Swasan FF : TO BE LOVED Note p11

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Swara was shattered to know that no one believe her, like always. Sanksaar comes to the room.

Sanskaar : Kya waa Swara?

Swara : Nothing.

She wipes tears.

Sanskaar sits beside her and thinks about how his family treats his wife. They will never change. How they can believe until now this cheap Ragini who did all the wrong things to his wife? How he regrets to let this woman ruin his wife reputation? How he will put a smile to his Shona?

Swara thinks about her stupid mind who trust Ragini more than herself. How can a girl be so selfish and wants to destroy so many life?

She didn't care on anything, nor in humanity or nor in reputation. She did a lot of bad things not only to her but to everyone, our parents, our family and our in-law. She spreads no one. If she didn't discover the truth on her she will maybe kill someone. She starts to sobering a lot.

Sanskaar sees his wife in depression state. He surrounds his arm on her.

Sanskaar : Please calm down. I am here for you. I will never let her to close you. Believe me.

She hugs him tightly like her life is in depend.

A servant knocks on their door.

Sanksaar : Bolo.

Servant : DP calls both of you.

Sanskaar : We are coming downstairs.

He leaves.

Swara washes her face.

They walks downstairs.

Everyone are presents include Ragini and Laksh.

DP : Swara because of the circumstances I will ask you to leave this house now.

Sanksaar : Likin bade papa.

Sujata : Sanskaar shup bhaiya is right. She has to leave.

Swara sees Sujata, she turn herself in disgust.

Swara : Tikk bade papa. I will leave. Maybe today the proof are against me but I will just tell you one thing that even the last time that you pointed on me. I was not the culprit. And this time also so even if you will ask me for forgiveness or to my come back. My answer will be no because this family doesn't need a human but a selfish bahu who will use them like a doll.
(She turns to Sanskaar.) Tum boghot acchi hoo. I wished that I fall in love on you before your brother. You are a good friend who care a lot of on me. But I think I don't deserve happiness in my life. After my departure be always this fabulous man that you are. Thanks a lot for everything.

She is about to go but Sanskaar holds her hand.

Sanskaar : I decide something that we will leave this house together. Until now you are my legal wife because of your beloved sister. I have a flat we will stay here.

Swara interrupts him : No Sanskaar you can't leave your family, you are happy after a long time. You can't walk away just for me.

Sanskaar : No Swara I have to because when we were getting married we took vows about to be together. So we will. I will not force you to be with me but at least until our divorce.

He takes her hand and go upstairs.

Swara : Please Sanskaar listen to me.

Sanskaar : Not this time, I am sorry.

Swara understands that she doesn't have other choice. So she just packs her staffs like him.

They come downstairs.

He takes DP blessing : Sanksaar, you want to leave, but I will just say one thing you will never come back in this house.

Sujata cries : No Sanksaar you can't leave our house.

Sanskaar : Why not maa?

Sujata : Because you are my son.

Sanskaar : Or Swara?

Sujata : Leave this bengali...

Sanskaar : Really you are worst that this Ragini because you are racism. But also a selfish who forget how my patni prove my innocence when everyone doubt on me. On their son. You know what I swear on Lord Krishna that everyone who are present here will fall on my wife legs.

He holds her hand and they go away far to this house.



Sankaar drives Swara wonders where they will live.

Swara : Where we are going?

Sanskaar : On my flat.

Swara : Which flat Sanskaar?

Sanksaar : A little flat where I lived when I lost Kavita.

Swara : Oh.

Sanskaar stops in the city, in rich suburb.

He takes the lugagges.

He gives the keys to Swara. She opens on it. She sees a flat very dusty. In the room there is just a cupboard and a desk with a mirror.

Swara : When you come here last time. Before our wedding to see the last time Kavita's face.

He has a lonely tears. She puts her arm on his shoulder.

Sanksaar starts to shout and hold his stomach.

Swara panics: Kya waa?

Sanskaar : I am very hungry.

She shots him : You are so bad Sanskaar.

She opens the fridge and see that there are nothing.

Swara : I will give you a list with furniture.

Sanskaar : Okay madam.

Swara gives a list. He goes.

She starts to open the windows and clean the flat.

She sees a photo on Kavita. She cleans the frame. She thinks that she is very beautiful.

She is very tired after the housework. She hears Sanksaar keys.

Sanksaar : Hold the vegetable , I will put other thing on the corner.

After some time, someone rings the bell it's a deliver boy who give a new television.

Swara : Sanskaar I will come back after a shower. He nods.

When she takes the bath, he cuts the vegetables. He comes near the windows.

Swara comes to him in towel : Kya was Sanksaar, why you are crying? I know because you missed your house.

She feels sad for him.

Sanskaar laughs and makes Swara to see the vegetables : I cried because of this onion.

He glares at her. She feels uncomfortable.

She starts to walk to their room. She is about to fall down because of water. He holds her waist to make her stand. She catches his shoulders.

She feels something on her stomach.

Precap : They share the bed, Sanskaar falls on the ground. Swara search s for a new job.


Index

Part 1 : Page 1
Part 2 : Page 2
Part 3 : Page 6
Part 4 : Page 9
Part 5 : Page 10
Edited by 8seetha - 9 years ago

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sonal36 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome dear
Pls update quickly
Waiting eagerly
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interesting ...
please continue soon and pm me when you update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start!
Absolutely loved Swara's reply to DP. 👏 That was class!

Sanskaar leaving MM with Swara. 🥳

Cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start
They should leave everyone and start their lovely life together
Plz continue sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely please continue and if u do please pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amaizing strt.
Swasan gv a proper rl 2 evry1 & leave mm.
Hw i wish ths hapn.
Cnt soon jaldi jaldi.pm me if possible.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's amazing dear...
Do cont soon...

Would really love to read more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's very nice...nd different from others..
waiting for interesting updates. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start. I want this to happen in the show. Swara to retaliate and then SwaSan to abandon that poor excuse of a family and start a life separately.
Update soon.

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