Trial By Fire- A SwaSan 3 Shot - Page 6

Originally posted by: sarchanu

loved it please update fast

Originally posted by: Purbishona

Shruti, amazing one..
Loved the first part..
You gave us a kissy woh bhi real wala.. Magical..
Its so sweet..
Plz update soon.
I wanna read the next parts..
Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Loved it tooo much Shruti!!
Awesome first kiss
This reminds of Fearless by Taylor Swift!
It's so alike and lovely!!
Do update soon
*Waiting and waiting*

Originally posted by: harshsriti

Shuru.. Congratulations dear.. you became Rockers na.. and I think I'm not anyone to comment on your TS.. you are a brilliant writer dear.. I don't know what to say about this. such an Excellent work. . one think I loved most do you know what? you compare laksji and ragini with snake and snake charmer na.. that is epic.. no other words suits him than this.. swasan moments you described magically.. seriously I don't have words dear. write more dear.. you are one of the wonderful writers in the forum. . waiting for the next parts.. .. love you dear..

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Congrats my dear on your new status in the forum...well deserved for the monumental work...!

Have been away for awhile but am totally floored with this TS...it's just the beginning...you have stopped with a cliff hanger, I have started biting my nails (come to think of it, I used to do so, whenever I watched Revenge - an American serial aired on StarWorld)...

Gosh, the way you have written the portion of Sanskar and Swara kissing...it was akin to actual feelings of 2 souls...the tentativeness, the attentiveness, the intuitiveness of the whole scene is beyond my ability to praise...thank you for writing down...loved it!

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Amazing. ..so beautifully written and the progress of swasan relation...the kiss came so naturally into the equation. ... but what happened after tht to create a distance btwn the 2???

Cant wait fr the next part

Originally posted by: Anglaise

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!
SUPERB.. NAILED IT..
Plz update soon.
such a wonderfull piece.. favb

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Superb...waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: foresight

👏 ...i like where this is going. I alway feel that that is the next step Laksh will take, lie to the family and malign Swara in the hopes of getting her back. you have portrayed in and woven in the kidnaping really well. waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Really mind blowing first part shruti😃

I loved the way Sanskaar wooed her and made Swara long for his love😳

Loved the kiss..it was ohh my godd..purely magical☺️

Ragini Lakshya as usual plotting and planning🤢

Swasan chemistry in this story is much better than in our show..😃

i am dying to read the next part..😳

and what happened between Swasan..😭 why was swara crying..ragini and lakshya became successful kya?