FanFiction Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya SwaSan/RagLak Part23 Updated (Pg26) - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kelly08

dear which part continuation u have pm d me...i dont think i have read other parts.anyways do u make OS ?? i love os which connects to swragini 's current plot...if u r making an os do pm 😊


Here is the link of my FF Intro n i have mentioned da links of all parts too..frm strting till the recent one.hope u will like it 😊.do leave ur comments 😊

Edited by Goldie93 - 9 years ago
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Aww nyc update!!! I loved the initial swara n ragini scene specially!!!😳 n thnx fo r d pm!!
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Originally posted by: indrani7495

Aww nyc update!!! I loved the initial swara n ragini scene specially!!!😳 n thnx fo r d pm!!


Thnks fr the Appreciation 😊..n my pleasure..
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Posted: 9 years ago
How cute updt.
Hihi!sanlak th8 swaragini gonna marry with sm1 else.
Cnt soon
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Guyz here is the Nxt Part of Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya .Hope u Like It :).

Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya

Part 14

In MM

Both the Families are Present in MM fr discussing abt the Marriage of SwaSan n RagLak . SwaRagini r also Present bt they r with Pari n Uttara while all the Elders r bzy Discussing.Jst then SanLak comes n Listens there Convo n Gets more Angry.

DP : Shekhar..jaise SanLak humare bete hai waise hi SwaRagini humari Betiyaan hai.toh hum unke Shaadi main koi Kami nhi rehne deke.aisi Shaadi karegi ki Saara Kolkata yaad rakhega.

Shekhar : Shukriya DP Ji.aap bahut acche hai..aaplog humari betiyoon ki Shaadi ke liye itna kuch karrahe hai..warna jo Past main hua uske baad toh koi bhi Parivaar itna nhi karega apni Ex Bahuein ke liye.

Hearing this SanLak Leaves the Hall in Anger n they were Unaware that SwaRagini r Presnt in MM n Everyone Bursts out Laughing seeing SanLak's Possessiveness
and Pari n Uttara n SwaRagini too Strts Laughing Seeing SanLak soo Possessive.They Saw everything frm Kitchen.

Flash Bak

While SanLak were talking to themselves abt thiMU Adarsh n Uttara Listens to their Talks ( Adarsh Heard Laksh's Talks n Uttara Heard Sanskaar's Talks ).So after Listening to SanLak's Talks they went AN called Entire Family ( Including GF n SwaRagini ) n made a Plan to Tease SanLak.

DP : Adarsh aisi kya baath hogayi jo tumne aur Uttara ne itni raat ko hume bulaya yaha iss Kamre main aur uper se Shekhar aur unki Family ko bhi Video Call pe bulaya ??

Adarsh n Uttara : ( They strt Laughing ) woh Papa actually SanLak ko na MU hui hai ki SwaRagini Kisi aur se Shaadi karne ke liye ready hogayi hai aur yeh baath dono ko Pagaal karrahi hai.

DP : ohh ..accha toh isiliye woh dono subah se Pershaan hai..hahahaha..itne bade hogaye hai aur abb Shaadi bhi hone ko aayi hai lekin yeh dono abhi bhi baccho ke jaise karkate karte rehte hai.Pagaala hai dono..

RP : Haa Bhaisa sahi kaha aapne..dono na ek No ke Pagaal hai.zara bhi Akhal na hai choro main.hahaha

AP n Sujata : abb bas karo aap sab.humare bechare Bacche pereshaam horahe yeh socch socch ke SwaRagini kisi aur Shaadi karrahe hai aur aap log mazaak uda rahe humare bechare baccho ka.( they also laugh after Saying this n den they all made a plan to tease SanLak ).

Then SwaRagini Thinks abt their Convo with SanLak n understands that Y SanLak were behaving Rude.They Smiles n Goes to their Room.

In SwaRagini Room

Ragini : Hahahahaha Swara..abb Samajh main aaraha hai ki woh dono itna kyoun ghussa aur strange behave karrahe the.

Swara : Lol..Haa Ragini. .sacch main Pagaal hai dono..zara si bhi samjh nhi hai dono ko.itna sab kucg hone ke baad bhi hw cn they think dat ki hum kisi aur se Shaadi karege..

They Laugh at SanLak's Foolishness n goes to Sleep.

Flash Back Ends

Present Time

DP : Hume lagta hai abb bahut hogaya.hume SanLak ko aur pereshaam nhi karna chahiye.

Adarsh : nhi Papa.aur thoda satate hai na.baada maaza aaraha hai undono ko saata ke.hahahhaha

DP : theek Adarsh sirf thodi daer aur.uske baad yeh mazaak band.

Adarsh : Haa Papa ..Paka.aur thodi daer bas uske baad main aur Uttara khud jaake SanLak ko sab kuch bata dege.

All the Elders Leaves frm there goes out fr Shopping n Only Young Generation r left at home i.e Adarsh Pari, Uttara,SanLak n SwaRagini.Then SanLak comes out n sees SwaRagini n gets Angry seeing them .

Sanskaar : Dekho toh Lucky kaise hans rahe hai yeh dono jaise kuch hua hi nhi.hum yahan pagaalo ki tarah pagaal horahe hai yeh socch socch ke ki hum kaise rahege undono ke bina aur yeh dono ko dekho kuch farq hi nhi padhraha ( gives a Angry Look at Swara )

Laksh : Haa Bhai..sahi kehrahe ho tum.mera bhi yehi haal horha hai.main bhi pagaal horaha hu aur yahan Ragini kitni khush hai ( Angry Look to Ragini )

Adarsh Pari Uttara n SwaRagini seeing them n heard SanLak's Convo n were feeling to laugh bt they somehow Controlled their laugh.

Adarsh : Arrey !! SanLak tum dono waha kya karrahe ho.yahan aao na.humari help karo.hum SwaRagini ke shaadi ke liye Wedding Invitation Cards select kaarahe hai.toh tum dono aake help karo na.

SanLak : Woh Actually Bhai.hume kuch kaam ( Adarsh Intreprupts in middle )

Adarsh : Kya Kaam Waam laga rakha hai.tum dono ke Best Frnds ki shaadi hai aur tum dono inki Shaadi ki tayaari karne ke bajai Office ka Kaam karrahe ho.yahan aao..

SanLak had no other Option so they went down n sat near SwaRagini respectively ( Sanskaar near Swara n Laksh near Ragini )

Pari : Haa Toh SwaRagini. Tum dono hi pasand karo ki tumhe kaunsa Design pasand hai. ( Controlled her laugh while saying )

SwaRagini : Woh Bhabhi ( Tries to Blushes )

Swara : woh Bhabhi mere unko aise wale Design pasand hai.

All including Ragini strts Teasing Swara except SanLak coz they were boiling wid Anger n Possessivenes.

Adarsh Pari Uttara n Ragini : Offoo !! Swara unko haa ..


Pari : Abb Ragini tum batao ki tunhare unko kaise design pasand hai ??

Ragini: woh Bhabhi ( tries to Blushes ) unko yeh Design pasand hai.

Pari : Offoo..toh theek hain yeh cards ke desing final kardete hai as tum dono ke unko yeh designs pasand hai na.

SanLak who were seeing all these were boiling with soo much Anger dat they did nt even Realize that the designs wich SwaRagini Selected were actually Their ( SanLak's ) Choice.

After sometime All the Elders comes frm Shopping n sees SanLak in Angry Mood only.

DP : kya Adarsh tum logo ne abhi tak sacch mhi bataya SanLak ko ?? Maine kaha tha zaada daer tak mat karo yeh Mazaak.

SanLak : ( they r confused ) kaunsa sacch Papa,Bade Papa.

All including SwaRagini strts Laughing at their Innocence n Foolishness

Adarsh : Hahahhaha Tum dono kitne bade pagaal ho srsly. ( cnt stop Laughing )

SanLak : Arrey koi toh bataye kya hua kyoun iss tarah has rahe ho aap sab ??

Uttara explains everything n strts laughing agn n hearing this SanLak feels embarrassed n leaves fr their rooms.

Seeing them SwaRagini goes after them to Apologise as they were feeling guilty fr teasing them soo Badly.

SwaSan Scene

Swara enters Sanskaar's Room n sees him standing near his Balcony n Hugs him frm back.

Swara : M Sorry Sanskaar. I knw ki ur feeling Bad n Embarrassed.per tumne yeh soccha bhi kaise ki main kisi aur Shaadi karungi.main mar jaungi Sanskaar per kisi aur se Shaadi kbhi nhi karungi.Swara sirf Sanskaar ki THI,HAI aiy HAMESHA Rahe gi ( she closes her Eyes with Tears n A Drop of Tears Falls on Sanskaar's Palm )

Sanskaar : ( Turns towards Swara n Kisses her forhead ) Ok m Sorry Shona.meri Ghalti hai i knw.mujhe tumpe bharoda rakhna chaiye tha.M Sorry ( Hugs her while tears falls frm his Eyes too n Kisses her Teary eyes too )

Background Song

Chaahe Kuch Na Kehna,Bhale Chup Tu Rehna,Mujhe Hai Pata Tere Pyar Ka,Khamosh Chehra, Aankhon Pe Pehra,Khud Hai Gawaah, Tere Pyar Ka

Teri Jhuki Nazar,Teri Har Ada,Mujhe Keh Rahi Hai Ye Dastaan,Koi Shaqs Hai Jo ki In Dinon,Tere Zhan-O-Dil Pe Hai Chha Gaya,Teri Jhuki Nazar,Teri Har Ada,Mujhe Keh Rahi Hai Ye Dastaan

Jo Kitaabo Me Padhte Rahe aaj Tak
Woh Pari Humko Tujh Mein Nazar Aati Hai...

RagLak Scene

Ragini enters Laksh's Room n sees him standing near his Room's Window n Hugs him frm back.

Ragini : Mujhe Maaf kardijiye Laksh aap..mujhe itna nhi Satana chaiye tha aapko.per aapne yeh soccha bhi kaise ki hum kisi aur Shaadi karege hum mar jayege Laksh per kisi aur se Shaadi kbhi nhi karege . Ragini sirf Laksh ki THI,HAI aur HAMESHA Rahe gi ( she closes her Eyes with Tears n A Drop of Tears Falls on Laksh's Palm )

Laksh : ( turns towards Ragini ) Ragini M Sorry.i knw ki mujhe tumpe trust karna chaiye tha jo maine nhi kiya.M really Sorry Ragini. Bt I Promise ki aaj se i will Trust U hamesha ( he Kisses Ragini's Forehead n her Teary Eyes )

Background Song

Teri Hi Baahon Mein, Panaahon Mein,Rehna Mujhe Hardum Sada
Teri Hi Yaadon Mein, Nigaahon Mein,Rehna Mujhe Har Dum sada
Teri hi Baahon Me, Panaahon Me
Rehna Mujhe Hardum Sada,Hardum Sada

Chaahe Kuch Na Kehna,Bhale Chup Tu Rehna,Mujhe Hai Pata Tere Pyar Ka,Khamosh Chehra, Aankhon Pe Pehra,Khud Hai Gawaah, Tere Pyar Ka

Teri Jhuki Nazar,Teri Har Ada,Mujhe Keh Rahi Hai Ye Dastaan,Koi Shaqs Hai Jo ki In Dinon,Tere Zhan-O-Dil Pe Hai Chha Gaya,Teri Jhuki Nazar,Teri Har Ada,Mujhe Keh Rahi Hai Ye Dastaan...

Precap : SwaSan n RagLak Sangeet Ceremony .

So Guyz this was another Part of Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya. Hope u Liked to see Happy Moments Bak in SwaSan's n Raglak's Life.Do Leave ur Comments in the Comment Box Below :).

#Goldie
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aw dat was a cute update
Finally the boys have understood it's their wedding with swaragini
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww!thy together tease sanlak..
cutee cutee sweet moments..love it.
thnks for pm.cnt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Reading ur ff in fb also. Pls pm me wenever u r updating. Loving ur story.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gayu6

Reading ur ff in fb also. Pls pm me wenever u r updating. Loving ur story.


Thnks alot fr the Appreciation. .ya sure will pm u..add me in ur Buddy List 😊 to send u pm

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Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya

Part 15

Its the Sangeet Day...

SwaRagini are in their Room thinking abt their Future with SanLak . They Keep Smiling n Blushing thinking abt SanLak.Jst then Dida n Dadi comes to SwaRagini's Room to give them their Dresses fr Sangeet ( and Guess wat SwaRagini replies to Dida n Dadi wen they called out their Names :p )

Dida n Dadi : Swara..Ragini. .. ( they enter SwaRagini's Room by calling SwaRagini's Name )

Swara : Haa Sanskaar. .bolo.. ( thinking abt Sanskaar n did nt even Realize it's her Grand Moms )

Ragini : Haa Laksh..Boliye ..kya kaam hai ?? ( thinking abt Laksh n did nt even Realize it's her Grand Moms )

Dida n Dadi r Shocked n Burst Out Laughing..SwaRagini comes in their Senses n realizes wat they did jst nw n Blushes.Then Dadi n Dida hands over SwaRagini their Sangeet Dresses n goes frm their.

In MM

SanLak are also in same situation.Missing n wants to see SwaRagini very badly.They Hardly Can Wait to see their Respective To Be Wives in their Sangeet Dresses.Laksh is in Sanskaar's Room.

Sanskaar : Laksh..sacch kaho.i cnt wait to see Swara in her Sangeet Dress yaar.Dil kehraha hai ki abhi jaake millo usse..

Laksh : Haa Bhai. Mera bhi yehi man karraha hai.toh chale kya ( winks at Sanskaar ).

Sanskaar : ( Winks bak ) Haa toh chalo.

Just then AP n Sujata Enters.

AP n Sujata : Kaha chalne ki baate horaha hai ??

SanLak : Kahi nhi Maa..bas woh toh ( Tensed n Nervous )

AP n Sujata : Jhooth mat bolo.hume pata hai.kaha jaane ki planning horahi thi.khabadar SwaRagini se milne gaye toh.thoda wait karlo phir hume wahi jaana hai ( Holds SanLak's Ears respectively )

SanLak : Aaouucch !! Maa Dard horaha hai ..Accha ok..nhi jayege.abb toh chodo.plzzz Pain Horaha hai.

AP n Sujata Leaves their Ears n Goes frm their after Handing Over their Sangeet Dress.


At Evening..

Sangeet Ceremony

MF Arrives Baadi to attend Sangeet Ceremony.Shomi Welcomes both the Damand n Blesses them . Whereas SanLak was bzy searching fr their To Be Wives.Uttara Notices it n strt Teasing them.

Uttara : Bhaiyyia.Aap dono ko koi kaam nhi kya ..har waqt sirf mere Bhabhiyoo ko dhundtr rehte hai. ( she laughs aftet saying this )

SanLak becomes Embarrassed n Blushes n other Family Members Laughs on their Excitement to meet SwaRagini.

Dadi : Abb Bas bhi karo yej Mazaak aur mere Damando ko kuch nhi kehega.Chalo jaldi Sangeet ke Rasan shuru karte hai.

DP : Haa Parvati Ji.sahi kaha.shuru karte hainRasam.

MF comes inside the Baadi n tells to bring SwaRagini.

AP : Sharmistha Ji. .chaliye Humatr Bahuein ko bulaiye na.

Shomi : Haa AP Ji abhi.jaake leke aati hu undono ko.

Hearing this SanLak becomes Happy.Shomi goes to SwaRagini Room.

Shomi : Swara Ragini. ..chalo Beta..sab niche ( she is stunned to dee her Daughters )

SwaRagini : Haa Maa.hum ready hai.

Shomi : ( Tears falls frm her Eyes ) pata hi nhi chala meri Betiyaan itni khubsurat lagige Shaadi ke Rasmo main.pichle baar tum dono ki Shaadi aise haalaato main hui ki main dono ki Shaadi main tum dono ko accche se dekh pao.

SwaRagini : Abb bas na Maa.hume bhi rulao ge kya. ( Tears strts frm their Eyes too ).

Jst then Shekhar comes n he too getd Stunned seeing SwaRagini bt Somehow controlled his Emotions.

Shekhar : Yeh Kya Shomi..tumhe yaha dono ko bulane ke liye bheja tha lekin yaha toh tum dono ke saath baate karne lagayi. ( tires to control his Tears )

Shomi : ( She Notices da Tears in Shekhar's Eyes n tries to Divert the Topic b4 SwaRagini Notices it ) Haa chalo Shekhar.

Then Shekhar n Shomi brings SwaRagini down n all including SanLak ( Off course :p ) r Stunned seeing dem in Beautiful Sangeet Dresses.Swara was Wearing a Light Pink Colour Lehenga with White Colour Combined and Ragini with Light Cream Colour Kehenga with Light Blue Color Mix along with some Jewellery worn by Both.

Sanskaar is Stunned n his Mouth Opened n singals Swara abt her Beauty.Swarq Blushes n Same thing Done by Laksh n Ragini.

AP n Sujata : Bahut sunder lagrahi ho tum dono Kisi ki Nazar na lage tum dono ko ( den both MIL applies Kala Tikka to SwaRagini )

DP : Abb aap Ladies ka Tarif waqeera khtm hogayi hai toh Sangeet Ceremony shuru kare ??

All Ladies laughs n makes SwaRagini sit with their Respective To Be Hubbies i.e Swara with Sanskaar n Ragini with Laksh.

Sangeet Ceremony Strts and First Performance is by SanLak ( it was a Surprise fr SwaRagini )

Kabse Aaye Hain Tere Dulhe Raja
Ab Der Na Kar Jaldi Aaja

Tere Ghar Aaya Main Aaya Tujhko Lene,Tere Ghar Aaya Main Aaya Tujhko Lene,Dil Ke Badle Mein Dil Ka Nazraana Dene,Meri Har Dhadkan Kya BoZle Hai,

Sun Sun Sun

Saajanji Ghar Aaye Hay
Saajanji Ghar Aaye
Dulhan Kyon Sharmaaye Hay
Saajanji Ghar Aaye...

SwaRagini r Shocked seeing SanLak Performing bt are Happy at the same tym n Blushes too.

Then Pari AP Sujata n Uttara comes to Join SanLak with the Performance.

Ay Dil Chalega Abb Na Koi Bahaana
Gori Ko Hoga Ab Saajan Ke Ghar Jaana,
Maathe Ki Bindiya Kya Bole Hai

Sun Sun Sun

Saajanji Ghar Aaye Hay
Saajanji Ghar Aaye
Dulhan Kyon Sharmaaye Hay
Saajanji Ghar Aaye...

Then SwaRagini Joins the Performance.

Deewane Ki Chaal Mein
Phas Gayi Main Is Jaal Mein
Ay Sakhiyon Kaise Bolo Bolo ...

Then agn SanLak Joins for Performance n makes SwaRagini Jealous. .

Mujhpe To Aye Dilruba
Teri Sakhiyaan Bhi Fida
Ye Bolengi Kya Poochho
Poochho..

Agn SwaRagini in reply toh SanLak's Lines.

Ja Re Ja Jhoothe,
Tareefein Kyon Hai Loote,
Hay Ja Re Ja Jhoothe
Tareefein Kyon Hai Loote...

Then AP Sujata n Uttara n Pari Joins agn with SanLak n SwaRagini. .

Tera Mastana Kya Bole Hai
Sun Sun Sun

Saajanji Ghar Aaye Hay,
Saajanji Ghar Aaye,Dulhan Kyon Sharmaaye Hay,
Saajanji Ghar Aaye...

SwaRagini Continues

Na Samjhe Nadaan Hai,Ye Mera Ehsaan Hai,Chaahe Jo Isko Keh Do
Keh Do...

SanLak Continues..

Chhede Muhko Jaan Ke,
Badle Mein Ehsaan Ke,
De Diya Dil Isko Keh Do
Keh Do...

Swaragini Continues remembering all da Bad things Happened in Past n Tears Falls frm their Eyes..

Tu Ye Na Jaane Dil Toote Bhi Deewane,Tu Ye Na Jaane Dil Toote Bhi Deewane..

SanLak n Other Ladies i.e AP Sujata n Uttara n Pari Joins agn to Cheer SwaRagini

Tera Deewana Kya Bole Hai

Sun Sun Sun

Saajanji Ghar Aaye Hay,Saajanji Ghar Aaye,Dulhan Kyon Sharmaaye Hay,Saajanji Ghar Aaye...


Then Dadi Dida n Shomi Joins the Performance with Tears in their Eyes n sees at SwaRagini

Mehndi Laake Gehne Paake
Gehne Paake Hay Roke Tu Sabko Rulaake ,
Savere Tu Jaayegi Tu Bada Yaad Aayegi,Tu Bada Yaad Aayegi Yaad Aayegi...

All three Ladies Hugs SwaRagini n Cries n SwaRagini too Cries.Just then SanLak n Entire Family Joins to Cheer SwaRagini n the Three Ladies i.e Dida Dadi n Shomi.

Tere Ghar Aaya Main Aaya Tujhko Lene,
Tere Ghar Aaya Main Aaya Tujhko Lene,
Dil Ke Badle Mein Dil Ka Nazraana Dene,
Meri Har Dhadkan Kya BoZle Hai,

Sun Sun Sun

Saajanji Ghar Aaye Hay
Saajanji Ghar Aaye
Dulhan Kyon Sharmaaye Hay
Saajanji Ghar Aaye...

The Entire GF n MF Dances Happily n Enjoys Sangeet Ceremony While SwaSan n RagLak too Dances bt Stares at eachithers Eyes too.

The End !!!

Precap : SwaSan Romance Haldi n Mehendi Ceremony ...

Done wid Another Part of Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya. Hope U Enjoyed the Sangeet Ceremony of SwaSan RagLak :p.Do Leave ur Comments in the Comment Box Below :).

#Goldie

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