Swasan FF : TO BE LOVED Note p11 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Interesting
This story is like reality
Not as fiction
Plz continue👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Very nice and Interesting start 👏
I loved it😳
Looking forward to read the next part, continue soon
Pm me if possible
Edited by The-Heart - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear...pls continue...&&& PM me if u can
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Hope it happen in real...
Want to see only them
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
interesting story
continue soon
n do pm me
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nice start .update asap
Edited by ishanita - 9 years ago
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Wow pls cntinue i want to read it further and pm me also
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start this should happen in serial. Pls continue soon and pm me also.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2


Swara makes some distance between them.

Swara : I feel cold so I will change with my nighty.

Sanksaar : Of course.

He switches the tv.

He starts a song program and it's all romantic songs.

Swara starts her cooking. She cooked in thirty minutes. She asks Sanskaar to go and freshen up.

He puts soap on his body suddenly the water stops.

Sanskaar screams : Swara... Swara... Why there is no water?

Swara comes to the door.

Swara : I don't know first open the door. I took some water to wash clothes, I will give it to you.

Sanskaar : Wait a minute.

He wears a towel around his waist. He opens the door. Swara glares at him. In her mind, he has perfect pectorals...

Sanksaar : Please jaldi karo Swara!

Swara takes water and washes his face.

Sanksaar opens his eyes.

They are lost in each others. The water of the shower starts again on them. Sanskaar closes the tap. They are drenched.

Sanksaar gives to her a towel. She screams because of her hairpin. He takes the towel. He dries her. He comes close to her lips.

Swara slowly : Sanskaar.

He goes to the room.

She smiles.

Swara changes her clothes in bathroom.

She goes to the caretaker to know why there is problem of water.

Swara : Bhaiyya namaste we have water problem can a plumber check it?

Caretaker : I am Boofy and don't need of plumber when Boofy is here.

Swara laughs.

Boody : Come with me we will check it.

Sanskaar : I am her husband Sanskaar.

Boofy : I am your neighbor Boofy.

Sankskaar also laughs.

Boofy : I will check it.

He goes to the bathroom.

Some minutes later he comes out and announces that a wire is ruined. So he will change it tomorrow morning.

Someone rings on the door.

Lady : Boofy what are you doing I am waiting for our... I mean... Everythinig is ready for our... So please fast otherwise you sleep on the sofa.

Swasan understand.

Boofy : I am coming Pinky.

Boofy comes to his wife.

Boofy : Sanksaar ji and Swara ji she is my lovely wifey Pinky. I have to leave for... you know what.

He strake to Sanksaar. Swasan blushes.

Pinky : Bye and enjoy your night.

She closes the door and leave.

Swara laughing : What name they have! My god, so funny.

Sanskaar : But they are so cute.

Swara goes to the kitchen and remembers their cute moments, she blushes.

They ate the dinner.

They come to the room.

Sanksaar : I will sleep on the ground.

Swara : No we can share the bed.

Sanksaar : Are you sure?

Swara : Yaa

So they sit on the bed.

Swara : Sanskaar let see a movie together on your computer.
He nods.

Sanksaar plays the movie Ishqzaade.

They are lying side by side.

When the scene about consummation starts Swara feels shy so she turns her head and sleeps.

Some hours later she sees the light of computer, Sanskaar slept with computer so she takes it and puts a pillow behind his neck.

He wakes up and finds swara's head in his hand. He just glares her. The sun disturbing her sleep so he puts a hand above her eyes. She opens her eyes. Sanksaar was fixing her. She stands up.

Swara : I am sorry.

Sanskaar : It's okay.

They change and eat breakfast.

Sanksaar : I decide something, I will search a job in other company.

Swara : I am sorry it's all because of me naa.

Sanksaar puts his finger on her mouth : Not at all. I am happy to discover new zone of work.

He takes his files and quits the flat.

Swara also decides to search for a job.

Sometimes later, they find a job, Sanskaar in a factory has a manager and Swara has a music teacher.

Swara and Sanskaar finish their work.

Swara takes auto : Jaldi bhaiyya I have to go home before my husband.

She comes to the gate where Boofy is waiting for her.

Swara : I am sorry bhaiyya I forgot you.

They enter in the flat.

Boofy : I know you find a job I saw you in my daughter class as a teacher, by the way my daughter name is Siara.

Swara : Please bhaiyya my husband doesn't know about it so please?

Boofy : No way

She tends a paper money.

Boofy : Swara ji I know that you were all day with me because of your bathroom.

Sanskaar hears it.

Swara : Hi Sanksaar.

Sanskaar : Hi I find a new job as manager in factory,

Swara : Congrats.

He tends sweets to her.

He gives also to Boofy.

Boofy finishes his job.



Precap : Sujata visits her son. Laksh disturbs Swara. Sanskaar and Laksh has fight. Sanksaar discovers about Swara's job. They saw Kavitha with a man.

Edited by 8seetha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
ohh my god... kavitha is alive...
waiting for next update..
thanx for pm
lovely update

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