Trial By Fire- A SwaSan 3 Shot - Page 12

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

@ part 3

"Each being the only balm that would work on the other" such a beautiful line 👏

I want show swara to pine for sanskaar as much as yours did! And you almost made me feel sorry for her. She is stupid no doubt but when someone questions a woman's character, especially an innocent like swara, I cannot enjoy it whether the woman has earned it or not.

Laksh and ragini need to be weeded out completely from swasans life. I am surprised sanskaar agreed to let them go. No one wants to bring in the police in family matters, but when family members are criminals what choice does one have? And what exactly would be DPs solution?

Great work shruti. You weaved in the kidnapping, laksh and raginis planning everything quite perfectly. Laksh is disgusting and finally no better than ragini...actually he is worse than her 🤢

Originally posted by: swa291

You made me fall in love with sanskar over and over ...

I really loved the first part ki pehla wala kiss ... I can imagine them together . Chandini raat balcony ...awww

Then 2nd and 3rd parts... Well in serial too i really want sanskar to tell the mm wasis that he and his swara us out of the mental mahal for good.

Am not surprissed ki lakshya wont corrobrate swara as he want sanskr to think swara loves not his pati but him.. well she have also done a good Job in making it look that way so couldnt have blamed sanskar even if he also mistrusted her. But he didnt ...

And dectative sanskar ki kahani bhi bahout achi di but best part was there nighr at the aparment an not going in details but i loved it to core...

And his dicission of not to stay at MM should be there for sometime ... Sab cheez ki limit hoti hai aur its getting too much...

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

I don't have the words to tell you how brilliantly parts 2 & 3 were written!

Although reading about SwaSan's pain was heart rending, I kenw it was necessary for Swara to gain some sense so was able to bear it. I fell in love with Sanskaar more (if that's even possible) after reading part 2! How can anyone be so so so... It is so like him to trust Swara despite of all the evidence against her! He behaves exactly like someone who proclaims to love you should behave (unlike someone else we know).

Sanskaar's plan was brilliant and I sometimes wonder how he was born in such a family as Maheshwaris...

Loved how Uttara visited Swara at the baadi and encouraged her to fight for her love. It gives a glimpse into the future bond between the two.

And their reunion... I did not expect that it would go down that route ☺️, the most I was expecting was some kisses.

That twist with Lakshya was very unexpected. I did not think he would become so deranged that he would stoop to the level of forcing himself on Swara! I really would like to know what punishment DP is going to give him in exchange for not pressing charges! I hope its a very cruel one!

I absolutely loved that SwaSan went back to the apartment instead of staying at the Maheshwari Mansion. That apartment kinda feels like their home now.

Is there a scope for a sequel to this TS in the future once you have recovered from this?

I am really looking forward to reading more SwaSan fics written by you and I am now going to reread this TS!

Originally posted by: a_uma

beautiful part 3.. loved the way how swara took uttara's advice and went to sanskar.. took the initiative and confessed her love.. 👏👏👏 .. as for Laksh no words.. he is as delusional as Ragini..

Originally posted by: Vaibhi.

I loved each and every word of this story .

I am in dreamland now, the way you created Sanskar Maheswari's character I am speechless.

Sanskar is exactly doing here all those necessary things we want to see him doing on the show , his instincts working perfectly , he can sense the evil planning of Ragini and Lakshya, and ready to bear the pain of separation only for Swara's safety , aww our sanskar 👏

Their romantic part is just ☺️ so well written , I have read that part 5 times ☺️ their union of souls written in your magical words , enough to make my Sunday a complete happy one

Thank you for this awesome work , thanks for the PM also

Originally posted by: Sakura24

I knew that bitter dose would be followed by sweet honey! And I was right!! Can I hug you for that awesome punch your Sanskar decided to throw at Lakshya? I was literally dancing there. The moment he reduced to force I muttered to myself now Sanskar would come and you're gone! Exactly!

So now DP would take a decision on Ragya? Good, he is worse than prison and police can ever be. And SwaSan finally safe and in each other's arms, away from the Mad MM! Thank god!

I always enjoy your retelling to current tracks and this one has a special place in my heart. Marvelous work Shru, thank you for writing this!

Originally posted by: manasie23

Shruti this is such an amazing piece I could read it a thousand times...
Seriously I loved it but the you descrived their love making scene reminded me of our good ol' hindi movies you know where two flowers meeting signifies love making.
But as much I want to believe that such turn of events could make Swara confess her love I cant she is such a slow person moving at snail's pace that seperation might only make her realise her feelings...
But Shru thank you for writing this I sooo wish all this could come true but we know cv's they have no originality left

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

i cnt tell how much i love ths..

yayy!swara went to sanskar & confessed...

thr passonate kiss followed by thr love is a treat to read...

sanskar had a plan to expose psychos.

&i hv no words for tht cheap...yuck!bt a special thnks to shw sanskar punched him...

love love love it...

sanskar valued swara's slf respect also & move out 4m mm to his apartmnt...

away 4m all tensions...only both of thm to thr love filled world..

love it.