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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4


Swasan realizes that someone change on their relation. But they can't definite what. It's the night time. They comes to the bed.
Sanksaar is finishing something on his computer. Suddenly he starts to cough.

Swara gives him a glass of pani. She cuddles his back.

Swara : Are you feeling better now?

Sanksaar sees the proximity between them. He comes closer to her.

Sanksaar : Don't worry I am fine.

She moves her hand but he stops her.

Sanksaar : Swara I have to speak with you. My lawyer call to me about our divorce. Now that we left the house you are not forced to pursue this relationship with me. If you can we can sign for the mutual divorce.

Swara is sad : Yaa sure I will think about it and I will tell you tomorrow when I can sign. She puts the glass and cover herself with blanket.

She cries silently as Sanskaar.

Next day they wake up. Swara is pale. She is about to faint. Sanskaar catches her. He puts her on the bed.

He touched her face, she has fever.

Sanksaar panicked : What happened to you?

Swara in unconscious state, whispers : Don't leave me Sankskeer... Please... Maa bolo to Sanksaar... Please... Sanksaar I need you...

Sanksaar has tears and hugs her. He calls a doctor.


Boofy comes with the doctor. He checks her.

Doctor : You wife has high fever something make her sad. She needs rest and affection. She feels very lonely. Give her an enjoyable day.

Doctor leave after the prescription.

Boofy : Sir she needs you so I will leave.

Swara after some time, wakes up. Sanksaar gives her a tablet and milk.

Swara : I am feeling better. We have to leave for the work.

Sanksaar hugs her : Never do that again. I love you Swara, see you in this condition it's killing me.

Swara with a smile : I am fine now. Don't worry and wipes your tears.

Sanksaar : We have a day off today. So let enjoy.

Swara: It's not necessary Sanksaar.

Sanksaar kisses her hand : It's my order my wife.

Swara wears a bleue saree.

They leave from here.

Swara : Where we are going?

Sanksaar : Fo a movie.

Swara : Which one?

Sanskaar : To see Tamasha.

Swara : It's sound interesting.

They come to the counter. Sanksaar stop and sees a couple.

Swara : What happened?

Sanskaar : Kavitha?

Swara : Where?

They come to the couple.

Sanksaar has tears.

Sanksaar : Kavitha?

Kavitha sees them.

Kavitha : Sanksaar!

Someone holds her shoulder: Come on baby the movie will start.

Sanksaar sees that she is pregnant.

Sanksaar : Kavitha can you explain me?

Kavitha : He is my husband Rishi. When I left you...

SAnksaar : No you was dead in my arms.

Kavitha : It's not really like that...

Sanksaar lost his patience, he holds her wrist.

Swara : Leave her Sanksaar!

Rishi : Excuse me sir, she is my wife leave her right now.

Sanksaar lets her hand.

Kavitha : When I came to hospital, I was in critical state but I open my eyes and told doctor to say you that I was dead and you can't take my body because it was damaged. I did all this because I was afraid to live with you. My life was not safe because of your family.

Swara : Stop it Kavitha, they didn't do nothing, it was an accident.

Kavitha : No many times his mother threatens me but I didn't hear her because I loved Sanksaar.

Sanksaar : You thought that I will let you down. How could you? Do you know how many time I hated my family for you? Because this haleness I wasted her life, my wife life...

Kavitha : Listen Sanksaar both of us moved on in our life, I married my saviour, the surgeon who saved my life. And you married a beautiful wife, so forget the past.

Kavitha leaves from here with her husband.

Sanksaar : Chelo Swara, for the movie.

He was sad, she puts her head on his chest.

Swara : See the movie and forget everything.

They saw the movie.

Swara : I am hungry now.

She take him a restaurant.

She orders the food and secretly a beer for Sanksaar.

Sanksaar is shocked to see the beer bottle.

Swara : It's for you, I know you are sad so drink it to forget.

He starts to drink and he sees Utaara with Laksh.

Sanksaar : What Uttara doing here?

They come close to them.

Uttara : I never think that Swara bhabhi and Sanksaar bhai will leave the house. I think we were wrong.

Laksh : Your brother ruined my life.

Uttara was furious : Stop it bhai.

He is about to slap her but Swara stop him.

She takes Uttara with them.

Uttara explain them everything.

Uttara : Come I will tell all the truth to our family.

Swara : No Uttara, we are fine.

Uttara : Bhabhi come back please.

Swara : Never, they insult me a lot of times, so no more.

They drop Uttara.

They come to their flat.

Sanksaar sits on the bed.

Sanksaar : Swara...

Swara comes to him : Kya waa?

Sanksaar is not in sense because of the alcohol.

He caresses her cheek.

Swara tries to stop him. He holds her waist and his lips comes to her neck.

She pushes him.

Swara : I am not ready Sanksasr, give me time.

Sanksaar yells : I understand, as Kavitha you also want to leave me. Tikk. I will never touch.

Swara shocked : Sanksaar.

He goes to the bathroom.

She cries. She thinks, how I can give me to you while you are not in sense. I will tell you my love first.


Precap : Swara in hot dress. Swasan has a fight.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Nice...
Lucky tries to slap uttara😕

Nice update...
Swasan have a fight???
Why????


Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
KAafi accha swasan fight par ku.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Part 5

Next day, Sanskaar in the office.

His boss invite all the staffs for a big celebration. It is a couple party. So everyone has to come with their partner tonight.

Sanskaar wonder how he can asks Swara to come in the party after the incident of yesterday. But he has no other choice.

He comes to the flat. Swara was already here.

Sanskaar: Swara I know you don't love me but I need you to come for a office party.

Swara : I will Sanskaar.

Sanskaar was happy. She is getting ready.

She wears a black net grown. She's mesmerizing on it.

Sanskaar : Hot.

Swara : What?

Sanskaar : Nothing.

She sees Sanskaar, she decides to tease him a little. She is wearing her earring.

Swara : Ouch.

Sanskaar runs to her. He takes the earring. He blows and puts slowly the earring. She just holding his arm.

He is about to go but she tends to him sindhoor. He fills her forehead with it.

He wears a black shirt with a coat.

They leave for the party.



In entering on the party, they saw Durga Prasad, Annapurna, Ram Prasad and Sujata here. Sanksaar holds his wife's hand.

His boss comes with his wife.

Boss's wife : You are looking very gorgeous in this dress.

Swara : Thank you madam.

His boss tends him a glass of champagne. Sanksaar refuses it. In the place, he takes two cups of juice. He gives one to Swara.

They drink it.

Some songs are playing, now it's Guerua.

His boss asks Sanskaar to dance. He takes Swara to the floor. They dance romantically.

Dhoop se nikal ke
Chhanv se phisal ke
Hum mile jahaan par
Lamha tham gaya

Aasmaan pighal ke
Sheeshe mein dhal ke
Jam gaya to tera
Chehra ban gaya

Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua

Haan nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Ho.. Rang de tu mohe gerua

Ho tumse se shuru.. tumpe fanaa
Hai Sufiyana yeh dastaan
Main kaarwaan maznil ho tum
Jaata jahaan ko har raasta

Tumse juda jo
Dil zara sambhal ke
Dard ka wo saara
Kohra chhan gaya

Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ho.. Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua

Ho.. veeraan tha, dil ka jahaan
Jis din se tu dakhil hua
Ik jism se hai ik jaan ka
Darza mujhe haasil hua

Haan.. pheeke hain saare
Naate jahaan ke
Tere saath rishta gehra ban gaya

Duniya bhula ke tumse mila hoon
Nikli hai dil se yeh duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua
Ranjhe ki dil se hai duaa
Rang de tu mohe gerua

Haan nikli hai dil se ye duaa
Ho.. Rang de tu mohe gerua

All applauds. Maheswari's couples saw them astonished.

Swara asks Sanskaar to leave.

Sanskaar agreed.

Same time Maheswari's couple quit.

They have a breakdown.

Swara pleased Sanskaar to drop them.

Sanskaar doesn't understand his wife goodness. He is sad that his own family thought bad about her.

Sanskaar comes to them : Bade papa come we can drop you.

DP : It's okay we don't need you help.

Swara plead Sujata.

Sujata : Bhai boghot raat hogay. So please.

Annapurna : Haan ji.

DP finally agrees.

They sit on the car. It's silence.

Annapurna : Sanskaar why you don't come to our company?

Sanskaar : Badi maa I find a job as a manager and your bahu has a music teacher.

DP is proud.

Annapurna : Where are you leaving?

Swara : In a small flat.

They have tears.

Swasan drops them.

DP : Thank you.

Sanskaar is moved. He wished that he can hug him but can't.

They enter in the house while Swasan leave.



Swasan enter on the flat.

Swara is about to enter on the bathroom but Sanskaar blocks the path.

Swara : What are you doing Sanskaar I have to change!

Sanksaar : First I will.

Swara : No me.

Swara puts her hand on his chest to make him move.

He holds her waist.

Swara : Move I need to change.

Sankaar: No way.

She pushes him until the bed. Swara falls on him. She was on him. (I mean, just imagine).

She breaths heavily. Seing his wife in this mood, he doesn't think, but put a kiss on her lips.

He wakes up.

Sanksaar : Sorry.

He comes to the window. She hugs him by behind.

Swara : I love you Sanskaar. I know I took a lot of time to admit it.

Sanskaar : Mai kaha taa naa I am sorry.

He realizes her confession.

She is about to walk but he catches her waist.

Sanskaar : I will help you to remove your clothes.

She turns against him and blushed.

He carries her to their bed.

He puts her and takes off her jewels.

She unbuttoned his shirt while she lets love bits on his chest.

He sucks her ears.

Swara is moaning.

Sanksaar licks her neck.

She slowly sucks his lower lips... He does the same with her upper lips..They go with the flow and move apart to breath..

He opens her dress . He cuddles her back. He pets on her back.

He takes the dress and her bra. She embraces him.

Sanksaar looks at her surprisingly and pulls the blanket over them... By the time they were completly naked and started making love!


Precap : Patta nai.
Edited by 8seetha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Hi everyone I decided something that I will a break from writing here.
So don't wait for my next part and I don't think you will miss it.
Everyone take.

Bye bye.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
What? :( :(
Please don't do that it's an amazing story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: rinku95

What? :( :(
Please don't do that it's an amazing story



Don't worry I will come back but for now I will be away from Swaragini serial. I will write on other serial. And thanks for ur support.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
plz come back we miss your story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Please update.. Waiting.. Come back soon😊

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