FanFiction Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya SwaSan/RagLak Part23 Updated (Pg26) - Page 13

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Sparkler8 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bookmarked..
Just started reading.. the 8 months leap is going to keep me hooked.. sure of that. Will comment as I complete reading each part.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Bookmarked..

Just started reading.. the 8 months leap is going to keep me hooked.. sure of that. Will comment as I complete reading each part.😊


Thnks fr reading my ff..n yes sure n will wait fr ur comments 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 1

Looks promising.😊

Swara and Sanskaar had the same dream..👏

Ragini and Laksh also seem to be on a better terms. Not really sure what triggered their divorce. But i will read the next updates for the answer.

Thank you for the pm and index. Really helps!

Cheers
Sharon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 2

Awesome!!

Laksh acts like he is angry with Ragini and yes there's a back story. But he still cant forget her. Good going with RagLak!

SwaSan cafe convo was very sweet filled with hesitation and happiness. They met after so long and Sanskaar has offered to drop her at airport. I loved how Swara ne Mr.Mehra ka band bajaaya.. i really pity Mr.Mehra😆

Hmm.. it thought GF is well to do family.. they still live at Baadi??

Anyway Thanks for the pm.. and i will continue reading!😃

Cheers
Sharon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Part 2


Awesome!!

Laksh acts like he is angry with Ragini and yes there's a back story. But he still cant forget her. Good going with RagLak!

SwaSan cafe convo was very sweet filled with hesitation and happiness. They met after so long and Sanskaar has offered to drop her at airport. I loved how Swara ne Mr.Mehra ka band bajaaya.. i really pity Mr.Mehra😆

Hmm.. it thought GF is well to do family.. they still live at Baadi??

Anyway Thanks for the pm.. and i will continue reading!😃

Cheers
Sharon


Haa they still live in Baadi..doesnt mean if they r rich they live in big bunglows n all..so they r still living in Bunglow.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved their sangeet n their dream sequence. Awesome.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thnks alot Guyz fr Liking my Sangeet n SwaSan Part.Here is thr Mehendi Ceremony Part.Hope u Will Like this too 😊.

Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya

Part 17

SwaSan Brk the EyeLock Hearing Sujata coming near to Sanskaar's Room.They get Scared n dnt understand wat to do..So Sanskaar went to WashRoom n Swara Pretended to Comb her Hair n getting Ready fr Mehendi.

Sujata : Chori...Tayaar na hui ke..chal jaldi sab intezaar karrahe hai thara..

Swara : ( Tensed n Nervous ) Haa Mom..ready hu.chaliye..

Sujata : Haan Chal.

Swara n Sujata left the Room bt B4 Leaving Swara turned to Washroom n Singaled Sanskaar n Gave a Flying Kiss..Sanskaar Noticed n Gave a Flying Kiss Back n Smiled Bak n Whereas Swara Blushed n Went to Hall fr Mehendi Ceremony.

RagLak Scene

Laksh comes inside his Room n Saw Ragini getting ready n Drying Her Wet Hairs.Then Suddenly Ragini's moves her Hand bak to Tie her Lehenga's Dori,Bt she is nt Able to Tie it.

Ragini : ( Tying her Dori ) Offoo !! Yeh Dori bhi na..Bandhe bhi nhi jarahi mujhse.Sab wait karrahe honge aur Laksh bhi kabhi bhi aate honge ( she Blushes thinking wat if Laksh Comes n Sees Her )

Laksh Understood wat Ragini is Thinking and Went Near Ragini n Helped her Tying her Dori . Ragini felt his Touched n got Shocked.

Ragini : ( Shocked ) Laakksh !! Aap yaha ?? Jaiye yaha se.koi dekhlega toh..acchi baath nhi hongi.

Laksh : Toh kya ?? Dekh lene do.main apni hone wali Wife ke saath ho.kisi aur Ladki ke saath thodi hu ( Romantically Tells her this )

Ragini : Wohi toh Laksh..Hone wali.hui nhi hu..toh abb Jaiye ( Blushes )

Laksh : ( Angry ) toh theek hai jaaraha hu..

Ragini : ( Feels Hurt coz he is Angry,so she holds his Hands wen he qas abt to Leave ) Arrey Baba..Sorry..Naraaz mat ho aap . aur waise agr aap chalegaye toh Meri Dori kaun Bandhega ( Winked while Looking at Laksh )

Laksh Got Happy n Went Near Ragini n Turned her Towards Mirror n Tied her Dori n Kissed her Shoulder . Ragini Felt his Touch n Closed her Eyes n Blushed n Holded her Lehenga Tightly in her Hands.

Haan Hum Badalne Lage
Girne Sambhalne Lage
Jab Se Hai Jaana Tumhein
Teri Ore Chalne Lage...

Then Laksh Notices Ragini Holding her Lehenga Tightly n Her Eyes Closed.So He Tuned Ragini to Himself n Took her One Palm in hid N Kissed her Palm n Then Kissed her Closed Eyes.

Haan Hansi Ban Gaye
Haan Nami Ban Gaye
Tum Mere Aasmaan
Meri Zameen Ban Gaye...

Then They have a Eyelock n Keeps Staring at Eachother Continously with Romance in their Eyes.

Pehchaante Hi Nahi Ab Log Tanha Mujhe
Meri Nigaahon Mein Bhi Hai Dhoondte Wo Tujhe
Hum the Dhoondhte Jisey Wo Kami Ban Gaye
Tum Mere Ishq Ki Sar-Zameen Ban Gaye...

Jst then they Heard AP coming to take Ragini fr Mehendi Function.They Brk their Eyelock n gets Tensed wat to do.Then Laksh Immediately went to Balcony n Hides there.

AP : Raginiii Beta..ready ho toh Chale neeche..Sab wait karrahe hai Mehendi Ceremony ke liye.Swara bhi aagayi Tayaar honge.

Ragini : Haa Maa..hogaya.chaliye..hum ready hai.

AP n Ragini Leaves the Room n while Leaving Ragini Blushes by Seeing Laksh as Laksh was giving her Flying Kiss . Ragini was Bzy Blushing n was feeling Shy to Give him a Flying Kiss Bak so she Left the Room while Blushing.Laksh Smiled at Her Blushness n went to Sanskaar's Room where Adarsh was Presnt alrdy.

Laksh : Bhai. Sunoo.. ( sees Adarsh ) offoo !! Bade Bhai aap bhi hai yaha pe.

Adarsh : Haa Laksh Hum bhi hai yaha pe.koi Plan Wlan tha kya nichr jaane ka ( Teases Laksh )

Laksh : Nhi Bhai..aisa waisa kuch nhi hai.

Sanskaar n Adarsh looked at eachother in Amazement dat How Laksh is nt Eager to go down.Then They both strtd Laughing and den Laksh also Joined them Laughing.

In Hall

Mehendi Ceremony strtd n SwaRagini were applied Mehendi while they were Applying Mehendi they thought of their Recent Romance Respectively . Then Mehendi Desinger asked SwaRagini something.

Mehendi Designer : Kiska Naam likho aapke Mehendi main ??

SwaRagini : ( Blushes ) SanLak ka..

Uttara : Haaye Aaye ..kya sharma rahi hai meri Bhabhiyaan..Tamate jaise Laal horahi hai.

AP n Sujata : Abb bas bhi karo Uttara.jab dekho jab sate rahti ho apne Bhaiyaa aur Bhabhiyoo ko.kuch kaam waam bhi karliya karo zara.

Uttara : offoo !! Aap dono bhi na..yehi toh mauka hota hai chedna ka.toh isiliye chedte rehti ho main apne Bhai aur Bhabhiyoo ko.

SwaRagini Blushes n SanLak Notices it frm Upstairs.

Sanskaar : Laksh yeh Ladiyaan hamesha Blush hi kyoun karti rehti hai. I mean jab bhi maine fekha hai.Swara hamesha Blush hi karti rehti hai

Laksh : Haa Bhai. Mujhe bhi samjh main nhi aata.kyoun Girls itna Blush karti rehti hai

Adarsh : ohh Hello sirf Ladiyaan hi nhi Sharmate tum dono bhi itna hi sharmate ho.

SanLak : nhi Bhai hum nhi sharmate.

Adarsh : Accha yaad dilaaon ki kab kab tum dono ke chehre Laal hue the ( Teasing )

SanLak : Nhi..hume nhi jaana..( Nervous )

Adarsh Laughs at SanLak's Nervousness.

In Hall Back

AP : accha baba..aab chedti hi rahungi ya Nachna Wachba nhi hai kya aaj ??

Uttara n Pari : Oops !! Hum bhul hi gaye..abhi shuru karte hai.

SanLak getd an Idea to meet SwaRagini.

As Pari n Uttara were abt to strt the Dance.SanLak made their Entry with Adarsh ( Off Course jab Dono Chote Bhaiyaan Cn Enter the Mehendi Ceremony den Y Nt Bade Bhaiyya fr his Wife :p ).

SanLak n Adarsh Dance.

Ye Kudiyaan Nashe Di Pudiyaan...

SwaRagini Pari n All Ladies r shocked seeing the Trio Maheshwari Brothers..

Then Pari n Uttara Replied to their Lines.

Ye Munde Gali De Gunde...

The Trio Maheshwari Brothers Lines..

Ye Kudiyaan Nashe Di Pudiyaan...

Agn Pari n Uttara Replied to their Lines.

Ye Munde Gali De Gunde..


Then SanLak Came in Front. .

Mehndi Laga Rakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna
Mehndi Laga Rakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna
Lene Tujhe O Gori
Aayenge Tere Sajna...

Swaragini Keeps Blushing n They Strting Dancing n Replied to SanLak's Lines...

Sahra Sajake Rakhna
Chehra Chhupake Rakhna
Sahra Sajake Rakhna
Chehra Chhupake Rakhna
Yeh Dil ki Baat Apne
Dil Mein Dabake Rakhna..

Then the Trio Maheshwari Brothers Lines.

Mehndi Laga Rakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna

Adarsh Comes in Front while SanLak r back Dancing..

Ud Udke Teri Zulfein
Karti Hain Kya Ishaare
Dil Thaamke Khade Hain
Aashiq Sabhi Kanware..

Pari comes while Blushing to reply Adarsh while SwaRagini n Uttara r back Dancing..

Chhup Jaayein Saari Kudiyaan
Ghar Mein Saare Sharamke Maare
Gaanv Mein Aa Gaye Hain
Paagal Shehar Ke Saare...

SwaRagini n Pari are Blushing while Staring at their Respective Partners n the Trio Maheshwari Brothers Smiles looking their respective Wives Blushing..And rest of the Guests n Ladies Enjoys the Dance.

Then Boys Continues. .

Nazrein Jhukake Rakhna
Daaman Bachake Rakhna
Nazrein Jhukake Rakhna
Daaman Bachake Rakhna
Lene Tujhe O Gori
Aayenge Tere Sajna

Mehndi Laga Rakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna...

Then Girls Continues...

Sahra Sajake Rakhna
Chehra Chhupake Rakhna...

Then Sanskaar Comes in Front while Laksh n Adarsh Dancing Back..

Main Ek Jawaan Ladka
Tu ek Haseen Ladki
Ye Dil Machal Gaya Toh
Mera Kusoor Kya Hai...

Swara comes in Front Replying Sanskaar's Lines n Ragini Pari n Uttara were Dancing Back..

Rakhna Tha Dil Pe Kaabu
Ye Husn Toh Hai Jaadu
Jaadu Hi Chal Gaya To
Mera Kusoor Kya Hai...

Now Laksh Comes in Front whereas Sanskaar n Adarsh are Dancing Back..

Rasta Hamara Takna
Darwaaza Khula Rakhna
Rasta Hamara Takna
Darwaaza Khula Rakhna
Lene Tujhe O Gori
Aayenge Tere Sajna...

Ragini Blushes and comes to Reply Laksh...

Kuchh Aur Ab Na Kehna
Kuchh Aur Ab Na Karna
Kuchh Aur Ab Na Kehna
Kuchh Aur Ab Na Karna
Yeh Dil Ki Baate Apne
Dil Mein Dabake Rakhn...

The Trio Maheshwari Brothers Continues while Enjoying...

Mehndi Laga Rakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna...

Then Girls Continues while Enjoying. ..

Sahra Sajake Rakhna
Chehra Chhupake Rakhna...

Then DP Dadaji n Shekhar Comes in middle n Sings a Song Leaving AP Dadi n Shomi Shocked n Stunned along with Other Family Members. .

Aey Meri Zohar Zabi
Aey Meri Zohar Zabi
Tuje Malum Nahi
Tu Abi Tak Hein Hasi
Aur Main Jawaan
Tujpe Kuruban Meri jJan
Meri Jaan

Aey Meri Zohar Zabi...

All the Three Old Ladies i.e AP Dadi n Shomi were Blushing..

Then all the Family Members Enjoyed Dancing n Enjoying Full Heartedly...

Boys Singing while Enjoying. ..

Mehndi Laga Rakhna
Doli Saja Ke Rakhna...

Girls Continues while Enjoying. ..

Sahra Sajake Rakhna
Chehra Chhupake Rakhna...

Shava Hoyyi.. Goyyi.. Hoyyi..

Everyone are Dancing Full Heartedly and the Three Couples i.e Pari Adarsh,SwaSan n RagLak Dancing bt Stares in eachothers Eyes too Romantically.

The End !!!

Precap : Ruthna Manana :p

Done wid Another Part of Jaadoo Yeh Kya Chalgaya. Hope U Enjoyed the Mehendi Ceremony of SwaSan RagLak :p.Do Leave ur Comments in the Comment Box Below :).

#Goldie
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read the update from part no 14,,
Loved all the part..

Beautiful work...
Wonderful song selection..
Wonderful romance between the couple..

Great..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Read the update from part no 14,,

Loved all the part..

Beautiful work...
Wonderful song selection..
Wonderful romance between the couple..

Great..
Continue soon..


Thnks fr the Compliment 😊.ya will continue soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow!beautiful.
love ths musical journey..
why prcp is ruthna manana...waiting waiting.

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