as she was about to get shot? Her sisterly affection awakening and giving her a chance to redeem herself?

Glad to know that Durga Prasad didn't have a hand in Kavita's killing. But curious what Sanskaar told him that promoted his decision of handing over the CMD post to Sanskaar. Some evidence of Adarsh's wrongdoing perhaps?

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arathy

@sarathy321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#425

No...
Again an awesome one..
So, laksh and adarsh...came out to be the people..
Waiting for u to continue
Pls...don't say something happens to swasan

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#426

How did Adarsh end up with a gun? It's Lakshya's gun, right...now I get it!

Lakshya...well in the entire game he was the one I did not waste my time suspecting!

Bravo girl, you were too good! No one would think Lakshya was capable of such things...awesome, perfect, the fast paced and thrilling way you have created this chapter is still ringing around me. I'm too thrilled and captivated at the moment.

I had a suspicion as to how Kavita happened, sort of right in that guess and when I asked you about Adarsh earlier, I had this nudging worry about him too.

But still, I was too caught up with Durga Prasad, never thought he had done nothing wrong than being Lakshya's father.

Wonderful! Amazing! Brilliant!