Elixir SwaSan SS complete - Page 9

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Really well written update!! Im loving the way you are weaving the story.

When you lose one of your senses, your other senses are always heightened. You described Shai's sense of touch and her intuition really well. So she knows about kavita too.

Swara's confusion and Sanskaar's misery was brilliantly written. Forgetting a person doesn't mean that you can erase every emotion, early moment you felt for him because it all those moments still exists but you just have no memory of it. So swara still feels his love, she resurfaced from the confines of her mind because she saw his eyes urging her to do so. She doesnt remember him yet she can feel the effect he has on her. Her mind has forgotten him yet her heart hasnt. Looking forward to see how her heart will overpower her mind.

Even though I never liked Ragini, I always admired Ragini's intelligence. She is wasting her intelligence on Laksh. She would have been heading a Business empire, had she put her skills to good use. And I love your Ragini too. She has set the battle ground and made her first move. But will she surpass her teacher in his own game? I am hoping swara would be the trump card here.

And Laksh is a pathetic and a desperate person 🤢

Originally posted by: princess_tara

superb

Brilliant update! Well worth the wait!

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Saku...Saku...my dear...😊 You have a glorious talent for strewing amazing little gems through your chapters, and each time I read certain sentences of yours, I start smiling to myself at the sheer magic of the words.

My personal favorites form this chapter were:

""I've heard many love stories, helped and wrote many too, but never had I lived a love story as I have lived yours.'...

But you warned me, that if I lived too long with venom I might contaminate elixir as well.'...

She came to heal me, I wound her far worse.' He started slowly. She had become my bliss when I realized I was her agony.'

I wanted to set her free Shai. I wanted to let her go.' His voice almost choked. But... But destiny has banished her back to me. As empty as I am without her.'""

There's that amazing duality again, which you had portrayed so well about Yashodara in SQ, where you'd compared her to mercury--beautiful, yet deadly. Deadly not because of herself, but because of her effect on others. Both boon and curse. 😊

Lovely touch. As you can see, I am a big fan of exploring such dualities and apparently self contradicting statements (which are, curiously enough, both true, if viewed at from different angles). 😊

I loved that moving, heartrending last para, too. For more of the apparent self contradictory statements, 😊 ""Now I have to keep her around me, but not go closer to her, not fall in love with her when she would question me why I don't. ...I'll have hold that gaze of hers, that deems me the prince of her fairy tale knowing she would soon recall what a monster I've been to her.""

Yikes, Ragini is as cold, as conniving and as Machiavellian here as she was in IK & SQ, and on the serial. Thoroughly, shudderingly evil, and yet oddly, spine chillingly fascinating...

As for Lakshya, the less said, the better. At a time when the love of his life is in a critical condition, struggling to regain her health and memory, he still feels insecure and jealous enough to think of competing with Sanskaar for her affections. Man, he doesn't deserve Swara. He doesn't even deserve Ragini, for that matter...😛

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Brilliant update! Well worth the wait!

I can't believe... Actually scrap that, I can believe that Ragini can do something like this!

I am very curious about the backstory of this SS! If Swaragini are not sisters, how did the Lakshya angle come about?

Lakshya 🤢 Swara is critical and he only care abaout SwaSan coming closer? And that promise he made Sanskaar do!🤬

Now because of that stupid promise Sanskaar will stay away from Swara!

Will Swara try to get closer to Sanskaar becuase she doesn't remember the whole divorce drama? I really hope so!

Can't wait for the next update!

Let Sanskar give a slap to Ragya plz or answer them in such a way that they realise who they are standing against and see d depth of love he has for Swara.. Sanksar, break the promise you made to Lakshya.. he is an ass who is clearly obsessed over ur wife.. I have js one query, in ur Ff is it that swara still believes that she loves Lakshya or something, as even AP said tht "lakshya n swara both were goin to start over" or is it just another insanity..

I am damn sure,Swara will fall in love wid sanskar.. A lil request, dont hurt him a lil too much here.. I wish to see him happy 😳 Rest in ur hands..

Lovely update once again.. Continue soon 😃

compilcated but sooo thrilling and exciting...cont soon

Excellent update

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Let Sanskar give a slap to Ragya plz or answer them in such a way that they realise who they are standing against and see d depth of love he has for Swara.. Sanksar, break the promise you made to Lakshya.. he is an ass who is clearly obsessed over ur wife.. I have js one query, in ur Ff is it that swara still believes that she loves Lakshya or something, as even AP said tht "lakshya n swara both were goin to start over" or is it just another insanity..

I am damn sure,Swara will fall in love wid sanskar.. A lil request, dont hurt him a lil too much here.. I wish to see him happy 😳 Rest in ur hands..

Lovely update once again.. Continue soon 😃